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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update as usual A!!! Loved it the way it started on the light note in the morning and ended with Khushi learning more about Arnav. Cannot wait for your next update😊
Happy that you are back and the update was worth the wait😊
Edited by anu1017 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow so Khushi became a pillow for Arnav 😉 . What a pillow Arnavji get used to it 😆 .
The conversation between Khushi and Sumer was really nice and it was much needed for Khushi to understand Arnav much better
Edited by Srilathalolla - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was the longest wait ever😆
But thank you for this chapter. I love the way you write. There is something new to discover in each chapter.

First night and Arnav didn't even realise that he was sharing his personal space with his wife and let all his guards down so much so that he was hugging his wife like his dear old friend pillow (who for some reason smelt great and was warmer) and sleeping in the posture of an elephant seal. He still had a restless sleep, tossing and turning all night because he still doesn't have that assurance that he isn't alone. She is present with him physically close but still emotionally distant. This distance is also reflected in Khushi who has forgotten everything about the previous day while she slept only to remember it when she hears his voice and sees him in her (their) room.

Arnav attraction for Khushi seems to be growing by the day. And Khushi, as usual doesn't have a clue. She is embarrassed to know he saw her stretching and to see him dress up, even when he is practically with all his clothes on. She hasn't really thought about everything that entails a marriage. She had to choose between Arnav and Rishab, she chose Arnav because she seemed to understand him better and she could stay with her bade papa and buaji in her own house. She didn't think about living with him, being a couple, going on dates, sharing things like what they are doing today and inform each other when they leave and she definitely hasn't thought about moving on from being a friend and falling in love with him. She is still stuck with material things -- dressing up in saris, her suhaag chuda, looking good as a married woman. Arnav has subconciously already moved on from wanting her to stay with him in one house, to getting attracted to her, to now wanting her to actually want to want him and be with him and love him.


'What? I only married Arnavji so that I can stay in this house. Now you can not take the perks that come with it away from me' she pouted adorably.

...

Arnav however felt a pinch in his heart at this, a pinch which he expertly smothered down with his ego. Of course, she married him ONLY for that. He knew the deal. Right? Hell, he was the one who proposed it. But all the contentment he was experiencing since waking up today suddenly disappeared leaving him on the edge. She is here in this house, more near to him than ever. So much that she has taken his name and sleeps in his room. That was all what he wanted, right? But something was NOT right and he could not pin-point it. Maybe the terms of this marriage could have been better.


When he woke up he was amused by her naivette. At breakfast, what seemed like a good joke to everyone seemed callous to him. He now thinks that the terms they discussed before could have been better. Doesn't he understand that marriage is a commitment that entails everything? He is just as clueless as his wife. Still, he is the one trying hard to be a husband, when Khushi hasn't even started being his wife and is still in the friend-zone.

Sumer is very happy with things but even he is clueless. He has no idea yet of the real reason why Arnav asked for Khushi but is happy nonetheless. He doesn't feel he has a right over his own only son. That's very sad. Also its sad he doesn't have a single good memory with his son worth telling his daughter-in-law. Anybody in Arnav's place would have broken down. Him talking to Khushi about her husband was a good move. He has atleast got her to start thinking in the right direction. To love Arnav the way he deserved to be, the way he never was. Can she? Will she? Whatever it is, she knows she hasn't been told the entire story. This talk will help her in the future when Arnav will hit another blow. She will know what she has to do -- be patient with him for there is a reason for his bad behaviour, take care of him, give him the love he deserves, and never leave him alone.

Also, this chapter shows her insecurities still hounding her. Will he ever fall in love with her? She doesn't know he already has. I don't know who will come forward with their feelings first, Arnav or Khushi. But Khushi has had a sheltered life with lots of people to support her when she falls and hurts herself even now, but Arnav has always been alone even when he was a small child and he still doesn't trust her feelings for him. They still have issues between each other.

