VIRMAN FF: #2 YOU ARE MY LOVE UPDATED FINAL PART PG 73(14.4.14) - Page 53

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Part 28 i):

After pooja, every one returned home happily unaware of the harmful storm that destroyed two lives few minutes before... V..ma entered in calling Manvi's name happily to give the holy Prasad of pooja. But she couldn't trace her presence. Jeevika then called her going towards her room. Shruthi stopped her in between and she herself went to Virman's room searching for Manvi... Every one were clueless about her absence. Shruthi got shocked to see the room and couldn't sense any thing. Before she could realize some thing, she started running all places of the house shouting, "Virat Jiju... Virat jiju..."

Viren stopped her and asking, "what's wrong Shruthi? Why are u so shocked? Haan?"

"wo... jiju... the room is completely messed and I have no sign of Manvi di here" she said worriedly. "wait I'll see for Virat..." he said and shocked to see him before he move further... Not only Viren, every one were hell shocked to see his angry face which looked very tensed and reddened...

Seeing Virat, V..ma moved to him, "what happened Virat? Where is Manvi? Answer me..." she said touching his cheeks. On the other side, Viren, Jeevika and even Shruthi also started to ask about Manvi... his heart is denying to hear her name any more...

"MANVI MANVI MANVI... WILL U ALL STOP CALLING HER NAME?" he yelled from his lungs... A mere silence spread across the place seeing his reactions and anger...

"what happened Virat? Why are you behaving this way?" asked Viren nearing him. "jiju... plzz say, where is my di? Plzz" said Shruthi...

"stop calling me jiju... the relationship I shared with your sister ended few minutes back. For me, she's dead from now on..." he said leaving behind a shocked yet stunned Shruthi...

"Virat... stop saying all these non-sense" V..ma yelled back.

"ma... for god's sake don't trust her plzz... Even I can't understand how I am feeling now" he said while tears started brimming in his eyes... he wiped it soon and shouted from his lungs again, "She cheated my trust... my love... my soul..." he said and punched the table in front of him with hell anger while his fists started bleeding unconditionally...

Jeevika moved to Viren afraid to face the scene and holded his hands for support... tears were flowing from her eyes seeing her devar and thinking her soul sister's life. Shruthi, a soft hearted girl also moved to her and hugged Jeevika scaringly...

V..ma went to Virat and holded his hands... "relax beta... don't hurt yourself. Whatever the misunderstanding may be... just think for a while, whether she could do this? Think beta..." she said with tears.

"ma please... you won't forgive her when you come to know all her dramas. Stop trusting her blindly like me" he said and narrated every thing whatever he learned from Preethi. Every one got even more shocked to know that Manvi is Chaudary's daughter except Shruthi who already knew every thing about her lovely sister. "I can't believe still, she did all these... how cruel... how cheat you are Manvi!!! Feeling ashamed to love you... Shit" he yelled again.

Before he could finish, there bursted another voice, "will you stop blabbering Mr. Virat?" yeah... It's none other than our Shruthi.

"Shruthi... you should not talk like this to elders" said Jeevika... "no di... he's not my jiju here after" said Shruthi and She was shattered badly after learning all the worst things happened to her sister. Tears were flowing continuously from her little eyes and she can't stop it any more thinking her sister's fate.

"what are you saying Shruthi?" asked Viren in a concerned tone holding her shoulders... "jiju... first of all, stop him to blame my di... I can't hear his words any more" she said angrily.

"wow!!! You are still so concerned for that bloody dramatic idiot" said Virat but immediately cut down by Shruthi saying, "haan... she's a fool... she's an idiot to show her love and care to you and your family. If you speak one word against my sister, I'll kill you"

"Shruthi... no beta. You should not speak like this... plz stop it beta" said V..ma holding her hands.

"Aunty... plzz don't hold ur hands to me" she pleaded...

"then plzz let us know the truth" said V..ma.

"aunty... we all have seen only Manvi di's bubbly chirpy side, her caring and loving nature, her cute smile for every thing... but no one knew the toughest miseries she's hiding behind all these. She's only smiling and involving herself to help others just to hide and forget the worst things she had undergone"

Every one were observing Shruthi keenly and eagerly to know Manvi's past but Virat showed least interest to knew. But stood there without option.

"15 years back, it was Manvi di's birthday... Her parents were running newspaper called TRUTH in Delhi and you might have heard as it was very popular on those times." She started and V..ma nodded her head in positive approach which made Virat to observe her words as it might be true.

