VIRMAN FF: #2 YOU ARE MY LOVE UPDATED FINAL PART PG 73(14.4.14) - Page 54

Awesome
whole journey is fab
like it
hope uu write next work soon

Wow awesome update...
Love it...
Sad that u finished this story...
But I hope u wrote more virman story...

Hey finally you updated that were awesome updates loved them all
First when virat came after the truth he felt so guilty
Then when he was trying to win manvi back
And manvi that couldn't forgive him yet
Virat did everything for her just to win her back loved the part where he was in Mumbai and manvi came to know that she's pregnant and he was busy with her family
Manvi was so happy and virat came to know that he is going to be a daddy really loved that part the epilogue was awesome to
Really sad that this story is over now I really loved it and will really miss it thank you for all those amazing updates you gave us
Thank you so much for the pm
Please continue with virman stories and please don't forget me
Will really miss you and this story

28i

awesome short-update
loved it
felt bad for manvi
but loved Sruthi ... How she said the truth and supported her sis

28ii

awesome
finally virat realised he did wrong to manvi
the letter manvi wrote is touching
poor manvi got fever

28iii

awesome
loved it
liked how manvi ignoring virat and he trying to make her talk to him
bringing her parents back is superb
and she is pregnant
lovely ending

awesome epilogue
loved it
feeling sad it ended
want you to try to write more stories

thanx for update...n it was an amazing update...an amazing ending it was...luvd the story a lot

really a long update

i cnt classify yur parts and cmnt... will do as my wish..

yu please bear it..

i have to say tat i startd to cry when i read yur update.. really cldnt bear the pain where manvi wents thru.. i hav read many stories bt i didnt urge to cry.. bt i diid fr yur update abi.. yur update was sooo goood..

yu hav portrayed very well abt manvi's feelings.. and letter was so gud.. it clearly shows her pain.. evnthough they are in non talking terms.. still she cares fr him.. when she gets to knw tat she s pregnant, she crave fr him and wants hm to hold her tats so nice.. virat s virat he really cares fr her and her love, aand tats y he tuk her family wth him to meet her.. tats nice.. i lovd the surprise of both.. tats shows their love.. finally they became VIRMAN tat no one cld seperate them..

yu r an excellent writer abi.. this ff s really awesome.. loved it.. so dnt stop yur writings nd continue it dear..