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B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L.
this would be the one word to describe ur os.. Such a brilliant piece of writing..👏
The whole ss had the aura of peacefulness written all over it.. And it left me content after reading the ss. Thankss...🤗
I loved loved loved the way you showed the purity of their relationship.. Right from the very beginning when arnav never touched khushi or even expressed his love towars her to give her the time to enjoy her youth.. just too good.. and him taking permissions from khushi's parents, be it asking for khushi's hand or asking khushi's mother to meet her after their marriage was just perfectness personified..
Arnav was the perfect hubby anyone could ever dream of..
I wish we too got someone like him one day.😳
Must say the way u showed their relationship progress was awesome. 👍🏼 Arnav had his naughty thoughts and he controlled and showed them when it was appropriate☺️ Hayeee...😳
I must say I really appreciate how you maintaine the trademark asrish anger or khushi's sanak in the ss as well even in this totally different set up from the show ⭐️ You didn't use the exact lines tumhe kuch ho jata toh or what if i had lost u dammit but when khushi hurt her leg and arnav scolded her it left me grinning widely😃
I loved sana's character to the core and of crs dadijaan was a rockstar herself. She is the living example of showing just because we prefer to be in our boundaries doesn't mean we can't enjoy the life itself.
P.S. The poems u used were fab and apt. but I'll be biased here humsafar was my personal fav one
P.P.S. Allah has blessed you with great writing talent. You should definitely write more.. And when you do please pm me? thanks😊
P.P.S I really hope i haven't bored you with my long comment.. 😳
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