#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136)

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sonia

@lachii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1011

lovely update...and precap...omg...cant wait !!!

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maivelli

@maivelli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1012

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thanks a lot dear.teaser in new thread...

for sure 😊

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1013

Originally posted by: niki795
awesome update
loved it
so shlok finally kept his promise and joined his dads office and taking medicines properly..
shlok and aashka friendship increasing day by day...nice

Whenever Astha felt low due to mood swings of Pregnancy.., she needed her Shlok...she wanted to keep her head on shlok's shoulder, wanted to hold him, wanted to hug him tight...but she knew it is not possible yet...More than Shlok, it was getting difficult for her to manage these days... For Shlok, she was Aashka just a friend... he had his limits as a friends, he never even touched her... But for Astha, he was his love, his life...at nights when she was with him, sometimes she wanted to crush herself into him... weakness of human nature...all want to be touched by their loved ones...but she could not, then she used to caress her stomach caressing her baby...and smiled with tears...just few days baby, then we will be completely with your papa...

this one is really nice part... Loved astha's feelings ,,,,, her mood swings and all
its difficult for her to hide everything to her//his love
then the flash bAck part is good
the last part is awesome
astha came to visit shlok 😲
but I'm thinking its shlok 's dream... My guess... But I think its not right guess😆
continue soon

now I want teaser soon😉

Hey the part you quoted is my personal favorite too...ya its getting more difficult for her to hide her feelings...lets see...but just one more month to go...
Actually i thought of it just at midnight...you know...😉
but thats true part...
moreover, its not a dream.she is actually here...
teaser... umm..lets see...

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naina..

@naina..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1014

Shlok used to tell her old stories of Astha and his and Astha was smiling listening all those form his point of view...sometime smiling, sometimes, with tears...

awww though the situations are not so good but all these moments are goin to make their bond of love stronger

Whenever Astha felt low due to mood swings of Pregnancy.., she needed her Shlok...she wanted to keep her head on shlok's shoulder, wanted to hold him, wanted to hug him tight...but she knew it is not possible yet...More than Shlok, it was getting difficult for her to manage these days...

all want to be touched by their loved ones...but she could not, then she used to caress her stomach caressing her baby...and smiled with tears...just few days baby, then we will be completely with your papa...

poor astha ,just one month left n u il be together... its hard to imagine how shlok il react after knowing about her pregnancy ,but i wana see the happiness in his eyes for his child n his love astha after he calms down...a complete family as he always wished for...😊

n when shlok said

Shlok smiled on listening...truly speaking, I need something, but can't get...

Let me know, maybe I will be able to provide you...Astha smiled...

I need my Astha... he sighed... a tear rolled over Astha's eye listening...she immediately wanted to move ahead and hug him...but had to control herself...

You are missing her very badly these days?

Shlok nodded in yes... One month has passed, I didn't see her, every night she is in my dreams, my arms...i feel her but I want to see her in front of me... He closed his eyes...

(Astha wanted to remove her burqa immediately and tell him...look your Astha in front of you...she was here only always...for every moment...)

he made it more tough for astha to control...

but all I need is my Astha...just I know, how my one month has passed by now...sometimes I think, if this was my future, why god made me fall in so much love with her? Was not I happy alone?

May be God has decided something else for you , yet you yourself are unknown to that... Astha pressed his hand...

Now what? Nothing can go fine in just six months... I just wish...once I meet my Astha...i want to take her in my arms once again, I want to feel her...saying he covered his face with his palms...while Astha could not take any more and ran outside...

there is a surprise for u shlok ur wish n astha does not fulfill it , how can dis happen...😊

I loved the flashback part...fifth time!😆 u r just like my astha , no you are not like her... ha.. ha..

n it was heart touching whan astha said

Shlok... Astha whispered slowly...yes, your love make me forget my pain, and then why could not my love make you forget everything?

hope he allows astha to take care of him , he should realize astha can never be happy without him,he is right at his place but he is taking away her right worrying about her future...

who says one needs to get married to feel complete , they are committed not merely in words but from soul...

lovely story jeenia,

il be waiting for monday's update...

love u

Edited by naina.. - 11 years ago

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1015

Originally posted by: niki795
unres ed my comment

un resed my part too...😊

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1016

Originally posted by: Anusha16

yep had my brunch dear... so next update on monday huh???

😭

two more days...TWO MORE DAYS!!!!

yes, update on Monday...but if teaser is required...ok romantic one and not a dream...then in new thread...

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1017

Originally posted by: lachii
lovely update...and precap...omg...cant wait !!!

Precap? that will be yet by evening./...
Thnaks a lot dear...

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latha_555

@latha_555

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1018

every second line i feel like jumping in and telling shlock that its aastha...you have really connected with the readers so much that we feel so involved. Seeing his health deteriorate is heartbreaking though.

oh its Friday!!! Ok looking forward to a nice teaser.