VIRMAN FF: #2 YOU ARE MY LOVE UPDATED FINAL PART PG 73(14.4.14)

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manuthi mathi

@manuthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#541

wow... long and nice update... i loved the story... finally all problem solved... nice epilogue...

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aparnalokam

@aparnalokam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#542

OHHH MYYY GODDD SUCH A LONG UPDATE😲😲😲

Dear this update is really mindblowing...really you are a great writer...😊😊😊 This update is filled with lot off emotions simple superbbb...I loved each and every line...keep it up dear👏👏👏

28i :-Aww really feeling sad for manvi...and coming to her past its really horrible😭😭 And the way shruthi bursted at virat😲😲 and she told truth to everyone loved it...

28ii :-The letter which manvi wrote for virat was emotional I literally go tears in my eyes...and v.mas reaction on virat 😲😲 and each and every member is angry on virat...Finally viren and shurthi finded manvi😊😊 awww bt her condition she was sitting under shower and crying poor manvi😭😭😭😭

28iii :-Aww manvi is very angry at virat and she refused to talk wit him😔 loved shruthi's drama...and finally she succeded in sending them together to mandir😉😉 That jiji saali hug was cute😊😊 And that mandhir scene was really superbbb wowww😃😃 poor manvi was searching for virat 😔 And virats plan was minblowing he brought manvi's family😊😊😊 loved that a lot...And VIRMAN'S car scene was very romantic😉😉😊😊 All welcomed virman to vadheras house😊😊 And their sweet cute romance was superb...Manvi is pregnant wowww superbbb😊😊 And virat wants a kissy from manvi😉😉😉 and virats lift was minblowing😊😊😊😊

epilogue :- Epilogue was really cute...and manvi made ice cream for virat😊😊

Abi you have done complete justice to this story and this update toh was lyk as if I watching everything infront of my eyes it was lyk that awesome job dear👏👏👏...I cant say you in words how much happy I am reading your update...

OOOPPPSSS GIVE ME HIII555555...As you promised me ki that you will give punishment to that preethi you did it...😊😊 Apu is very happy😉😉😉

THANK YOUUU SOOO SOOO MUCH FOR SUCH AN AMAZING STORY DEAR...LOVED IT❤️❤️

AND WILL MISS YOU AND YOUR STORIES ALOT😭😭😭

THIS IS MY 1ST COMMENT(I MEAN SUCH A BIG COMMENT I NEVER DID TILL NOW PAR AFTER READING YOUR UPDATE I WAS UNABLE TO CONTROL MYSELF)

TAKE CARE DEAR🤗 ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR FUTURE...

Edited by aparnalokam - 11 years ago

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swathin

@swathin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#543

beautiful story
will miss reading it

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mridula

@-Minion-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#544

wonderful end.its full of surparis,emotion and romance.manvi got her family,virman going to be parents.i'm going to miss this ff.thanks for pm.

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Meenal

@Cute_Meenal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#545

hello di i am late as always i think

i am feeling sad on reading the last part di

u are such a wonrful writer di

i always wait for your pm to read the update and too comment there

but i know di that u are busy and same thing happened to me

anyways i loved your last update di

part 28 (I)

omg manvi has such a cruel past feels for her but love the way when shruthi told them the truth

part 28(ii)

everyone is angry with virat

feels bad to find manvi on that condition

viren shouts on him

part 28( iii)

manvi not talking to him

aww loved their dinning table scene and loved the mandir scene

love their little romance

love the way when virat said stomach ache

epilogue

its was such a nice upate di

love the virman romance

awww they have been blessed with baby girl

so its a happy ending

this story is so wonderful di

but ok its fine infact i am happy that u ended it

u have such a great talent di

will surely gonna miss this story and thanks for giving us such a wonderful story di and

have a great success in your life di and have a wonderful life ahead🤗

will miss u

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kokubaba

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Posted: 11 years ago

#546

thnks for d update loved ii...read it so many times already...kabii alvida naaa kehenaaa come back with a new virman story...we all will be waiting for you...

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abirami

@madhuharini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda
Wow that is really a longgg update...

Okaay we start at the chapter 28i

Feel sad for Manvi..
Manvi really had a cruel past..
Loved how Shruthi told everyone the truth...
Feel sad for Virat...He know that he is wrong...
Hope the will find Manvi soon...

Chapter 28ii
Ooohhh everyone is angry on Virat...
While reading the letter i litterly got tears in my eyes...
Feel really sad for Virman...
Hate Preethi and Shimrithi for doing this to us Virman...
Thank god Viren and Shruthi found Manvi...
But sad how the found Manvi under the shower...
Poor Virat Viren shouts on him...
Love Virat care for Manvi...

Chapter 28iii
Feel sad for Virat that Manvi dont want to talk to him...
But Viren still support Virat...
Loved the little Virat and Shruthi part...
Shruthi is such a drama queen...
Loved Viren and Virat scene at the dinner table...
How she planned to send Virat with Manvi to the mandhir...
Loved that little Virman scene...
Poor Virat still trying to get Manvi back...
Awww Manvi was concerned when she didnt see Virat for 2 days...
Awww Virat brought Manvi family...
Love the romantic little part..
Awww they kissed...
Awww Manvi is pregnent loved the last part..
When everyone heard that Manvi is pregnent...

Epilogue
Poor Virat dont get much attention from his wife..
Aww he is jalous...
Awww the get a baby girl...

Loved the whole story...
Thankksss for such a amazing story..
But why did you stoped???
And why will you not come on IF now????

But thankksss for all the updates..
And thanksss for all the PM...
Will Miss Youuu...
Hope you will be back soon...

hi Chandni... I am very happy to see your long wonderful comments...
I still remember, your first comment of this FF and that still shines in the first page of the ff in thread 1...
you are such a nice frnd of me and encouraged me supportively throughout this journey...
I'll also miss you Chandni... I'll miss every thing around here.
But If possible, I'll be back in another ongoing forum soon...
take care dear🤗

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abirami

@madhuharini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: pink1
awesome update and awesome ending finally everything
clear there Mu also he give her surprise her family and
she give him good news

thank you Marry...
you are one of the bestie I got thro' my FF...
without all of you, this FF haven't reached till epilogue...
You always insist me to give next update every time and that's y I gave this time too...
luv u Marry...
take care🤗

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abirami

@madhuharini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: panamaa
i felt like watching a film.
a nice film
loved it
and please update soon ur ss please

Thank you Panama... your comments really made me happy dear😊
If possible, I'll do that one too...
take care🤗

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abirami

@madhuharini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: Vaarya53
that was freakin awesome update !! so long and such a beautifully potrayed story ..u have done a good job. will miss ur story though. good luck for ur future ahead :)

thank you Vaarya...
thank you for ur support in this awesome journey...
I'll miss u too dear...
take care🤗