"because of their honesty, they published an important evident of a politician in that just for people's welfare. But it became the last news and the opposite parties started to torture Chaudaries. Soon, they planned to destroy the entire chaudary's name, fame and every thing... they fired their press factory and also fired their sweet home. On that day, di and chachu were not at home and while they returned, they saw their wildest and worst night mare that their home was burning like volcano... her chachu took her in that very stage and they came to Mumbai. She thought her family was destroyed in that fire... she thought the whole family was erupted just behind her eyes.

But you remember aunty, on that day when you talked to Manvi di about Virat's past... She only came to knew that her family is still alive on that day. She suffered and hided all the pain within herself and agreed for the marriage with this Monster. She was really clueless of her future when she agreed for this marriage. But she also can't confess to any one that Smrithi is her own sister...

You know what? I am not Manvi di's own sister. She usually come to an orphan from her childhood days. She loved me so much and so she adopted me few years back. I can't get such love and care even if my own parents are alive. But she brought me up awesome without making me feel I am an orphan, even for a second... could some one show such attitude towards unknown persons? Tell me aunty?" she said with continuous flow of tears in her eyes...

She then moved to Virat who was now feeling very restless and guilty for his deeds. She holded his collar, "you know what? My di is still supporting and care you not for her sister's sake like you said... she hasn't even seen her sister from that day... She did all this only for her love. She loved you more than anything in this world and as a result you rewarded her this way... awesome Mr.Virat. I can't even think how broken she might be now" saying this she wiped her tears.

Virat sat on the couch unable to bear the truth... he never thought that she might have such a cruel past. Tears started to flow in his cheeks and he wiped it soon. Seeing his reaction, Shruthi kneeled down in front of him, "She only could knew the pain behind losing loved ones. So that she helped aunty to get recovered in full fledge. Why did you spoiled her love? You are the one who betrayed her love... you have cheated her love" she yelled again.

Not only Virat, every one were very shocked after knowing Manvi's hiden past. "She is not a cheat and betrayal of your love... She loved us like her own family and still doing so... what have you said to my daughter? Haan?" said V..ma and cleaned his bleeding fists with cotton and plastered his wounds.

"I am going to my di... I can't stand simply here. Has she told any thing before going out? Where she might be now?" said Shruthi and her sobs increased uncontrollably... When she was about to move out, Viren accompanied her saying, "you should not go alone in this time. I am coming with you Shruthi..." Both went out to search Manvi worriedly...

Virat still sat without showing any expressions in his face... Jeevika went near him and shook him calling, "Virat..." He closed his eyes and rested his head back on the couch... the moments he spent with her were circling his thoughts... the flash of her pleading face and words ringing in his mind and tears started to flow from his eyes continuously because of that...

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"yes you are... how could I expect some thing good from a behen of such a low-minded girl? How could you stoop so low damn it? How could you cheat me? Your sister taught all this for you or you taught every thing for her? Is it a casual trick for you girls to fool us using LOVE?"

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"shh... no more words again. I knew all your dirty plans today and for what you came here... you want me to get back all the cases what I have filed against your sister? to clear up all the mess on your family's reputation? To fool me again using the word LOVE? Right?"

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"Atleast I should have listened you once... why did I behaved like that? What else words I didn't used today to hurt you... I don't have rights even to apologize you..." he thought still closing his eyes...

Meanwhile, V..ma went to her room hurtfully unable to bear the pain her daughter-in-law is going through because of her son.

Jeevika jerked him from his thoughts and wiped his flowing tears... "It's ok Virat... Manvi can't bear when you worry this way. Go and convince her na" she said... "but I make her to worry every time bhabhi... why this happened with me?" he said with his hands in forehead.

"It's not only your mistake... It's because of the damn bitch Preethi. She used the situations and turning tables accordingly... you should make Manvi understand her evil plans and you both should live a successful life in front of her eyes happily..." she said.

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PART 28 ii):

V..ma came towards them worriedly with papers in her hand. Virat stood up from his place and moved to her... "Don't come near me... stop right there itself" she said angrily...

"ma..." said Virat shockingly. "Don't call me like that... see this... My beti wrote this letter for me and I could understand how much worried and hurt she's now. It's all because of you... She loved you immensely without minding your monsterness and harsh attitude. But she said she can't continue this any more now... She ignored all of us and ready to live a lonely life" she said showing the letter. Also she added, "If you wish you can read this note she wrote for you... also she wrote that I have to give this only you wish to read it... or return it to me. I don't want to waste my beti's feelings" she said. Virat immediately pulled the letter from her hand and ran to his room unable to control his feelings for his lovely wife...

