ArHi SS:Seduction *Thread 3* (COMPLETED)

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Just an amazing narration was reading with bated breath. Lost all my nails while reading it. Thank you for the note of happy ending. Waiting eagerly to know how. Thanks for the PM.

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rabid52

@rabid52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Amazing. You truly weave a good tale.

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#233

I m speechless!!
what an awesome update!
its 3am here n I was really scared wen I was reading it!
I have read any stories related to paranormal activity..
gosh it scares me to death..
Arnav would do anything to save her from that curse..
I got answers of some of my questions!!
god payal was so evil!
Her one curse made Khushi's life a living hell!
But Arnav to help her..
I know he would defo do something to help her..!
Everything seems so real to me in this FF
You're a fabulous writer Juhi!!
Hats off :)
I really can't wait to read the next update :)

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svmi

@svmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

brilliant. waiting for Prince charming to break the curse.

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rana5

@rana5

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Oh my! I guess they will get to the next stage of their relationship. I am so glad that Arnav is being supportive. I have a feeling that the curse will only be broken if there is something to counteract the hate. That can only be Arnav's love!

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Wow! I'll be honest with you Juhi. When I read chapter 6, I was disappointed at the supernatural turn of things and that's why I didn't comment. But the way you have written chapter 7 is just phenomenal. You have treated this supernatural / paranormal syndrome so naturally that I have been sucked back into the story again, just like Khushi gets sucked into the picture! 😉

Arnav's despair and determination and then his methodical approach to solving the problem was so well written. And then there is Khushi and her overwhelming feelings and emotions... Very well done! 👏 Will look forward to the future updates...

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Aw my heart goes out to Arnav seriously!

He was just there waiting for her and it didn't matter to him about how long it would take but then took a wiser decision and started looking into it finding more and getting her help

It's interesting to know how much she tried to do herself and how she feels each time she goes in

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Anudesh

@Anudesh

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#238

👏One needs to be extremely talented to write on such a subject ,I think you are not only talented but a fabulous writer who can make believe that such things do exist. I am very excited to see how this story unfolds so looking fwd for your next update.👏

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bellacoolio

@bellacoolio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#239

Brilliant update! Thank you for shedding light on Payal. She must be a really troubled soul! Looking forward to the next update..

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#240

Great job Juhi!!

To be honest I'm quite conflicted about this topic and the dynamics behind it.

But I feel you've handled it in a very realistic and believable manner. I applaud you for that.

You are writing this so I've continued reading it, you've definitely peaked my interest!!