ArHi FF[Fate's Deception]#2* Teaser updated on pg 141

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maria

@Maria.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: Chanyaforever
Read this one in one go, took me just 1 hour and I am speechless..👏
I really love the way you are writing, your choosen words, the characters and their feelings.. I can always feel with them! I feel sorry and very said for Khushi, always unwanted! My heard skipped as I read the lines that she felt herself as an unwanted wife.. poor girl!😒
On the other hand we have Arnav, who was not ready for a marriage.. with his dark past and horrible childhood! Two demaged souls are brought together to find their new destiny..

So, why is Arnav behaving like a jerk after marrying her?
Why is Arnav bringing Khushi to his friend's house?
And who the hell is this Lena chick?? (Ups sorry for that..😳)..
Yaar, please update soon, I want an answer to my questions very soon...

Maria, I wanted to say a big thank you to you, because you don't let us forget IPKKND - Khushi and Arnav, the best show ever on TV.. and thank you for your creativity. I enjoy all your stories and have read most of them, they are all unique and magical! You are one a the best story tellers for me..

Love, Chanya.

aww chanya🤗

Thank you so much for taking out ur precious time and reading this story.Thanks for ur beautiful comments and compliments.i'm happy to find another amazing reader.Thank you again.

i hope you'll like coming parts of this story,too.

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#562

She has already suffered a lot and now with Arnav's past and love interest has to bear again..not fair :(

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#563

Longgg time since you updated

Please next part soon :)

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fffan123

@fffan123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#564

Nice story. Please update next part soon.

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819504

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Posted: 11 years ago

#565

marriage done...!!anyhow arnavji...married khush but is arshi anyway going to lead a life as a couple's...!!
I knw they need time bt still..🤔
lookng forward to it...update next soon...waitng..!😊

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redpetals123

@redpetals123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#566

Hey like your earlier story I liked this one also, its really awesome , pls update soon want to know the secret of lina.

Pm me when you update.

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maria

@Maria.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#567

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#568

RES 😃

( And for the first time ever I score the first spot on your update M! I am ecstatic!🤗 )

M, thank you yet another intriguing chapter for this wonderful FF! I can't commend you enough for giving us such a different and refreshing concept to read about. While Arnav acted as Khushi's saviour by giving her a new life and rescuing her from clutches of her cruel family, it appears as though the new arrangement isn't any better. While her father managed to hurt her both physically and emotionally, Arnav is quite unintentionally hurting her as well by further damaging her self esteem and confidence. She is again feeling the same rejection that she felt while she was with her family and my heart broke for her all over again.

Again you portrayal of emotions was brilliant, Khushi making a resolve with herself and quickly accepting whatever Arnav hurled at her after her initial outburst was again painful and even Arnav sensed that. Looking forward to things getting better for Khushi, loved the update!

Ps. Congratulations for your cousin's wedding and thank you for giving us updates even when you are extremely busy!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#569

ahhh seems things arent good for arhi
but am hoping all will be okay and soon
hmmm i think they shall be
that wasnt eay for either
oh man this was something
hope you had fun in the wedding
cheers for pm