Virat...

I never said I didn't done mistake. Of course I did... But I never wished to cheat you and betray your love. You know what, a girl showing fake love would never fear for loosing her love and would never die each and every second whether her love would be betrayed. I wanna apologise you for one mistake I did today. You wanna knew it? I came to the restaurant when you went today to meet Preethi... I suspected your love from the day I saw Preethi's calls and texts on your mobile in Germany. But I got the answers today for every thing... I felt very guilty for that and awaited for the better time to say you every thing and to apologize you. I can't resist myself from doing that... I was dieing alone in the fear of loosing you and no one knew that... but all my fears came true today... I am sorry for that Virat.

You said I had cheated you for my sister's sake. But if you really understood me or trusted me, you could have never said that... because no one in this world is neither important nor needed one for me than you and I don't feel I could love some one more than you... I never thought such a day would come for us in our life. But as I always say, it is for some thing betterment in our life... May be it's for you could get a better friend or partner than me. I don't think that it's necessary to prove myself to you... Because I know my love is not a fake and I knew that well. I won't ask you to forgive me and live your life with me any more... Every thing is finished and it's over already... But please do this one favour for me... Just close your eyes for a minute and think the moments we spent together... the days we fought with each other and then the days we fought for each other... the days I am yearning for your love... all your sweet surprises... our memorable moments in Germany... the day I convince you when you are angry on me and the other day you convince me when I am angry on you and still lots and lots of moments which would never be erased from my memory... now open your eyes. Still you could say my love is a fake and false one for you? I knew what would be your reply...

Don't worry for any thing Virat. Don't hurt your fists whenever you get angry over anybody, else it would be painful. And you can be very happy that you have no more Manvi here after. Go ahead in your life. I wish you all success... Take care of mom and take care of yourself...

Manvi

After reading her letter, a lone tear escaped from his eyes thinking of her love... the boundless love she hold for him every time. He holded the letter very close to his heart and closed his eyes. He saw his plastered fists and another set tear escaped from the corner of his eyes...

"I am sorry my jaan... you are so honest and innocent that you shared even what you did today... really it's not a mistake... It's the love you are showing to me every time. You are always caring me and thinking for my happiness. Now enough of your miseries and sobs. I wanna put an end to every thing you are going through. I am not only gonna ask you sorry this time. Instead I wanna change your life full of happiness and that would be a non-volatile one for you... I love you Manvi. I love you so much my jaan" he thought clutching the letter very close to his heart.

Suddenly, he jerked from his thoughts feeling some thing strange in his heart... He felt like he wanna see her immediately and to hold her in his arms. "where are u my jaan? Are you safe?" his voice trembled in tension which is running along his nerves... his tension and fear of loosing her increased by every passing second. He took his mobile and started dialing her number several times... but no luck; She is not attending a single call... he then dialed Viren's number to ask whether he got any clue of her place.

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Shruthi searched for Manvi every where along with Viren and finally went to their small home where they lived before Virman's marriage doubtedly... to their surprise, they saw the lights were switched on from the window... they had a great sigh of relief to find her after a long search...

Shruthi went happily and started knocking the door. She knocked 5 times, 10 times... but no answer. "Jiju, she's not answering" said Shruthi worriedly. "Let me check" said Viren and started to knock the door shouting, "Manvi... Manvi..." No response again... their worries increased and broke the glass door of window with a hard stone and entered inside... They searched her every where in the house but no idea. Finally, shruthi checked her bathroom and run inside shouting, "Manvi di..."

Viren ran immediately and shocked to see her state... She was sitting under the shower with closed eyes and not responding to their sound. She was seemed like crying in the same place for long hours... the water is still pouring on her head... they had almost lost seeing her state. Viren took her immediately and placed her on the bed. He asked Shruthi to change her clothes and to wipe her hair with towel and moved out for a while... he got a call from Virat, but cut the call unable to digest Manvi's condition. But Virat tried again and again and finally he received the call and shouted, "what? What do you want more?" he shouted... "Bhai... have you found Manvi? She is good na?" he asked in a tensed tone... "you don't need to care even she's dead or alive" he yelled... "I am sorry bhai... plzz let me know her condition... plzz" he said in a hurried yet tensed way... "She's in her home" he said barely and cut the call...

