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Sometimes, I'm jealous of you. Jealous of the fact that you can write so well conveying the thoughts and emotions of people you don't know; heck, people who don't exist and look at me, I'm always at a loss of words to even convey my emotions to you!
This one's is appealing because it isn't about some fleeting moments of romance. It's about their crazy, dire need for each other's presence at all times. It's about the insecurities that people have regarding their loved ones but hesitate in revealing them due to fear of being laughed off. But it's the most heart-warming feeling to know that the other person concerned shared those emotions. You captured all those emotions and much more with brilliance!
Keep it up!
I would LOVE to read a part 2! :D You have to write it. For me, if nothing else! PLEASE??
Kumkum Bhagya
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