Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 18) - Page 43

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Posted: 11 years ago
I love the pace because its a good one, explaining the situation and feelings step by step
keep it up hun <3

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Posted: 11 years ago
I find khushi kinda cute, getting into being a married women avatar
It's not her fault to not act differently after being married as she's in the same house and around same ppl, so obviously it's gonna take her some time to get that feel I think
Thanx for the note
Eagerly waiting for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for note anon...
Will wait... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I hope she falls in love with him soon...
Wonderful update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi,
I am here after a very long time. I am sorry I couldn't comment on every chapter. Have been too busy =(

Beautiful chapters. Loved reading them all. The relief that Arnav and Khushi are married. I 100% agree with papa Raizada...more than Khushi it's Arnav who needs her in his life. He needs someone like Khushi to get back his life together. I hope there is a scene where Khushi does Arnav's tie for him...you know Arnav once wished for that no when she helped papa with it ;) I hope sometime in the future you can include that :)

Khushi is in that newly wed mode where she gets to wear all those beautiful saris and ornaments with it. With the talk that she had with bade papa I am sure she will try and understand her husband more. I hope she makes time and space for him in her life and heart and I also hope she pays an extra attention to him :D

I would also hope that Arnav will also try and take her out and spend some time with Khushi so that they can get to know each other better.

Pls cont soon...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the note...not that I have anything against her behavior, but its always feels good to know the characters' POV better...and take ur time...will b waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I can understand .. take your time .. will wait for update.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anony_mous



Hey Guys,

Thank you for your wonderful comments. Read 'em all and loved them 🤗

Some readers are finding Khushi immature/materialistic/not serious about marriage. I just wanna say give her some time. In MKM world its been only two days since her rushed nuptials and she is already on the path of creating love in her marriage. Don't hold it against her if she wants to enjoy her new look and marital status for a while. Every girl is entitled to. She was already a complicated man's weakness, and now she has signed up for being his wife. So her work is cut out for her :)

I know the gaps these days in updates are long and I am not liking it either. But I want to tell you that for a few weeks I can manage only weekly updates. I'll try to get back to 4-5 day frequency, but can't promise anything :(

Next update in 3-4 days. Thanks for waiting 😊


You are so right. I did get married at such a young age and I distinctly remember that I was so excited about the superficial trappings of being a married woman...the clothes, the jewelery, the bindis...till the responsibility put all that stuff in perspective and jump started maturity.

Wow...I love your phrase...below...awesome...did not think of her as his weakness but you are right...until he feels, realizes or admits to love...that is what she is...will he make her pay a price for being his weakness?

"She was already a complicated man's weakness, and now she has signed up for being his wife. So her work is cut out for her :)"

Edited by Anamika100 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: thulasi_arshi

hey...i'm commenting on page 16..sweet 16
1st para

"started bitterly ends with warmness"
"he used to resort to hugging soft toys as a replacement of a loving parent cuddling and patting him to sleep"

how pathetic he was

"so he switched to hugging gender neutral pillows. It was a habit now."



"Like a garden full of roses" ..arnav hugging her..his girl,his wife,his life,his soul,his happiness...his khushi




hmmm..pillow to khushi..this replacement must be purely bliss to him na


"He assessed that the only thing that was keeping her from falling off was, well, his tight hold over her midriff which was peeking from the pale blue satin sleeveless PJ top that she was wearing which had ridden up."


OMG...HOT dammit..how we will bear suhagraat upate

(suchi..here activate gutter mind wa😆😆)

ufff..khushi too both acknowledged lately..
that they married..no more single's


"Can you get ready with that on your hands? Is that thing permanent?"


what the..sadu sadu
try to search A dammit before it vanish



"'What? I only married Arnavji so that I can stay in this house. Now you can not take the perks that come with it away from me"

she doesn't aware that she slightly touched wrong button..but its slightly near to the FACT FACT...which do not like to hear even little bit by her husband



" 'Without elder people pinching my cheek as if I me wearing a saree is eighth wonder of the world which needs special reviewing, or buaji putting a kohl dot behind my ear every time I decide to wear one, or without my..."


hmmm...i dono why..all parents fuss about this issue..experienced same..
but unlike khushi i do not like to wear sari frequently


sumer fear was understandable..coming to promise thing,,

" And she planned to take care of him even without any promises." ..

i'm relaxed only after reading this line..do not like to read that khushi start to love only bcos of promise..yeah..no one can love anybody for compensation n promises until they feel them self..atleast a DOT.. they can took care n show affection..but not surely love..hope khushi ll not fall under this category ..

love..it have to come in is own way


enough of my blah blah

lovely update hope your wrist well now..take care..update soon




ps: sruti..if update delayed like this..afraid that u ll win the bet😳☺️😆
tanu di..finally u commented on 1st page
couldn't active in CS for a month..CSG..miss u all🤗


oooh lovely comment...
seriusly sadu is not trying to find his name.
suhagrAAT k liye wait karo...anycase morning romance toh mil hi gaya...😉
and wat i said i will win the bet..yes.
n no worries di...these days most of the csg members are busy.,...😛
Edited by shruti46 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
3-4 days 😔 ...but its ok we will wait n thanks for the note...

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