Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 1 - Page 85

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Posted: 11 years ago
An early update is always such a treat ! Thank you !

Now Payal and Akash ... what do i say ! Marital Abuse is very much relevant even in today's times and no matter how much we harp about it from a distance , one can never place themselves in place of the victim. A lot of issues stand as a hurdle for the woman in question , like her own self confidence being thrashed , fear of society , fear of not being independent to name a few.
So to sit back and say why the hell does she just not leave him is really of no answer.
It was very sad to see how Payal picked herself up after the physical abuse meted by Akash and went about her chores as per the norm , unfortunately this is such a scary but true scenario in many homes.
I am hoping that Payal is able to believe in herself and gets the courage to stand up soon! I am sure there will be Arnav and Khushi to support her but at the end of the day it is her decision to make.

Coming to Arnav and Khushi ... awww these two are the cutest in love but yet not in love couple i have come across !
Now sometimes Arnav's behavior really does confuse me alot , like i am unable to comprehend when he is being a genuine or just trying to grab an opportunity present.
But i believe that what ever he does even if it is for a political agenda his conscious is in the right place at heart.
All their scenes together in this update were very beautiful and gave a out a very positive feeling , i always love his wise cracks for eg his "skinny dipping " comment. He truly is a charmer.

Now Khushi has disclosed about Anjali and thankfully not about Aman ,,,, very good decision.
I hope nothing back fires on her ! Rest Arnav is there to handle !

Ps: Missing Aman !






Edited by _disha_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved the retort given by Khushi when she was forcefully kissed. It was different . Like this story is. Would also love to see more of Anjali and arnav .Aakash is an arsehole of the first order, he needs to go to jail.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey my sister recommended this story to me and I'm glad that she did. I'm reading it now, do include me in your pm list darling.
I will be back soon with a full-fledged comment on the story when I catch up with it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Shweta,

The update was still short.

Payal and Akash, what do I say about these two? With their story you are drawing attention to one of the most common problem faced by women across the world; domestic abuse. It also highlights the fact that domestic abuse has nothing to do with social or financial status. It's prevalent across all classes, poor or rich doesn't matter. I will probably be in the minority when I say; I understand why Payal cannot leave Akash or why she shouldn't leave, Akash. When a woman gets married (love or arranged, doesn't matter) she may have 100 reasons to walk away but finds 1000 reasons to stay in the marriage. Few of the prominent ones are love, family, friends, social status, financial independence, children, emotional dependency and self-confidence. We don't know what Payal's reasons are. It can also be that she understands Akash's state of mind, his frustration, his distress at being not in the forefront of politics or family matters.

Having said all that, I am not supporting Akash or domestic abusing, just stating some hard realities of life.

We have Akash and Payal, who are married properly with consent of the families, rituals and all that, but alas don't have a marriage. And then we have Arnav and Khushi, who got married in very unusual circumstances, marriage was nonexistent thought on their minds, aren't behaving life husband and wife yet, unknown to them they have a marriage and they are slowly becoming husband and wife.

Khushi decided to do her own digging and peel open layers of the enigma called Arnav Singh Raizada. This is first initiative she taking as wholeheartedly as wife to know her husband and in that process she will discover herself, grow as a person and reinvent her life. That little moment in the car where she touches Arnav, she was being a tease and this is the first time we are getting to see this side of her.

I am glad to get insight into what transpired between Arnav and Khushi after the function, I really wanted to know. I am liking their car rides and they kind of signify the progress in their relationship. The first car ride was when they got married, it was full of apprehension, pain, nervousness, lack of clarity about future and above all they were strangers. Second car ride was to Ujjain, there was anger, annoyance, and care, plus they were aware of each other's presence. Third car ride was to the function it was flirty, there was silence yet they were paying attention to each other and stealing glances. Fourth ride was back from function and it was full of tension and distress. Arnav shut Khushi off and it was more like "they have a long way to go". Fifth ride to Ajora, there was easy camaraderie between them, Arnav let Khushi touch him and they were travelling as equals.

The moment by the lake was a mirror reflection of the moment they shared by the pond in Ujjain. The difference being in Ujjain, Khushi got a peek into the real Arnav and here Arnav got a glimpse of Khushi's life.

Like Khushi, Arnav isn't making any effort to know or understand Khushi, but he is absorbing any insight, information or detail he gets about her and is putting it to good use.

I wonder how Aman will react when Arnav shares what his family has planned for, Anjali. Anjali and Aman have a history and whatever it is has shattered Anjali's dreams and hopes, hence she is giving up on her studies and making a compromise with her life.

PS: Sorry, Shweta didn't mean to write a comment longer than the update!! 😆

Edited by Crazy4Sobti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am wondering way payal is still stuck with spineless good for nothing akaash what is stopping her to get him out of her life that low life is so mean n she is taking all for what
their car journey was quite comfortable glad he didn't refused her made her gut the ribbon didn't try to take all the credit behaved like the one of the crowd true politician he is might be a good human being but he cares his career a lot liked the little chit chat getting better n comfortable with the time
nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shweta, when can we expect the next update?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Will the author accept my apologies for not being here for a while now...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shwetaji apologies life has been very busy and crazy in the last one mth so could not comment for the last 2 updates.
A big big wala sorry...


i love this story and your writing continues to amaze me every single time.
So all applauds to you for doing such a fine job of narrating this masterpiece. 👏

Moving on to the last update...2 couples both tied up in bonds of marriage but the approach and conduct so different.

I get that akash is a frustrated & bitter man today but blaming his wife for all his failures is just so ehh detestable. Poor payal the way she conducts herself inspite of the personal hell that she undergoes at the hands of her husband is commendable. I wish sincerely though that she becomes a bit more strong and doesn't take shit lying down. It will be interesting to see how akash would react if payal were to give it back to him.

Moving on to Arnav & khushi...they entered this relationship with no expectation whatsoever. Off course its going to be a difficult ride for them each trying to understand the other but what clearly stands out in the relationship is the respect that they have for each other.

Loved the way Arnav gave the due credit to khushi's efforts and acknowledged it in front of everybody. And that lovely moment beside the lake was like a cherry on top of the cake.

Now that khushi has shared the news of anjali's impending matrimony it will be interesting to see how the equation of anjali & aman plays out.

Great update shweta and as usual i am eager to know the story ahead jaldi jaldi...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: preethi.saseeda

Will the author accept my apologies for not being here for a while now...


App katar mai hain...i just finished doing my bit of sorries! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
seeing you online makes my heart go dhak dhak Shweta :-) that was a cheesy like I know but I am really waiting for this update to know what happens next..
Poor Payal is stuck in this marriage for her family I guess..Aman is still emotionally attached to his ex girlfriend and hence didn't acknowledge Anjali may b..

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