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seema13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#471

It was a nice update...loved how both of them r posessive towards each other.So Arnav offered Khushi to work for ngo nd m glad she accepted it.Oh...they dance together .it was first time when they r so close to each other but ...damn Akash...when m was expecting some more romance beetween them...Akash ruined all the moments...i feel very pity abt Payal When will she learn to take her stand?

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kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#472

Ohhh i am loving this shweta.

What an unapologetic Arnav Singh Raizada but damn you cant help but fall in love with him.

His J factor and her J factor but a sea of difference in my reaction. While i was ready to pat NKs back and hug him for stroking the green eyed monster in Arnav.

But with Sunaina i was ready to rip that chudail's hair apart. 😆

But jo bhi ho mazaa toh khubh araha hai mujhe. 😳 Bring it on, all the NKs and chudails of the world whatever it takes to break these two from the tight rope of practicalities that they have tied themselves in.

Loved that oh not so romantic dance which carried so many promises ahead. Off course dumb ass Akash had to break all our dreams just when things were starting to sizzle on the dance floor.

And the ever sensible Arnav swings into action.

Waise toh U know but phir bhi waiting eagerly for the next update.

P.S: Lovely banner once again Geeta. But bechara Aman uske darshan toh kabhi nahi honge, idhar bhi MIA. 😆

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sman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: kondhili
Ohhh i am loving this shweta.

What an unapologetic Arnav Singh Raizada but damn you cant help but fall in love with him.

His J factor and her J factor but a sea of difference in my reaction. While i was ready to pat NKs back and hug him for stroking the green eyed monster in Arnav.

But with Sunaina i was ready to rip that chudail's hair apart. 😆

But jo bhi ho mazaa toh khubh araha hai mujhe. 😳 Bring it on, all the NKs and chudails of the world whatever it takes to break these two from the tight rope of practicalities that they have tied themselves in.

Loved that oh not so romantic dance which carried so many promises ahead. Off course dumb ass Akash had to break all our dreams just when things were starting to sizzle on the dance floor.

And the ever sensible Arnav swings into action.

Waise toh U know but phir bhi waiting eagerly for the next update.

P.S: Lovely banner once again Geeta. But bechara Aman uske darshan toh kabhi nahi honge, idhar bhi MIA. 😆

haa haaa loved your comment..Aman hamare khayalon me hee hai IPK days se :-) we can imagine him whomever we want as per the FF story line..lets debate a TV actor who will suit the role of Aman in this FF.. hmmm Gautam Rode may be..a little bit mature, well dressed and humourous too.. what say?

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thamanna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#474

Awesome !!!!!!!

Kushi will do wonders with NGO.

Glad to see Arnav and kushi's jealousy sides.

Love your long update. Specially after making us waiting for long for your updates.

Waiting is always worth for too.

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shree10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#475

I finished all the chaps at 1 go! The story is pretty interesting and gripping. Very well written.
I liked your portrayal of Khushi. At 21 , she is mature, strong and yet a woman inside. I really like the way she faces and matches Arnav word for word.
Really looking forward to next updates and esp how Arshi dynamics as a couple changes.

Thanks Disha for recommending this story.

Do u PM? If yes then I would like to receive one.

Can't believe my luck a s a reader that after more than 1 year since the show ended, still such amazing stories come out for our fav on-screen couple!

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#476

Thanks to Disha... If not for your recommendation I would have missed such an amazing work...

To the author --- Hats off... 👏👏👏

Very impressive story line - You have written it so beautifully with right amount of wit for a very gripping political drama. I am so reminded of the Bollywood movie Rajneeti. The stories are completely different except for the fact that both are set in a political background. But I am bringing in it up to say that this work is no less to the hit bollywood movie but way better than it... I could'nt stop anywhere in-between and I read the entire story far at a stretch...

Strong Characters - Both the male n female protagonist are level headed and equals here... The aura of the man here is so strong n contagious and one cant help but fall in love with him accepting that his character is grey and he has his own share of negatives... You have very amazingly brought out the intricacies in a person who is forced to become a politician because of situations n not out of will. The man has a very disturbing past n though it is not yet disclosed, the characters actions because of that are very justifiable... I love the bond he shares with his grand mother... I love his brains... I love his arrogance... I love his sense of responsibility... I love every different shade of this man, both the positives n negatives for you my girl have sketched it out so very well in a very realistic way...

Often we misjudge the courage of rural girls... I feel they are more courageous, strong-willed and brave... You have showcased this fact very beautifully in Khushi. Inspite of her grievous situation, the girl gave it back to the bull in the most deserving manner... I am loving every bit of interaction between Arnav n Khushi... It is all so flammable and you have established a very strong chemistry there...

Aman - can we just add a space in his name there and that is what he is here "A man" in every possible sense... What made him all the more endearing is the fact that he has not fallen out of love with the girl who lost her life battling cancer... If only there were PR like him for our politicians, there will be no scandals at all... Oh the way he handled media when he had to air the marriage news of ASR, I was all phan-girling him and I read that part multiple times n I was whistling away as many times...

Every other character is so strongly written.. For his rash n rude behavior, one will have to hate the man but we can't... The way you have justified his failure allows us with sympathy for him. But on the other side we are left feeling like to hit him hard for the way he treats Payal... Poor Payal, the lady has the most worst life here... I am loving Anjali for who she is and it is better I dont talk about Arnav's Mother... That lady is not worth mentioning at all...

I am hooked to your story and thank you for choosing to share it with us. I am not sure if u have a regular schedule for updating, n I will not be in need of PM's as I am a wonderful stalker...