Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 1 - Page 29

I read ur ff in one go mind blowing concept political back ground need n greed aims that make a person inhuman very close to reality for his need how he played with khushi's future saved her on one side but trapped her in emotionless relation it feels like golden cage for life time

awesome updt
its good that lavnya is out of picture
but i still donot like this that arnav brake his relation. with lavnya because this can effect his career not because he is married
i know that arnav is irritated because he is doing something which he never want to do
he had left his own dream for his family
aman also seem had a past
when arnav said that he had already left whom he care i hope he is talking about his dreams not any girl or previous love
atlast khushi arnav part is nice
khushi want to know about arnav
i hope their relation progress some soon
thnx for pm
updt soon

nice story...pls pm me..when u update

Hey Shweta,

I am humbled with your thank you note, given the fact that I am still a new reader of this story. I really my recommendation brings in more readers for you. You and your story truly deserve them.

Before I move forward with my comment, I would like to mention that I really like it when the authors title their chapters. It kind of nicely wraps the update and sets some preface too.

Closure or disclosure notice: Its closure of Arnav's liaison with Lavanya by disclosing to her that Khushi is his wife. That's how I read the title.

I like you leaving crumbs of Arnav's past not giving away anything. It's intriguing and is building the required curiosity for the story.

Arnav and Aman's conversation was interesting but what I found interesting was Arnav going to Aman before meeting Lavanya. Though Khushi is pretty much nonexistent to Arnav, deep down in his mind and heart he knew he shouldn't be going to Lavanya or cheating on his wife and above all for his career. I think he just wanted somebody to support his actions/decisions regarding Lavanya and who better than Aman. He was probably hoping that Aman would encourage him to go to Lavanya, but he should know better. He was still not sure when he meets Lavanya about which way to go but Lavanya's low talk about Khushi really did it and pushed him to do the right thing. Arnav loves his family and does anything to protect them and Khushi is family now. So, there is no way he is going to stand and listen to Lavanya when she is trashing Khushi.

I like the way you built the scene between Arnav and Khushi. It's like Khushi getting first glimpse of Arnav's life. Like you said there was so much domesticity to their conversation. Arnav has way too many walls and guards build around himself and it's not going to be easy for Khushi to break them. In the process of knowing and healing Arnav she might be bruised too with Arnav's actions and words. They both are far far away from thinking of each other as husband and wife.

You doing a good job of not rushing their relationship. Keep it up!!

loved it!! good that arnav gave the much needed earful to lavanya n removed her outta his life. hope she doesnt create misundrstandings in future betwn the lovely couple, who curently have so many problms to sort out themselves. felt really bad for arnav on how he had to give up his dreams n the life he loved for something he didnt wished to do in the first place. i really wanna know something. is arnav really interested in his political life? i mean does he now love what he's doing?? or he is doing all these out of compulsion even now? silly question but i really wanna knw. didnt like the way how he viewed khushi in his room. thinking of using her to kill his frustration is utterly disgusting. so glad he stopped himself. i wonder under what circumstances will he fall in love with her. i guess it'll be mainly due to the support n care she's gonna give him in all the good things.

update soon...its saturday😛

new reader

I loved the scene in the dark room between Arnav and Khushi.. Both craved company actually.

Take your time will be waiting eagerly :)