Virat ran tensedly out of his room to see his love... he felt a small sigh of relief that she's safe. He reached the place soon and saw her lying on the bed like a lifeless state... Viren called for a doctor and they're waiting for his arrival. When he saw her, he ran and took her in his arms and cupping her face calling her name... but no response again. He could realize her body temperature like burning fire... "what happened to her? Why she's not waking up? She's having high temperature... Manvi... wake up jaan... please" he said rubbing her cheeks worriedly... "Bhai plzz say what happened to her?" he asked seeing Viren worriedy... "She was crying under shower continuously and got fever. We saw her in a fainted state under running shower" he said rubbing his forehead.

"No... Manvi, why you did this? If any thing happened huh?" he said and pulled her very close o his heart...

Shruthi is watching them simply and Viren's eyes turned moist seeing his love... He had never seen Virat loving any one like this other than his mom... Soon their traunce is broken by doctor's voice, "May I come in?"

"Doctor, plzz check my Manvi... She's not waking up" said Virat tensedly... the doctor examined her state and gave a thorough check up and said, "She's having high fever... don't worry, I injected her and she'ld be recovered soon" and went out.

Viren took the doctor outside and Shruthi sat on one side of Manvi shooting angry glares at Virat... "Don't create a scene here... di's health is not well. Please leave her alone" she said. "I am not gonna leave her even for a second here after" he said holding her hands and sat on other side of Manvi. Viren called V..ma and Jeevika to inform that she's is safe and good. But he hided about her fever as they would worry more...

After some time, Shruthi slept on the same position near Manvi and Viren slept on the couch; Virat still sat in the same way holding her hands and merged in deep thoughts of his beautiful wife and his life... He caressed her hair and removing one of the strand from her cheeks that's trying to disturb her sleep. He also felt her reduced body temperature and thanked god for the first time after so many years... He leaned down towards her face and gave a soft kiss on her fore head without disturbing her sleep and said, "I love you Jaan" in a low voice not to disturb any one...

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PART 28 iii):

Manvi opened her heavy eyes slowly and tried to rub her eyes but can't take her hand... she turned aside slowly and saw the person holding her hands possessively and slept sitting next to her. Her lips widened little with a sweet smile unknowingly... but the next moment she was shocked and pulled her hands immediately from his hold and got up to move away. With the sudden jerk, he waked up from his sleep and asked, "Manvi... are u alright now?"

Hearing the voices, Shruthi and Viren also wake up... "Virat... it's better if you go away now" said Viren. "No Bhai... I can't go away leaving her any more. I'll never do that" he said in a quiet low voice. Her heart is unable to believe his words... Her mind driven back to the harsh words he had spoken on the previous day... Tears started brimming in her eyes unable to digest his words. She felt like her heart is aching when she remembered his words...

Virat moved towards her and holded her hands saying, "I am sorry Manvi... I know I am wrong. I shouldn't have spoken that way... plzz mujhe maaf kardo... plzz" he said. She suddenly pulled her hands back and said, "Do you remember, the same way I pleaded you... I begged you to listen me atleast once. But you never did it" Tears started to flow continuously from her cheeks... he can't see her hurt and pain. He thought he has to apologize her anyway and moved forward again, " yeah... I was wrong Manvi. I can't take so easily what I heard. Plz forgive me" he said.

"I am not ready to do any thing... ask him to go away jiju. I don't want to face him any more. I wanna live alone. GO AWAY" she shouted closing her eyes. Suddenly, she heard some one calling her name behind... She ran and pushed herself in her arms calling "ma..." She was crying continuously in her arms and found some peace while she caressing her hair... "No beta... don't cry" said V..ma caressing her back softly. "Ma... I am won't come there here after" she said and cried again. Shruthi and Jeevika can't see her sister's tears and went near her... "di... plzz don't cry" said Shruthi but she can't control her sobs.

Virat was completely broken to see her state and ran outside the house to give her some time and not to disturb her... He went to the garden and sat on his knees closing his eyes. Viren came out following him and he opened his eyes with his touch on his shoulders. "Bhai... I am sorry" he said and hugged him. He find a strong support whenever his lovely friend is near him. "Every thing will be fine soon... don't worry bhai" said Viren...

Except Virat, all others stayed along with Manvi from that day. A week passed in the same situation... Every one were trying to bring a happiest Manvi, but no one could. Virat will try to speak with her some times, but she moved away ignoring him.

