SS: Something Deep (Arhi)-Removed - Page 7

beautiful update

dear zarnan...firstly i want to tell u that u have started the story in a very beautiful way ⭐️ ...khush's soliloquy/monologues are well written infact reading them the entire scene came be well imagined 😳 ...i have read the prologue and chappy1 ...i will come back to read the rest later 😃

Ihey thnxx for d pm,loved d update. Amazingly goood. Cudnt be more better. Fantastic. Loved evry bit of it. So well written. amazingly good. Loved arnavs romamtic style. Update sooon

Amazing update...
You have beautifully described their feelings... Being married now and knowing that they belong to each other, they have right on each it has become more difficult for them to stay away from each other... Arnav is doing everything to keep her with him...
Loved his intense side... The terrace scene was beautiful... Loved it...
Continue soon...

Wow...

Wow...
I just found ur $tory and fall in love with ur story...
Really loved it alot...
Beautifully written...
Am a muslim and reading ur story all the culture and tazaab flashes in front of me and this is a big victory of a writer...

i totally loved this story though i don't know much about islam but the purity of the story fascinated me
arnav and khushi are such a perfect couple.. a true synonym for soulmates
will be eagerly waiting for the next update
please add me in ur pm list

Aslam Aliakum!
So so
I don't know from where I should start!
I was resting when my heer(hira_arnie) messaged me saying" here is the link... Read this story I'm damn sure you will love it"
And I know she knows my taste so well so I started reading it!
Believe me dear!
You are a rockstar! It was beautiful, fantastic, amazing, and what not!
Seriously I was In searching of a story like this from a long time! And today I got my fruit of patience!
And I must say this is more sweet then my imagination!
Being a Muslim I always wanted to read a story in which my most favourite couple is shown as Muslim!
But the stuff I found was not that good!
But the way you described the Muslim culture it's just out of this world! I really can relate with this story! Seriously beautiful light stories which are full of love make my day!
I was just praising you while reading it!
From my side bht bht Mubarak on this beautiful attempt!
I can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading it!
The emotions, characters,love, respect it is just mind blowing!
Khushi... Kya Kahu I'm speechless! Any girl from the Muslim culture can relate to with character!
Her beauty, her innocence, her respect for her values and her friendly, kind and loving nature was just mind blowing!
Seriously I'm in love with this character!

Then Arnav!!!!!
Again speechless!
A man of few words! With a golden heart! And what I loved the most about his character was his respect for her! He loved her with all his heart but not for a second he tried to touch her! He touched her only after he got his right on her!
Marvellous! I'm speechless dear!!!
I really want to give you a applause for writing this !!!
I can't find words for telling you what I'm feeling after reading it!
Allah Bless You!

P.s I loved your selection of poetry! I'm also a "shyari" lover and believe me the poetry u used in your updates is my favourite!
Loved it!

This was a really really nice update!!I am really liking Arnav and Khushi in your story!

nice update...