just read all parts now... so our guesses were right na?😉
and dont get me wrong,i very well understood that
you were trying to keep up the surprise
by telling us that "our guesses are not right,keep
waiting...guess more...etc...😉"
i know you are the biggest teaser i had known yet😆
and coming to the updates...
awsome as usual...
the way shlok refused to get intimate with her even in his
subconscious mind...
the way astha said he is making me fall for him more
just touched
now they regain their friendship
its just a mask for both...
for their individual self,
their feelings for each other had reached beyond love
to a stage of pure divinity...
you know when our teachers ake us to the oncology dept
my mind always become numb
when all patients of other wards lie there with a new hope
these people lay there tear drained..their hopes gradually
fading to nothingness...
however doctors assure them of hope
the nearness of the word "death" makes rest part of their
life like "living like a dead body"-there is life
but no emotions,hope,happiness..
all become blurred...
iam extremely sorry dear..got overboard
iam a sensitive person
this story is close to my heart
i still requesting you for a happy ending
i want a strong shlok fighting his fate for astha
instead og giving up...
may be he doesnt show it to the world
but mental i want him to fight for his love...
and their hug was so ethereal
the way you showed their povs
just heart touching...
But for one moment
time gave pause
to a lover's lost bouquet
Fragrance of the past
whimsical whiff of essence
takes me back to you
Like opiate memories
escape the distant mist
a tear drops in silence...
Lying alone and shedding tears..
Have you heard the song of my heart,
which is melting in a useless dream
Gazing at the half closed door
of my life,my hopes...
still dreaming of you...my love
Still dreaming of you
o my beloved ...
entwined in your memories...
From where i wish
i want no seperation
until my last breath...
WITH LOT OF LOVE
LECHU
i dont know when i would be able to comment next.
so i took extra long time to give you this comment😊
but whole hearty wishes for your coming updates🤗🤗
Edited by -LECHU- - 11 years ago
Anupamaa
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