VIRMAN FF: #2 YOU ARE MY LOVE UPDATED FINAL PART PG 73(14.4.14) - Page 57

Originally posted by: priya_nishal

really a long update

i cnt classify yur parts and cmnt... will do as my wish..

yu please bear it..

i have to say tat i startd to cry when i read yur update.. really cldnt bear the pain where manvi wents thru.. i hav read many stories bt i didnt urge to cry.. bt i diid fr yur update abi.. yur update was sooo goood..

yu hav portrayed very well abt manvi's feelings.. and letter was so gud.. it clearly shows her pain.. evnthough they are in non talking terms.. still she cares fr him.. when she gets to knw tat she s pregnant, she crave fr him and wants hm to hold her tats so nice.. virat s virat he really cares fr her and her love, aand tats y he tuk her family wth him to meet her.. tats nice.. i lovd the surprise of both.. tats shows their love.. finally they became VIRMAN tat no one cld seperate them..

yu r an excellent writer abi.. this ff s really awesome.. loved it.. so dnt stop yur writings nd continue it dear..

Originally posted by: Duggukede

this FF was the best FF ever!

please continue making FF's like this one

amazing

going to miss your updates

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: manuthi

wow... long and nice update... i loved the story... finally all problem solved... nice epilogue...

Originally posted by: madhuharini

hi Duggu.. I am feeling happy to reply all my friends finally...
thank u for praizing words... It's like a big achievement for me😳😊
I too gonna miss u all dear...
take care🤗

Originally posted by: aparnalokam

OHHH MYYY GODDD SUCH A LONG UPDATE😲😲😲

Dear this update is really mindblowing...really you are a great writer...😊😊😊 This update is filled with lot off emotions simple superbbb...I loved each and every line...keep it up dear👏👏👏

28i :-Aww really feeling sad for manvi...and coming to her past its really horrible😭😭 And the way shruthi bursted at virat😲😲 and she told truth to everyone loved it...

28ii :-The letter which manvi wrote for virat was emotional I literally go tears in my eyes...and v.mas reaction on virat 😲😲 and each and every member is angry on virat...Finally viren and shurthi finded manvi😊😊 awww bt her condition she was sitting under shower and crying poor manvi😭

28iii :-Aww manvi is very angry at virat and she refused to talk wit him😔 loved shruthi's drama...and finally she succeded in sending them together to mandir😉😉 That jiji saali hug was cute😊😊 And that mandhir scene was really superbbb wowww😃😃 poor manvi was searching for virat 😔 And virats plan was minblowing he brought manvi's family😊😊😊 loved that a lot...And VIRMAN'S car scene was very romantic😊 All welcomed virman to vadheras house😊😊 And their sweet cute romance was superb...Manvi is pregnant wowww superbbb😊😊 And virat wants a kissy from manvi😉😉😉 and virats lift was minblowing😊

epilogue :- Epilogue was really cute...and manvi made ice cream for virat😊😊

Abi you have done complete justice to this story and this update toh was lyk as if I watching everything infront of my eyes it was lyk that awesome job dear👏👏👏...I cant say you in words how much happy I am reading your update...

OOOPPPSSS GIVE ME HIII555555...As you promised me ki that you will give punishment to that preethi you did it...😊😊 Apu is very happy😉😉😉

THANK YOUUU SOOO SOOO MUCH FOR SUCH AN AMAZING STORY DEAR...LOVED IT❤️❤️

AND WILL MISS YOU AND YOUR STORIES ALOT😭😭😭

THIS IS MY 1ST COMMENT(I MEAN SUCH A BIG COMMENT I NEVER DID TILL NOW PAR AFTER READING YOUR UPDATE I WAS UNABLE TO CONTROL MYSELF)

TAKE CARE DEAR🤗 ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR FUTURE...

OHHH MYYY GODDD SUCH A LONG UPDATE😲😲😲

Originally posted by: Duggukede

are you going to make a new story 😃

Originally posted by: swathin

beautiful story
will miss reading it

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

wonderful end.its full of surparis,emotion and romance.manvi got her family,virman going to be parents.i'm going to miss this ff.thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: Cute_Meenal

hello di i am late as always i think

i am feeling sad on reading the last part di

u are such a wonrful writer di

i always wait for your pm to read the update and too comment there

but i know di that u are busy and same thing happened to me

anyways i loved your last update di

part 28 (I)

omg manvi has such a cruel past feels for her but love the way when shruthi told them the truth

part 28(ii)

everyone is angry with virat

feels bad to find manvi on that condition

viren shouts on him

part 28( iii)

manvi not talking to him

aww loved their dinning table scene and loved the mandir scene

love their little romance

love the way when virat said stomach ache

epilogue

its was such a nice upate di

love the virman romance

awww they have been blessed with baby girl

so its a happy ending

this story is so wonderful di

but ok its fine infact i am happy that u ended it

u have such a great talent di

will surely gonna miss this story and thanks for giving us such a wonderful story di and

have a great success in your life di and have a wonderful life ahead🤗

tc

will miss u