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Virat dialed a number and started to speak, "what happened dude? Have you consulted them? I wanna immediate reply. I can't wait any more and I wanna meet them in next 2 days" he said and continued the conversation. Shruthi stood behind the wall and heard the entire conversation. She came in front of him, "I heard your conversation. Are they really coming here?" she asked. "yeah... making arrangements for it" said Virat. Shruthi immediately hugged him saying, "I am sorry... sorry for behaving like that. I can't take it when any one hurt my di... but you are really the best. And now thank you for doing all this for my di" and cried. "It's ok Shruthi... Even I am sorry for hurting your di. But promise me, we have to keep this matter secret huh?" said this, he wiped her tears and extended his hands for promise. "Promise" she said happily. "atleast now you can call me jiju na?" he said smilingly... "you are my best jiju always" said Shruthi and they shared a cute jiju-saali hug.

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Everyone are gathered in the living room... V..ma and Jeevika sat on the couch, shruthi was busy with her mobile in texting her friend, Virat sat next to V..ma and looking the closed door of his wife's room... every one are still angry with Virat but it's getting reduced seeing his love and care for his wife. They agreed to help him in convincing Manvi as they knew well that her complete happiness only lies with her hubby... She came out of her room and every one's attention fell on her.

Manvi: I feel like going to temple where we regularly go... could you come with me?

Shruthi: di... you asking me permission? Let's go

Manvi: ma... I am going to temple and will be back soon.

Virat is looking at her without even closing her eyes and expecting atleast her microsecond glare... but she ignored his presence and talked like she didn't noticed him. Shruthi saw Virat and got an idea immediately. "If jiju go with di, they might have atleast some time together to clear the problems" thought Shruthi.

Manvi: Shruthi... will you come with me or sitting simply thinking some useless stuffs?

Shruthi: no di... it's not useless idea( she said, but bit her tongue like caught to her di)

Manvi: what idea? What are you talking about?

Shruthi: no.. nothing di... it's just. Ok let's go

She stood from her place and fell down suddenly shouting "ahhh"

Jeevika, V..ma and Virat came to her and asked, "what happened?" in a chorus manner. "just a small sprain" she acted like paining. Manvi took her slowly up and made her to stand. She took her to the bed room and made her lie carefully.

Manvi: take rest Shruthi... Shall we go to doctor?

Shruthi: no di... I'll take rest and it's enough. You go to temple di and pray for me huh?

Manvi: sure

V..ma: How can you go alone? You are still not well Manvi...

Manvi: Ma... I can go myself. I am not a kid

V..ma: No... I won't allow you to go alone

Manvi: Jeevika di, could you come with me? Plz...

Jeevika: sorry Manvi. I have an appointment to doctor. I have to go with ma and Virenji is also busy with his meeting today.

Shruthi smiled silently and winked seeing Virat. Virat understood her drama and controlled his smile before his wife as she caught them, she'll hang them upside down.

Shruthi: uff... no one is free except jiju. But di will not go with him...

Jeevika: why? Is your di afraid of any one?

Manvi: who said? I am not afraid of any one.

Shruthi: haan... she'll go with jiju now. Hai na di? (winked at Virat)

Manvi: Ma... I am going now (said this she moved from the place angrily without looking at any one)

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Manvi was on her way to temple. Virat followed her... She knew well that he's walking next to her, but very adamant to look at him even once.

Virat: Manvi... still your angry is not reduced?

Manvi: -

Virat: yeah... I know. Then why are you not looking at me?

Manvi: -

Virat: because, when you look at me or talk to me, you'll be melted and fall for me again. Hai na?(ha smirked)

Manvi: (her anger raised and can't control from opening her mouth) will you please stop your blabbering... don't imagine too much of yourself.

Virat: oh... then what's the reason?

Manvi: I don't wanna talk with strangers.

Virat: strangers?

Manvi: HAAN... STRANGERS (she shouted and walked forward)

Suddenly she realized he is not coming with her... She can't hear his voice too... Her heart is searching for his presence, but she could see him nowhere. She went to the temple turning back and checking him for every 10 seconds... But she can't. If he find her searching him, she'll be caught. But he is coming only behind her secretly and enjoying her searching eyes... he could understand the love she's holding for him and her craving for him... Seeing her love he said himself, "I'll never leave u alone my jaan"

They reached the temple and Manvi is going up in the stairs... Virat got an idea and shouted, "aaah". She heard the voice and its very well-known to her as it's her hubby's... Her heart skipped a bit thinking if some thing happened to him. She turned around to see him sitting in the stair-case steps holding his legs and pretending like paining... She ran towards him immediately shouting, "Virat". He felt very happy and again confirmed that she's still loving him... "what happened Virat? Is it paining more? Can't you walk properly in steps?" said this she started rubbing his foot.