Waiting for the day they realise they were made for each other.😊

Edited by clover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats on new thread

RES

AWESOME UPDATE

This update breaks my heart in many ways again my heart goes out for arnav, how he manage his life without anyone, without any guiding light, without any warmth of dear ones and so on. The way he cuddled and seek warmth from his pillow its really heart wrenching even though he is a grown man now but still his past haunts him where he was all alone and scared and unable to share his trouble with anyone.

The thing which really make me smile the way you describe the change in his life, he don't want any pillow now he have khushi and he can cuddle and seek warmth from her, I am sure she will heal his many scars without knowing his past and unintentionally healing process is begun.

But at the same time I am very happy for khushi she is an orphan but because of sumer and buaji she have a very smooth and blessed life, they were always with her the way you describe her sleeping form it shows how carefree her life is and was. The way she is constantly talking about her chuda, her love for sarees, sindoor, her blush when someone mention arnav's name its all very endearing and cute on superficial level all these thing looks childish and immature but unconsciously she is giving so much importance to this marriage and she take this marriage very seriously not just arnav but for her also this marriage is till death do us apart thing.

I just love and adore sumer and khushi relationship, sumer singh raizada is her guiding light, and here my heart goes out for sumer though he is responsible for arnav condition but still he is trying and want a perfect life for his son. He is bound by so many things unable to talk to arnav freely or claim his right as a father but now khushi going to work as a mediator and make things good between arnav and sumer, after talking to sumer, khushi seeing arnav in new light and unconsciously she is pondering over her and arnav relationship which is the first step towards mending things. Thank GOD sumer doesn't reveal much because its not his story to tell.

I just love khusshi and her self talk the way she is questioning herself, her responsibilities as a raizada bahu and her duties as a wife and most importantly she is thinking about love. Because no one can live without love, love is the integral part of any relationship and here we are talking about till deaths do us apart or till eternity but for now she is ready to fulfill her promise that she will take care of arnav no matter what.

Now I am waiting how she is going to take care of him or how she going to shower her concern, care and attention on arnav it's going to be awesome ride and love to see arnav reaction.

Writerji you beautifully describe the physical awareness part how arnavji going to survive this beautiful creature and how laddo going to handle her hot pati, simple, natural and very beautifully describe.

Things I love the most

Arnav hugging khushi who bhi tightly hayeee 😳

Pervert he chided himself lol moment for me😆

Khushi carefree style while sleeping and coming to breakfast table it was so natural that's the way girls usually behave right 😊

Her new found awareness towards arnav the way she was thinking about him, sharing room with him and now going to interact like hubby/wifey not like friends it was all endearing and very natural 👏

Her blush and stammering very cute 😳😃

Another hilarious thing when she declares that she is not going to wake so early lol😆

Awww grinning arnavji me happy thanks laddo😃

Awww arnavji feel terrible when she pin point about their marriage that why she accepted this proposal awww poor guy hota hai arnavji

Love sumer and khushi heart to heart talk👏⭐️

Aur khushi ji ki cluelessness aur arnavji ki irritation ke lie ek shair hai

Pata pata bota bota haal humara jaane

Jaane na jaane gul hi na jaane

Bagh tou saare jaane

😉

Thanks for the pm

Edited by faree - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really good update after a long wait...

At last after 30 chapters we are going to get read Arshi's romance.Can't wait for the next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats on new thread
and you are back
what already
will do this tomorrow
dont have time to do it now
so by tomorrow should be done with this

Well now that the wedding is over and they are together here begins there new chapter

Which is falling in love with one another

Not to mention being with one another

Marriage is just the beginning of it all

So hope they are able to cope with one another

Am sure there will after all they are meant to be

And they need one another like I have said before

Awww poor arnie you so feel for him right

When we find out about his childhood it is pretty heart breaking

How his parents instead of being with their kid were fighting one another

Well hopefully all that can be reversed with khushi and her love

Well cant really be reversed but hopefully he will get the love he needs and deserves

Man it really is touching knowing about his childhood

Man what did they do to him one in his ignorance and the other in her selfish needs

