#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136) - Page 103

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Posted: 11 years ago
if you finish 3 more pages will you give precap now?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



Y, i know.even i am a redear too..jab hamein kuch ach nhi milta quote krne ko...then these words really work...😉.
anyway thanks a lot dear...😊

Sorry for delay dear lost network access...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really wonderful update👏
Loved Astha's feelings
The flash back part is good
What's next, I am quite excited
can't wait two more days
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina..

Shlok used to tell her old stories of Astha and his and Astha was smiling listening all those form his point of view...sometime smiling, sometimes, with tears...

awww though the situations are not so good but all these moments are goin to make their bond of love stronger
Whenever Astha felt low due to mood swings of Pregnancy.., she needed her Shlok...she wanted to keep her head on shlok's shoulder, wanted to hold him, wanted to hug him tight...but she knew it is not possible yet...More than Shlok, it was getting difficult for her to manage these days...
all want to be touched by their loved ones...but she could not, then she used to caress her stomach caressing her baby...and smiled with tears...just few days baby, then we will be completely with your papa...

poor astha ,just one month left n u il be together... its hard to imagine how shlok il react after knowing about her pregnancy ,but i wana see the happiness in his eyes for his child n his love astha after he calms down...a complete family as he always wished for...😊
n when shlok said

Shlok smiled on listening...truly speaking, I need something, but can't get...

Let me know, maybe I will be able to provide you...Astha smiled...

I need my Astha... he sighed... a tear rolled over Astha's eye listening...she immediately wanted to move ahead and hug him...but had to control herself...

You are missing her very badly these days?

Shlok nodded in yes... One month has passed, I didn't see her, every night she is in my dreams, my arms...i feel her but I want to see her in front of me... He closed his eyes...

(Astha wanted to remove her burqa immediately and tell him...look your Astha in front of you...she was here only always...for every moment...)


he made it more tough for astha to control...

but all I need is my Astha...just I know, how my one month has passed by now...sometimes I think, if this was my future, why god made me fall in so much love with her? Was not I happy alone?

May be God has decided something else for you , yet you yourself are unknown to that... Astha pressed his hand...

Now what? Nothing can go fine in just six months... I just wish...once I meet my Astha...i want to take her in my arms once again, I want to feel her...saying he covered his face with his palms...while Astha could not take any more and ran outside...

there is a surprise for u shlok ur wish n astha does not fulfill it , how can dis happen...😊

I loved the flashback part...fifth time!😆 u r just like my astha , no you are not like her... ha.. ha..

n it was heart touching whan astha said


Shlok... Astha whispered slowly...yes, your love make me forget my pain, and then why could not my love make you forget everything?


hope he allows astha to take care of him , he should realize astha can never be happy without him,he is right at his place but he is taking away her right worrying about her future...

who says one needs to get married to feel complete , they are committed not merely in words but from soul...

lovely story jeenia,

il be waiting for monday's update...

love u


Yes, the moments are making their bond more and more strong...
its getting herder for astha to control.shlok is controlling his pain thinking she is away but for her , her love is just a step away and she can't hold him...
Lets see if he allows astha to stay with him or not..and you are right, its commitment that completes someone, not just rituals...and they are commited by heart, by soul...
Thanks a lot dear

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: latha_555

every second line i feel like jumping in and telling shlock that its aastha...you have really connected with the readers so much that we feel so involved. Seeing his health deteriorate is heartbreaking though.

oh its Friday!!! Ok looking forward to a nice teaser.



you are just reading but i m writing...with each line...i think,yr btaa de shlok ko, sh eis astha, your love...next moment...nahi yaar abhi nahi...just one more month or may be two to three updates...its getting difficult for me to control...

Teaser will be in next thread.Thanks a lot dear...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

if you finish 3 more pages will you give precap now?



so much demanding????????????? OMG... i am tired of typing continuously...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sireesha76

Really wonderful update👏

Loved Astha's feelings
The flash back part is good
What's next, I am quite excited
can't wait two more days



Thnaks a lot dear...for liking astha's feelings...and take care of your health...

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi niki... how many pages left for us to get a teaser?
jeenia is definitely going to take my life today...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123



Thnaks a lot dear...for liking astha's feelings...and take care of your health...

Thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina..

hi niki... how many pages left for us to get a teaser?

jeenia is definitely going to take my life today...😊



Yaar, please...i love you all... i can't think of taking anyone's life...

Ok tell me what type of teaser you want... Romantic? Thrilling?


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