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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh Juhi, that was fantabulous
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chap 4 (2) - Intense1 Arnav talked abt his past & what happened to Khushi ?
Cliff hanger...Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arghhh! That cliffhanger is the worst! I''ve been holding my breath throughout the update. What a terrible backstory to have. But Khushi's sounds almost mystical! I'm almost expecting her to be part human or something! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
well that was his life story
so he is a doctor not a business man
but he did it all for his brother
he felt guilty that he didnt catch his ill health on time
but its not like he could have done much
of course he wont accept the same would he
not with his brother dying like that and losing his parents and all
well his truth is out
and it expalins a lot
but her wonder what that is
guess we have to wait and find out
wonder where she went
well where ever it was it sure made him go recluse
just like he did with his brothers death
that just goes to show ow much impact she had on him
he wasnt coming out of his room
didnt bother about what his family was going through
man that was bad phase
here is hoping he doesnt do that again
but somehow i think it could happen again
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was an expellicious update!
There's no other word for it.

Arnav here is a doctor, an oncologist.

Why not a dil ka doctor, then I could have gone to him for treatment.😉

Such an emotional update.
Arnav trying to find out what happened to Khushi.
His worry, his frenzy, trying to find her.
It was so well described, I felt the worry too.
You write so well, the reader feels part of the story.

Then she comes back.
And Arnav's life story.
He has suffered so much.
No wonder he closed himself from all.
And Khushi understands his grief.
That has to be because she herself has suffered in life.

One question! I have a theory about Khushi's link with Aakash and Arnav.
And am quite sure this will be the case.
Waiting now for you to prove me right...or wrong!
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Posted: 11 years ago
ASR was a Doc? :O
Well written, Khushi' secrets, seem very crucial for this story! Is she married? Or does she have cancer too :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ahhh this story is so good!
So much suspense, and a promise of a happy ending! What more could a reader want?
I LOVE DOCTOR ASR. His past is so sad, my eyes got moist :/ but omg why can't Khushi be with him?
I hate cliffhangers. I need to know 😳
I love your writing 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wait please don't tell me Khushi has cancer.
That's not a happy ending :O
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loving the story so far wonder what Khushi has written in the letter
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Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant can't wait for the next one.

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