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kurinji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#511

So cheap of them how they trapped kushi, good thing kushi poured her heart instead of just vanishing. Now as the mighty ASR knew, he will take care of those scoundrels.
I liked the suspense you maintained and story actions you linked while writing kushi's letter.
Now will there be redemption?

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Posted: 11 years ago

#512

Loved d update

yaar Shyam nd Rohan

have to be taught lesson in d ASR way 😡

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zehr_akhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#513

Owesum update right decision khushi

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rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#514

Wow!

That was some revelation Rima.

Trust you to come up with something like that!

Arnav is now rolling in misery by trusting his mind not his heart and he better buck up as he has to save his own life as well as empire!

Waiting to see what the next update comes out with. Wonder how Arnav will trap them.

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dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#515

Loved the update mind blowing glad she told him the truth its up to him now to earn back her trust loved the letter loved that he knows that she was forced to marry him and that she was going ahead with the marriage but she did it to save him i had no problems with him being angry at her but the part where he doubted that he was the only man she slept with was so bad when he knew she only shared her body with him loved how she wrote everything damn right khushi awesome update beautifully done .

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Mani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#516

That was truely heart wrenching...
Need my tissue paper...*sobs*...
Hope khushi is fine wherever she is, i know many may hate arnav now, but my heart goes out to him given the premonition that he is gonna suffer more...though i had sincerely wished he should have given a chance to khushi to explain herself ...she had selflessly loved him when her own family deserted her.
Coming to those shayam n rohan i feel disguisted ,they are really abhoringly cheap to have gone down to this level. Though i had known they were evil ,but the level of their wickedness i realized now.
Once again a gripping update.
THANX

Edited by sarun22 - 11 years ago

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anonyasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#517

Well written. The premise is that Arnav believes her now but would likely not have if Khushi had told him the truth weeks back...sad.

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arshi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#518

Awww

This is so sad.

Now he must be regretting. Sigh. Its going to be difficult manaofying Khushi. Poor Khushi.

At least the air is cleared now. Shyam's evilness toh fails me. Always. How can anyone be so cruel?

anyway..I hope both of them get together soon :)

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Nisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#519

Amazing and no words. It's a regular flashback for these kind of blackmail stories but made me awestruck is you never missed the logic and no loop holes in that story. This logic misses often in even professional writers novel and movies as well. Even I like the part where Khushi says she can understand that there are lot of reasons to made Arnav mistrust her. I hope you won't take leap to re-unite them. Poor guys already suffer a lot and they deserve happiness at-least now.