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Mbean

@AmidstTheWords

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#441

A simple and sweet story.

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#442

hi just read this story

loved it

so sweet he asked her parents for her hand before he left for 2 years
so that they don't get her married to someone else

cause her knew she loved him as much as he loved her

please PM any of your other works

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zehr_akhan

@zehr_akhan

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#443

Read,in one go simple amazing every thing is balance story to romance romance to peotery just amazing you are amazing writer 👍🏼 👏

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WanieA

@WanieA

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#444

wonderfully written..thank u for sharing...superb yaar...

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arnaushi

@arnaushi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#445

i read this FF just now and was bowled by the plot...

loved the way you portrayed every character and their emotions...

loved the relation between arnav and khushi...she was so shy in front of him...and he all the while was admiring khushi...

really loved the story...thanks hira for suggesting this ff to me!!!

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1likeNoOther

@1likeNoOther

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Posted: 11 years ago

#446

Beautiful story! Really enjoyed reading it 😊

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Barun_Addict

@Barun_Addict

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#447

such a beautiful story

esp chrctrs arnav khushi n sana n uthrs

evn emotions...👏

so pure n perfect

i hv no wrds to describe it

amazing dear :D

u should write more n more n more...

thnx to aimmy fr recommending ur stry :)

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esamoe

@esamoe

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#448

Awesome story it was beautifully written and really enjoyed reading them in a muslim concept as a muslim and could relate to it .

If u ever write someting new then please to pm me.

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#449

Aaahhh
i have been to this story over a few times before...but dint feel like reading it...huh my bad

thankfully i came back again today n started reading n i must say one of the most beautifull lovely romantic story i have ever read
simply brilliant n beautifull...loved each n everysentence every word if it...n the urdu shayaris r superb...
I asked my mom for few of its meaning n mom is like who is sending u this...lol lol...
Aaamazing story
loved this arnav khushi...
I olways adored the idea of nikaah and after months or year later ruksati...ther r few cousins of mine who went through this phase...n the feeeling is beautifull...u have full authority on that person yet u cant claim them fully...haha loved it...beautifull
m glad i came across this story
made me feel tingly