ArHi TwoShot |In Between the Lines| Part 1 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it and would definitely love to read Arnav's point of view...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Khushi's sense of emptiness, loneliness and just plain missing Arnav come through vividly... the idea of her getting some peace of mind only when on his side of the bed is heart-warming. Their conversation, where she bombards him with questions about his day, his meals and his medicines and he replies in monosyllables, is touching and quite realistic... it shows her concern and his attempt to soothe her frayed nerves, a part of their normal give and take. I don't think Khushi needs to feel ashamed of how badly she misses her hubby... he listening to her prattling on about all and sundry is an indication that he is probably in the same boat and her voice is the only thing that keeps him anchored and sane. His confession that he needs her with him and that he has been unable to sleep without her by his side is another moving moment... no wonder we keep saying that these two are truly made for each other! Beautiful!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just awesome loved it . So different it was though. So both are missing each other so badly I wish u continue this few more chappies . It really good . Pls do scrap or pm me .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is one of the Shot that does something to your heart.
It twists it little, it makes it burn with impatience and then .. and then it touches it ever so slightly, leaving it's mark like a butterfly's wing.

P.S Thanks for the pm. ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I know the feeling...first time my husband went without me on a trip ...I cried whole week...I was mother of two kids...since then he never went without me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Khushi can never stay away in peace without him... And so is his case!
Loved this OS! Do continue!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okay, you're definitely giving me diabetes! It was sooo sweet, so cute, so ipk-ish... He Devi Maiyya! Mereko utha le!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Ahhh... it was too short. Waiting for 2nd part!

Could feel her blabbering just so that she could keep him on the line.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You write the best OSs ever.
I am in love with them.
And the best part is I feel so good inside me when I read them.
These little glimpses in the lives of Arnav and Khushi are so sweet.
I really hope you will continue this one.
Want to read more, please.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was beautifully written...!!!👏 Im so glad that you have decided to write Arnav's POV... Eagerly waiting for it...!😊

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