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zarnan

@ZARNAN

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Posted: 12 years ago

I have removed my work, due to personal reasons. I hope you all will understand.

Thank you. Much Love.

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sphobic

@sphobic

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Dear!!

i read the prologue and the first chapter...

i quite liked the start and also your muslim setup...i have always been interested in muslim culture though i m not a muslim😉😆

but seeing by beloved couple in the muslim set up sounds interesting.

i loved it...but you have written the story from Khushi's POV...though i liked it but than i can see everything through her ...i mean i got to know about Khuhsi's feeling's for sana's brother(which i hope is Arnav) but i have no glue what her brother feels about Khushi...

so i would like in to read it through a third person...bas otherwise i loved everything...and i would love to read it further...

so i will say please continue...

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zarnan

@ZARNAN

Beginner

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Posted: 12 years ago

I have removed my work, due to personal reasons. I hope you all will understand.

Thank you. Much Love.

Edited by ZARNAN - 11 years ago

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sphobic

@sphobic

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG!! That was a fast update...

and i just loved it...superb...

i like how you pay attention to little things like adjusting the dupatta(i liked that)

And looks like Arnav too has the same feeling for Khushi...

and there telepathy talk...Ankhon hi Ankhon main Isharaa hogaya..😆

and i liked Sana...after all she is the reason our Arshi can meet everyday😉

and Khuhsi is 17? That means Arnav will be 23, right?

And the poem in the end was just superb i just loved it...specially the last two lines..

Aa kar tum phir kho jao na!

Tumhain apni Rooh mein main utar doon...

haiii...this is so romantic...please please continue...

by the way my name is Pooja😊

Love!!!

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SIMI

@dieforasr

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

really a nice start..keep writing..😊

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

simply amazing
loved it
post it in IPK forum..u shall get more readers😳

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zarnan

@ZARNAN

Beginner

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Posted: 12 years ago

I have removed my work, due to personal reasons. I hope you all will understand.

Thank you. Much Love.

Edited by ZARNAN - 11 years ago

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-Zesty-

@-Zesty-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

hi dear!!

pooja gave me the link to this, and so i read it...

nice start👍🏼

the simplicity of your story is your plus point...

i liked it very much..

keep it up

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

that was wonderful. arnav sure has got feelings for her..waiting for nxt

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zarnan

@ZARNAN

Beginner

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I have removed my work, due to personal reasons. I hope you all will understand.

Thank you. Much Love.

Edited by ZARNAN - 11 years ago

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