"After long time, I am hearing my name from you... you know how good it feels?" he said. "You are pretending like fallen? Right?" she said and moved angrily. But before she could do so, he caught hold of her wrist and pulled her on him... She had fallen on his lap clutching his collar tightly closing her eyes. She slowly opened her eyes to see him looking at her with over-flowing love and holding her waist passionately... "Leave me... don't use your hasty brain to think more. I won't fall for such cheap antics" she said and was about to get up... but his hold was very tight and she can't move an inch away from him. Unaware of the surroundings, their desires for each other is growing inside and they shared a cute eye lock in the same position...

"Don't go away from me Manvi... I had hurted you so many times and still I am the reason behind your worries. But Please trust me, I'll sort every thing soon... Let's start a fresh together. I love you and will never hurt you here after... I wanna give you the entire happiness in this world... I wanna see all my dreams with you in my arms... I wanna go all around the world and to achieve all success holding your hand... I want you near me till my last breath" he said seeing her eyes...

She merged in his eyes deeply and try to read some thing in it's passionate gaze... His words made her heart aroused... tears started flowing in her eyes unaware of herself... She was drenched in the thoughts of their beautiful love they shared few days back... Her silent traunce was suddenly broken by his voice saying, "will you? Will you trust me?" and extended his hands.

"Not again" she said and got up suddenly from his lap. She wiped her over-flowing tears and running up the stairs to reach the temple... After their prayer, they went back to home silently unable to meet each others eyes.

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The next day, Manvi woke up from her bed and feeling little dizzy... She thought she's getting very week these days and have to concentrate more in her diet. She came out from her room after freshing up and saw Virat sleeping in the couch in living room... the flashes of temple conversation lighting up in her heart... Jeevika came to her calling, "Manvi..." but she was sshhed by Manvi saying "di... he's sleeping. Lower your voice" she said in a low audible tone. Jeevika caught up her behen's words and asked, "who's sleeping Manvi?" crossing her hands across her chest and stood there... "wo di... every one are sleeping na? ma, jiju, Shruthi... that's why I said" Manvi some how managed and escaped from the place... She went to garden and thought, "why did I said like this? I have to control all these... you damn Manvi, if he sleeps or not what is your problem? He's not that good like you think... he'll always hurt you and would never understand your feelings... Live your life in your own way..." she said herself.

Wow that is really a longgg update...

Okaay we start at the chapter 28i

Feel sad for Manvi..
Manvi really had a cruel past..
Loved how Shruthi told everyone the truth...
Feel sad for Virat...He know that he is wrong...
Hope the will find Manvi soon...

Chapter 28ii
Ooohhh everyone is angry on Virat...
While reading the letter i litterly got tears in my eyes...
Feel really sad for Virman...
Hate Preethi and Shimrithi for doing this to us Virman...
Thank god Viren and Shruthi found Manvi...
But sad how the found Manvi under the shower...
Poor Virat Viren shouts on him...
Love Virat care for Manvi...

Chapter 28iii
Feel sad for Virat that Manvi dont want to talk to him...
But Viren still support Virat...
Loved the little Virat and Shruthi part...
Shruthi is such a drama queen...
Loved Viren and Virat scene at the dinner table...
How she planned to send Virat with Manvi to the mandhir...
Loved that little Virman scene...
Poor Virat still trying to get Manvi back...
Awww Manvi was concerned when she didnt see Virat for 2 days...
Awww Virat brought Manvi family...
Love the romantic little part..
Awww they kissed...
Awww Manvi is pregnent loved the last part..
When everyone heard that Manvi is pregnent...

Epilogue
Poor Virat dont get much attention from his wife..
Aww he is jalous...
Awww the get a baby girl...

Loved the whole story...
Thankksss for such a amazing story..
But why did you stoped???
And why will you not come on IF now????

But thankksss for all the updates..
And thanksss for all the PM...
Will Miss Youuu...
Hope you will be back soon...

awesome update and awesome ending finally everything
clear there Mu also he give her surprise her family and
she give him good news

i felt like watching a film.

that was freakin awesome update !! so long and such a beautifully potrayed story ..u have done a good job. will miss ur story though. good luck for ur future ahead :)

It was a super duper update...

Jst loved it...
Suspense pr suspense... Omg..!!!

Ttooo guudd...!!!