SS: Something Deep (Arhi)-Removed

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InduD

@InduD

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#411

This is a beautiful story. Loved it. It is very romantic. Loved arnav and khushi in this. Your writing style is very nice. I could picture everything. Beautiful.

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Dandelion

@nikita-nair

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#412

such sweet and loving story...

vl miss this 1 surely...

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45678

@45678

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#413

loved it. but why to end it so soon. plz pm me if you write anyother too.

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diya

@luckyarshi143

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#414

loved d epilogue...

fantastic ending to a beautiful story...

thnx fr d pm...

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faree

@faree

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#415

beautiful simply beautiful

love arnav and khushi relationship in this ss

love urdu poetry so apt and brilliantly placed.

very well written story so simple and lovely.

Edited by faree - 11 years ago

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Take_That

@Take_That

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#416

A great piece of writing!

Both loved each other but didn't want to express in a conventional way... Like how love is usually confessed. Loved how Arnav thought about Khushi and spoke to her parents first before speaking to her...

Though he couldn't keep his hands off her, he always thought from Khushi's point of view...

And just like Khushi, even I didn't understand how they could convey so much through their eyes alone... But what the hell, maybe that's what love does to one!

Aww! And Arnav and Khushi have a cute lil'l bachcha too!

Loved Sana's character a lot!

Keep writing!👍🏼

Edited by Nexus_13 - 11 years ago

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#417

Had an amazing journey thru dis stry. Lovely. So well written. Enjoyed evry bit of it. Woowie arnav and khushi hav a son, so nyc. Will miss dis stry a lot.

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#418

Loved this story...nice one...thanks for the PM

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#419

Read all the parts n its one of the best stories
I have read. The urdu poems or shayari very
Beautifully written. Super loved it. U shd write more. Waiting
For another story frm u n plz pm me

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#420

wow...
i just came across this story...
its beautiful and its simplicity is what makes it different..
and liked the muslim background.
keep on writting...