An ArHi SS:Seduction *Thread Two* (COMPLETED)

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Liya123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

I am surprised that how guilt could make people so depressed. Gosh I hope Arnav will move on. It was so emotional, Arnav lost his parents and brother because of health issues. Even though, he is a doctor but couldn't save his brother. Its really heartbreaking...

I hope we are going find out our mysterious kushis past on next chapter.

Oh love the description of the settings. I felt I was reading some fairytale where king have big castles/mahal. It was very details.

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luvbug

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

OMG did u recall stop there... :( how am I going to survive till the next update???

Oh n dr. Arnav .,.. Wow I loved tht...oh he had a sad past n it hurts more to b a doc n not be able to help ur on brother ... Sigh... Feeling low after this intense chapter...

Eagerly waiting to knw khushi's past... Is she Akash's girlfriend ... Just speculating... Since u did not elaborate abt her... But then the family would have met her... Oh or she is the sister of the girlfriend?

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pixiegirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Wow! that was a sad emotional update... To lose so many people from his life all due to illness, is really so sad... It was obvious from the very beginning that Arnav was guilty of his brother's death & now it totally makes sense... Survivor's guilt after all especially when one is a doctor & not being able to do a thing to save your sibling's life... Of course as Khushi says, he feels guilty of enjoying even the simplest things of life now...

And Khushi?? What's up with her?? My first thought was that she is Aakash's girlfriend like so many others but then thought nah! this is Juhi, I am sure you won't plot such an obvious story... So she maybe related to Aakash's girlfriend like a sister or a friend?? Will it be Payal who would be Aakash's GF??

But then there was a very poignant line that Khushi says in the beginning that "If I could, I would stay in your arms forever." So please don't tell me that Khushi has some disease like cancer too?? Although she didn't know the meaning of the word Oncologist so that was a little doubtful for me, she at least would have heard the word if she was suffering herself...

Hmmm, quite a mystery you have woven here... Why can't Khushi stay in Arnav's arms forever & what emergency did she suddenly have, if she really had one?? 🤔

Can't rack my pea sized brain anymore, will wait patiently wait for you to reveal, although I must say I have to come to hate your cliffhangers now with a vengeance even after being warned of them... 😛

Edited by pixiegirl - 11 years ago

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KtotheM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

That was an awesome update
Read all the chapters just now
Amazing story, at first I was a little reluctant to read this story
Going by the title I wasn't feeling comfortable but true to the title, only arhi can create such kind of'seduction'
Pls do continue soon

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Amita2014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

His secrets are out..quite heart wrenching...
Can't wait for her secrets to reveal...

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..Anita..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

That was so heart wrenching
Wonder what khushi's secret is

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Pyewest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Pls. Why do you do this cliffhanger thingy. 😭 Love the update. Next one soon pls. U r amazing.

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Anamika100

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

This is such a gripping story and as cliff hangers go, this was one of the best.

Arnav's state while he locked himself up and subsequently talking to himself that he will not do this to hi Sistef was so uplifting, that he was determined not to succumb to his previous state.

His revealations were heartbreaking, that one family went thru so much grief. He was so busy saving lives, that he did not have enough time to spare for his loved ones, who he thought would always be with him. If he knew what life had in store, may be he would have made different choices.

I am so afraid of finding out Khushi's story...kudos to you for building this intense a situation.

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mookie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Cliffhanger! Maybe I like them, maybe I don't. But one thing is sure...I'm loving this story! 👍🏼

Will be eagerly waiting for the next update and Khushi's story.

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Japonica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Expelji, i have no words to describe how deeply I have been seduced by your story! As i always say about your stories, they have a real impact on the reader's heart and mind.

Your khushi is absolutely amazing, why did she seek him out? Both arnav and she are in such pain. How awful that he has lost most of his family to cancer; i'm guessing she too has suffered some terrible losses.

BR]
The kiss and the ambience in which it occurred was truly exquisite. Khushi's response to it was superb.

Your latest cliffhanger is really killing us just as much as it must Arnav. Is she married? Was she akash's girl friend?

Anyway, i'm sure you have something spectacular that will leave us all gasping for breath. That will be the one that will squeeze our hearts and put our brain in a twist - remember you asked me once why i said that?

Your tour of Lko took me back to my days in that city. My office was a 5 min walk from Clarks Awadh, it was based in one of those old 18th century Mahal, i believe it belonged to a famous 18th century nautch girl!

Aminabad and hazratgunj were my haunts. The one place Khushi missed out in her culinary tour of Lucknow was Ram Ahsray's mithai, very famous mithai shop, the oldest in lko, now more than 200 years old! May be they can celebrate their happy ending with a dabba of ram ashray ke mithai! If Arnavji is allowed sugar in your story!

Hurry up and put us put of our misery and push us to the next cliffhanger 😃

Edited by Japonica - 11 years ago