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-Zesty-

@-Zesty-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

That was just awesome, Zarnan!!!!

i am so in love with this story!!

you know i never liked a lovey-dovey Arnav but he is something really different in your story, I dont have any word to describe your Arnav, I just love him!!

the emotions, feelings, love, I feel everything everything!!!

the terrace scene was so beautiful, i just fell in love with my favorite couple all over again!!

I loved the banner!!

And the poem?? My God that was just superb!! i love reading your poems!!

Thanks a lot for giving us this lovely story!!

god bless you!!!

PS: Zarnan, pooja(sphobic) has apologized for not commenting, she has her exams and she has no internet, so she is not able to comment. :)

Edited by shona_arhilover - 11 years ago

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

This was really a cute update so lovely and the way u put up things were beautiful. And their emotional sharing and their way of love teasings his tenderness everything was mindblowing. Thks for the pm dear.

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Sarah

@zahra2709

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Beautiful

I am in love with your story 😳

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

shy and romantic.. just hope nothing bad happens..

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zarnan

@ZARNAN

Beginner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

I have removed my work, due to personal reasons. I hope you all will understand.

Thank you. Much Love.

Edited by ZARNAN - 11 years ago

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Hira

@hira_arnie

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

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OMG he is leaving for delhi for a whole week😲
poor khushi how she can survive without her husband😳
y my heart is telling that something bad gona happened in delhi???just my thought hope nothing bad gona happened...😊
am loving this story yarrr...
first ever FF related to muslim culture i just cant tell how much i love ur story...😊
amazing update...
loved their little bit romance😳
wana see their dhamka dar shadi soon😳

Edited by hira_arnie - 11 years ago

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Dhanya C Babu

@dhanyac

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

nice update...

loved it...😊

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aimmy

@Aims.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Beautiful beautiful
Just awesome!
Loved their romance yar!
Awww how can he love her so much!
😳
Seriously I'm falling for this ss again and again and again!
It is so so so heart touching!
And the last part was too gud!
He is leaving for Delhi!
Awww she is going to miss him badly!
Waiting for more!

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Second update of the day just too over joyed . Ha this was a cute romantic update just so loved it. Hmm someone getting naughty arnt we. Gosh he got permission from her mom to meet really a bit embarrassing though. He is leaving her for a week like really poor girl don't know whether to feel sad or to blush lolz really a hard time to handle. Thks for the pm dear.

Edited by JCJS - 11 years ago