Arshi: Before It Is Too Late(Part- 37 Last Part pg 50) 19/7/2014 - Page 34

Awesome story... Great start...lovely concept... I too wanted to see arnav' repentance track as he didn't suffer in real TV show...you have a beautiful storytelling skill...I admired it very much...but I would have loved to see some reality as I am not that fond of too much fiction and drama...you started well..but I think khushi's accident, her memory loss, two years distance ...its too much... It is very dramatic...though I loved her diary part and the lines she wrote...but from after that track story takes commonly known ups and downs which are easily predictable...neither I feel need to show khushi as always a pure soul always sacrificing...I trust and respect love a lot...but still accident sequence was too dramatic and not needed...simplicity can do wonders sometimes..anyways ..no intention to offend you

awesome story. amazing concept loved it

Truly a brilliant fiction

Woooww...superb story..amazingly written circumstances

this story alway touch my heart
while reading it gives so many emotions
a worth reading story of arshi
loved it
waiting for ur comeback

Awesum ff

Read the story loved it

Awesome story... Thoroughly enjoyed reading it... It was like watching the show once again... After long.. And reading different Arshi stories... some of the chapters and Khushi's antics made me laugh like crazy... I'm so glad I came across this story...hope it gets across to many readers...A Must Read for All Arshi fans...Thanks dear for this beautiful journey...you truly re-created IPKKND, at least for me.. that too with all positive characters... I'm truly speechless..well done...👏👏👏.hope you will post the epilogue some day...

Its such a wonderful Story... Love it... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

what an amazing..emotional and so beauiful story...

god i loved it so much