His childhood was so lonely no wonder he is like this

Excuse me mate that aint a pillow

That would be your wife khushi not any pillow but the best pillow you can have

Bless that sound from the pillow sure got him alert didn't it

Hawww calling khushi creepy well he doesn't know naa

That it aint the pillow he is cluthing onto as if his life depends on it

It is his wife khushi

No wonder he jumped as if hit by lightening

If he didn't do that then I would have been surprised

Got there did we

And that sure woke him up like nothing else

Dude why are ya jumping so much

She is your wife not anyone else

Uchale toh aise jaise kissi aur ki biwi ko pakda ho

But guess he isn't used to the fact that someone is sharing his bed and life with him

After all he has been alone for a while now naa

Hahhh see she was right you would take majority of the bed

But then this happens with everyone

Well she is still sleeping so she wont know will she mate so chillax

As if he can do that

Oh thank god he had his grip on her or his poor wife would be on the floor

Oh ho getting cosy with our wife are we arnie boy

But of course the said wife isn't awake yet

Or this could get awkward for them

After all they just got married and this is the first time they are so close to one another

Well how will she is sleeping

Though is that really a bad thing if she does know

Okay maybe it shall be for now but better get used to it mate

Just a tad intense well if he wont be intense for his wife who else will he do that for

Am sure he is bound to have scandalous thoughts

He is glued to his wife very attractive and gorgeous wife so he is bound to go to gutter land

If that doesn't happen then there is something wrong with him

Awww she is so cute right sleeping without a care in the world

While poor hubby is tensed out

Not helping khushi your hubby is gonna have a real hard time as it is and with you doing what you are doing oh so innocently is making things that much harder for him

This is seriously very funny I so feel for the poor guy

Hmmm well this way you can know where she is sounds of the bangles shall help

Though not really as it was more of hindrance

Acha that's why she aint remving them

Shuagaan wear the bangles for that period of time

And you should know by now that she will follow all the customs she can

I bet they aint chaste

And so he thoughts lets leg it before he ends up doing something he shouldn't

Though I would be so against that but will let it slide for now

After all they aren't that comfortable with one another as of yet

They still have get used to one another in close proximity then flirt or do anything they wanna

Awww she is sound sleeper is she

Well am sure with her you too will be able to sleep peacefully

She too sleeps a bit ajeeb like you mate if given the chance

Hawww did he just say that again

Naughty naughty hubby aint he

Awww so now she is getting up too

Well the extra warmth is due to your hubby who just legged it before he did something he or you might regret though I doubt he would do

Not in your room anymore

And no way would buaji barge into this room now

Not when you are married and with your hubby maybe

Seems they both haven't got it that they are married and living in the same room as the other

Yeh toh hona hi tha

Wow she is even worse than him

Married sweetie to arnie did we not remember it

This isn't good if she forgot it already man

But then its only because she just woke up

Hopefully she will get it with arnie there

And she gets it finally don't she

That she is married and this aint her room but theirs

Well don't worry arnie baby too had this

As in getting confused where who why when what

Sorry dear not what his thoughts were

He might just leg it but not for the reasons you are saying

More like because all this is stirring within him desires for you

Trust me if you woke up same time as arnie you would have known how you were sleeping

But then you didn't that is bad but what to do best for them both

He is so enjoying this aint he

He didn't stay in his side either dear

I think its less to being mature but more to do with the fact he knows how the two of you were really sleeping

