ArHi FF[Fate's Deception]#2* Teaser updated on pg 141

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#551

nice update

why is arnav being so cold to khushi

n who is lina

now i'm really worried for khushi

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#552

11 chapters ... mmm

good one but now that arshi are together would need to read more

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 11 years ago

#553

damn please don't let Arnav hurt Khushi by cheating on his vows

she has been through so much pain

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#554

Nice update...Khushi & Arnav moving forth in a new life together.. Khushi is unsettled at the mention of Lina, I wonder who she is.. 🤔

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sreemeera

@sreemeera

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Posted: 11 years ago

#555

Awesome.

Feel bad for Khushi.. Now who is this Leena and what relation she have with Arnav?

What is fate kept there for Khushi??

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savi_malvi

@savi_malvi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#556

Fantastic update dear. Poor Khushi she has already been through so much of pain, hope she doesn't face betrayal. Thanx for the pm.

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#557

loved the update but i cant understand he married her and not he is back to being his old self and not giving her the place she deserves in his life and wat this with the girlfriend:((

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Chandana

@chandana.s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#558

Awesome part...

Felt really bad for Khushi,She was already so much hurt bu her fathers behavior & now all of a sudden Arnav's ignorance & cold behavior hurting her more...How much can she bare... 😭

Who is Lina!! Cant wait to see what gonna happen next

Update soon

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Chanyaforever

@Chanyaforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#559

Read this one in one go, took me just 1 hour and I am speechless..👏

I really love the way you are writing, your choosen words, the characters and their feelings.. I can always feel with them! I feel sorry and very said for Khushi, always unwanted! My heard skipped as I read the lines that she felt herself as an unwanted wife.. poor girl!😒

On the other hand we have Arnav, who was not ready for a marriage.. with his dark past and horrible childhood! Two demaged souls are brought together to find their new destiny..

So, why is Arnav behaving like a jerk after marrying her?

Why is Arnav bringing Khushi to his friend's house?

And who the hell is this Lena chick?? (Ups sorry for that..😳)..

Yaar, please update soon, I want an answer to my questions very soon...

Maria, I wanted to say a big thank you to you, because you don't let us forget IPKKND - Khushi and Arnav, the best show ever on TV.. and thank you for your creativity. I enjoy all your stories and have read most of them, they are all unique and magical! You are one a the best story tellers for me..

Love, Chanya.

Edited by Chanyaforever - 11 years ago