ArHi SS:Seduction *Thread 3* (COMPLETED)

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sudhalata1

@sudhalata1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

Absolutely brilliant story. It all feels so real because of the way you write. Can feel smthng happening around as i read the update. Hope Arnav can find a way to liberate khushi from the curse. Take a bow. It was brilliant

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melanie64

@melanie64

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Wow, wonderfull update 😊 Paranormal 😊 I love storyline

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adhu11

@adhu11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Beautiful. No words to write👏

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Akanksha-

@Akanksha-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

one more beautiful update...His desperation to save her from curse and her resignation to her fate...
Just loving this different tale on arhi...Glad that we will get a happy ending
Thank you for the PM😊

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

after every part you leave us with clif hanger...
this part was hopefull..
thanks fr pm...
update soon

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710617

Suspended

Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Arnav will die and free her from the curse..by saying let Khushi be from the curse... The love will kill the hate. Quite like lily porter was stronger than voldemort...

It's a well written story.. I love it

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raina

@Girlabouttown

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#257

This is such an apt name for this story

You have Seduced your readers with this story.

I just can't wait for d next part

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vgedin

@vgedin

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

Unresed here :)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/96266242

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 11 years ago

#259

wow what a mind blowing update

my God she is more than century old and returns to the painting

Payal was the interloper, she was just so nasty
hope she burned in hell for what she did to Khushi

cant wait to read how they break the curse

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#260

J this concept might not be everyone's cup of tea but the way you have built the story, the characters and the equation between the characters, can't stop anyone from getting completely engrossed in the story and love it none the less. Myself being a prime example, I am always in awe of your writing!

The way you described Arnav's grief and helplessness was nothing short of extra ordinary, I was feeling Shattered for him, for Khushi *sighs! The way he just couldn't bring himself to move from the blue room, the way he responded to NK's queries was just so darn real, it is as if I was going through every single emotion that he was experiencing. Just loved the way you replaced his helplessness to the feeling of determination to get Khushi out of this mess, to free her from the curse and the painting. I couldn't be more delighted to see our Dr ASR determined to help himself and Khushi! At this point I almost gave up on Khushi reappearing till you surprised Arnav and us with her comeback. I felt the relief that washed over Arnav right that second. Then you had us feeling every single emotion Khushi was going through, I found myself being scared for her with every move. She can't get happy or she is going to get trapped again. But how is she going to be happy knowing what she knew!

You covered all the questions that were going through my mind regarding the curse, why Khushi gets pulled into it, why can't she be stopped from going into the painting, what if the painting is to be destroyed and just how did Payal manage to be able to execute this curse. You amazed me with research that you have put into your work J, covering every single detail! I am forever impressed with the way you have pulled this concept off J! The play of your words showing us exactly how each character is feeling, Khushi's helplessness at her own plight knowing the fact that she has already tried everything and what Arnav was doing for her was going to be just another failed attempt at breaking the curse, broke my heart for her all over again. At the same time it was great to see that she doesn't feel so alone anymore and because someone is fighting for her this time, she will let them!

The only question that remains now is just what is going to happen in the next chapter? I suppose I will have to hang on to the cliff again to get my answer eh! :-)

PS. LOVED the very appropriate Banner for this FIC! It definitely captures Arnav's helplessness at not being able to do a thing for a trapped Khushi.

Edited by Arshix144 - 11 years ago