Awww at least there is some domesticity of things between them

It sure is a start they needed

But sweetie it is supposed to be like this

You both are now married so such scenes shall be common form now

Guess they just have to get used to this right

Oh nothing much but your sweet innocent wife is being very shy of this scene

This is gonna get real fun for sure

Their domestic and common day routine is too cute to say anything else

This is so much fun seeing them like this

Being shy and getting used to one another in the same room

Hmmm well how would she know this being in bed mate

Koi antar yami toh yeh hai nahin beta

Well that is the answer to your question

Arrey what to do your hubby wakes up way too early for you to wake up before him

That's bit too much isn't it

Come one it isn't always possible to be up before your hubby every time

Not when the said hubby wakes at the weirdest of times

See what did I tell ya he wakes to early

So now way will you be able to do the same

That just cant work out or this way she will be too tired the whole day long

Well he woke up that early due to you in a way

Middle of the night gosh she is so like me man

Even I would think the same

I mean why do people wake up that early man

It really is unbelievable

Oh my this firangi hubby of hers is gonna crack me up

Its mehendi and no its not permanent

Dude this is getting so much fun

Awww so cute she didn't let you get too embarrassed

And she helped you out to understand it all

Well he learns something new every day with her

And so will she right

Awww that's so cute he thinks her to be nave

But yes she is that didn't ya know it when you were persuading her to marry you

Well technically nothing has really changed in RM at all

Except two of the people in the house married one another

That's sure is a change though

Wow so she came in PJs still

Well no wonder nothing seems to have changed man

Poor khushi is subject to buaji stare aint she

But then she sure gave it back to buaji

Wow she wouldn't even in her thoughts think of it as his room

Awww seems she is trying to mould herself to him

But of course without losing her khushiness

I know not a word but cant help it

Good answer khushi so true what she said

She is still in her house which is her in laws place too

Haha that's so cute what she said

I thought that's not the only reason dear

And at least don't say it out open like that

Ahhh see I knew it he wouldn't be quite happy with her answer

But then that was the reason she married you for

Remember you yourself gave her all those reasons

Now she cant change her mind that quick

And for what should she change it you haven't given her any reason to

Dude that's not what you all wanted

Deep down you know what else you want but aren't saying it

Not even to yourself

And we all know it will take you time before you do even accept it yourself

Deal uff arnie this isn't some deal mate

This is matter of life

And it has lot more complications than you are even ready for

You really don't know that you haven't thought this through have ya

And you will know soon enough that this what you have isn't it

There is more to it

But that he shall know and learn in time as will she

Arnie dude chill just calm

Don't do anything that you will regret later

As it is nothing really has changed but guess it's the changes that have you worried

Yes that's true not only are your family expecting it so am I

No need to over do it my man

No one wants PDA either but some familiarity between the two of you

Not like how it was till few days ago arnie

Hey what is she to know

She still hasn't got it that she is married to you

That things have changed between them

Bless that sure got to him right

Well dude it aint easy is it for her either

Ahhh the operation for which she did this marriage for too

Another of the reasons she did this

Lets get ready for that too after all that one operation can change a lot of things in this house

No escaping it at all my man

After all your son is married to just the girl he should have married

Now there is no reason for you to refuse it

Ahhh seems laddoo will know more about her hubby and about time too

Laddoo as his dear bahu sure is helping things

Shame the same cant be said for laddoo's hubby though

Well I exaggerate there

Yes I think its best that she knows just the basic

The rest arnie will have to tell her

He has to only then she will know him that much better

Of course she will think why is he so uptight

And not to mention his temper which she has already seen few flashes of

Its best to warn her off after all

This will help her understand why her hubby is the way he is sometimes

Well he cant suppress this for too long his past is bound to affect his present and future with khushi

Well it already has kinda right what with the whole fiasco before their marriage and all

Yup she is the only one who can heal this broken fella

And fill her love in his life and make it worth living again

She isn't just gonna be his obsession but need to live as well soon

Awww she is so cute and childish

Will she be able to manage arnie I wonder

No but she will

As its not like she is this same all the time

Sometimes when needed she takes on the role of a carer

Which is even better than the most mature of women

Well yes people would have done that right

Dear you are impressing someone for sure that would be your hubby

Not that he needs more impressing from you in that matter

Wait don't talk about a stalker or arnie dude will flip no he would

Her FIL is so cute well he is her bade papa he knows her pretty well right

Yes she is happy with the marriage

And am sure with arnie too so far

But don't thinks he doesn't know what it means to be married to him

That she will know soon enough

I should hope she is interested

This way she can know him more

After all his dad knows bit more about him than she does

So when needed she can react to him the way she is supposed to

Bless she is shy when she heard arnie as her hubby she is getting it aint she that he is her hubby

