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roseycheek

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Posted: 11 years ago

#861

very well written chapter...Oh Arnav!! he is such a complex man built from his complex past and present...and khushi must be heartbroken..but kind of glad that she got to know the part of the truth...atleast this will give some direction to their married life...and Aman and Anjali...I have a strong feeling tat Aman knows her feelings and may be he does reciprocate it as well but something is holding him back..hopefully the news of marriage will get tat moving too...

wonderful chapter!

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#862

Just wanted to say this to myself

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#863

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"Brilliant" would be too weak a word to describe this work. The drama you enfold leaves us seated at edge for the entire length of your update. I knew we will be having a face-off between Arnav and his mother in this update, but what followed later was not expected and it thrilled more when it came in as a surprise.

It is sad but true that mothers like this do exists for real. I love Arnav more for giving his mother a piece of his mind at every thrown opportunity. But this lady deserves a more worser treatment and I am sure we will have more such face-off's

Arnav's past is more intriguing now. He could have been an artist. I somehow feel it is the creatively involved people who feel more throttled when they are made to chose a different career path. Chances are more for him to have been closely related to an artist and may be it is secret memories that he is treasuring there away from the world he belongs to. I cant wait to know his past.

The madman act did scare me and you had written it out so well that I kept blinking my eyes after his lines. Men react to just not the situation at hand but it is always a cumulative reaction for them. They don't vent out easily but when they do they don't do it the easy way. Arnav did get lucky there when the lady very reasonably analysed his act and decided to see through him to understand better.

The terrace revelation did stir her up and I cant wait to see her reaction to this side of Arnav. I am just loving this hero who is a perfect blend of everything that defines masculinity.

Aman - Ahhh that is a totally cute track there. It was expected of Anjali to give her consent for marriage. But Aman's reaction to it is a sure sign of hope and I am just ambitious for this love to prosper soon.

Wonderful job and I am loving it. Thank you for being kind towards us with frequent updates. Now that I have thanked, can we expect the next update soon.

Edited by preethi.saseeda - 11 years ago

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anu1017

@anu1017

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Posted: 11 years ago

#864

That was an awesome update Shwetha!!!!! Day of confrontations and revelations indeed...

I am still confused by Anjili's behavior, why didn't she jump at the opportunity to study further now that she has Arnav's support???

Poor Khushi cannot even begin with Arnav's behavior, maybe this is the push they needed to start a honest relationship. Sigh!! if only Arnav opened up a little bit and talked to Khushi like she us a wife and not something he needs to bear all his life.

What is the secret of the room, cannot wait for the kamre ka raaz to come out lol!!!!

Poor Aman looks like his heart is broken but maybe it needed to break for him to either get some courage and propose to Anji or keep his peace for life!!!!

I hope Khushi will not forgive Arnav once he says his non sorry with flowers as he has been using her to his whims so real penance is required from him lol!!!!

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Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#865

Art and artefacts he doesn't want to sell to the British Museum.

Hmmm am trying to imagine scenarios but can't wait to read yours.

Poor Khushi ... Impossible to deal with a blow hot blow cold Arnav. At least he has Aman to vent but her???

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janu

@Janu75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#866

Slowly we are inching towards Arnav's past and khushi is still in a mood to understand her husband,an enigma .

Khushi is clever enough to gauze his intentions and is now to see how Arnav handles.

Arnav ,very cleverly approached Anjali's issue without revealing himself but mom ,has deduced the reason behind his chat

Looking forward to Aman how he is to react to the news of anjalis wedding plans .

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#867

Shwetaji no delays this time...edited my comments here 😳

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

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Posted: 11 years ago

#868

what a amazing story!

I feel so sorry for khushi! she probably doesnt know whether shes coming or going! Arnav is so hot and cold and full of secrets! His mum is horrible and akash is a monster. Weird family. At least tge grandma is sane!

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sarahjac

@sarahjac

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Posted: 11 years ago

#869

The tension was palpable throughout the chapter, whether it was Arnav's confrontation with his mother ( I almost took him for a caged lion ready to bite the head off of our very lovely ring master...I guess he almost did, didn't he? ) or his little sister's highly frustrating submissive nature, his past rearing it's head yet again or his outburst towards his unsuspecting wife and finally not so subtle declaration of the sham that he really is.

What a day Arnav has had...all in all a power packed chapter...simply awesome :)

PS: If anything can go wrong, it will.

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#870

Good to see Arnav supporting his sister but if Anjali has agreed then there is nothing much which he can do.

So he seems to be deprived of care and attention from his parents. Maybe this explains why he is so distant and cold towards feelings.

It was nice to see him taking a stand for his wife when his mother bad mouthed her.

So Khushi has noticed that Rashid Chacha is missing. She's a smart girl and maybe she will pursue this matter on her own to find out more about her missing Chacha and parent's death.

Unfortunately she caught him at a bad time. He had his guard down and was at his vulnerable most. His reaction though is not justified at all.

As if this wasn't enough she get's to hear that their relationship is nothing but a political move for him. This is shattering. Poor Khushi. How much more will she have to go through.

Ahh arts. So that's where he finds his solace and let's his emotions get the better of him. He is human after all. Everyone needs a let out and this is his way.

Now that Aman knows about Anjali, will he break his silence and take things in his hand or keep his feelings buried inside him...