Its that bad is it

Not a single happy memory of his childhood

Man this is bad for sure

He hides too much in his quietness

All his pain anger joy sorrow everything

Trust me you need to know more about your bade papa and his wife for sure

To know why arnie is the way he is at least the things that can help her in the future

Very serious dear will tell you more about how much arnie was affected by their divorce

Ahhh yes I think they did fail some way or the other

Wouldn't really say this about parents but what they did to him sure has him changed

He is her pride too but there is no denying that he didn't come out of this unaffected

He is strong but he is weak on the inside

Keeping it all in and not letting the world know what he is feeling

Which is seriously not good for him as one day that grief will come out and that will be bad

Control that is very important for arnie

And being able to control his life is all he has

But of course now with your entry in his life sure has changed things

After all his expression to marry you took all by surprise

But he had to have you in his life which hadn't happened before

Which means that there is hope for him yet

That he will open up to you and you can help him getting rid of the grief in his life

Ahhh so sad right what you guys did in ignorance and being selfish has made him what he is today

But then it can all be okay too with khushi I hope

Though he has to let her know why it matters so much

Yes dear what happened with his parents is why he never came home

Unless his dad begged him to

Ahhh but though its not his story to tell he has to give her some clues

True arnie wouldn't like it if she knows

But in the end he has to tell her

After all she is his life partner and she needs to know about this all

Guess that is enough for the time being

No dear its nothing like that

His childhood was a right mess as was his life till he came back

And till you came into his dark and sad life with a hope and light

Ahhh you wish that was the case khushi if only that was the case

Falling out well that's putting it mildly for sure

Am sure what happened was even worse for sure oh god his life up till now has been full of thorns it seems

Wow she sure caught onto the heart of the matter did she

Well why mumbling now whats happened has happened

Seems she will know what her bade papa was like to her hubby

This is gonna make her see her bade papa in different light for sure

Damn she didn't hear it

Funny he is saying the exact things that arnie wants from her

To be with him and never leave him

As he has lost too much in his life before now

She will be with him and take care of him

But what about love we wonder how will that work out

Or did she even hear about the love bit

Don't scare her like this sumer

She can give him the promise but what about the love

Yes his past isn't very happy

In fact its too sad and so heart wrenching as well

I would be more concerned for your hubby too he has not had it easy so far

Yes he has hidden a lot from you

Like the actual details of what happened with you bade papa his ife and arnie

And it isn't pretty that much even we know of

Well no that isn't the reason why he married you

He married to make sure you don't go away from his life

Or be someone else's

Cause he needs you to be there in his life

But true there isn't conventional marriage

Neither of the party knows the real reason why they married one another

Or for the right reasons too

You will never leave him and neither will he

Its none of those reasons which are worrying but the last one

Love that's the one place where you come up blank I guess

Funny you should think of that

He does somehow deep inside does love you

But of course he is wary of that word

As what his parents showed in name of love sure made him hate that word

Ahhh this isn't the easy bit right

Forget hi n even she doesn't know about love either not really

At least not for her and arnie

She didn't think about that did she

Well she sure has lots to think about

And love being there on the top of that list

She is right the two of them have to live their lives together finally she gets it

That this is life long commitment but eventually it will have to be based on love too

Not just friendship and companionship

But am sure that will as time goes by

Ahhh this chapter had her thinking a lot in the end

They both have to don't they

As being married isn't the end of it all but just the beginning

Wow that was fantastic

Just what one would have thought you would come up with

That was worth the wait for sure

Cheers for pm

Things sorry perspectives sure started to change in this one

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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congrats and thanks so much for updating the chapter
comment will read and give
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wow.. that was quite a serious update, and i think this chapter is the start of another atmosphere in the raizada household, i hope rishabh does not have anymore to do with khushi, i cannot, simply cannot imagine our naive khushi facing arnavs wrath that might arrive.
god! this chapter is so refreshing, and it just made this story a million times different from all others. you write exceptionally well, and i am obsessed. do try to increase the frequency of updates like of MKM1, love you! update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What an awesome update..loved the sleeping description :)
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awesome update...hope to see sme sparks

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