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Posted: 11 years ago

Edited comment on pg. 24😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
and my breath stopped again...what is khushi"s reality!?
i'm afraid for both of them...may khushi is strong enough to be away from arnav,bt arnav is not. he can never bare the pain now,he's already broken and has no strength in him to face more misery...cant wait for the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
The past is very heartwrenching...life mein koi kitn sahega?????? Had hi ho gaye...i feel so sorry for Arnv...the updae is dedicated to many medical conditions...Breast CA,heart failure,glioma...ab wats wid Khushi??? Some Congenital disorder??? Or Leukemia somthng...????

Well...this was th most baddass Cliffhanger u hav givn us..meri neend toh gayi baad mein...hope Arshi will hav a happy ending...y Arnav will again b devastated by one more medical condition????

N ya Dr.Arnav Singh Raizada...wahhh...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am very sleepy right now so it took extra efforts to read the chapter and I don't think I've been able to feel the emotions as strongly as I would have, had I not been so dizzy with sleep. But it was beautiful nonetheless. Arnav's past is heart wrenching and painful and it makes you want to cry your heart out for his grief. but khushi has clearly been more mysterious and I have absolutely no idea of what could come out of her past. "If" is such a strong word and when used well it can bring you to your knees,.and you've used the word beautifully in khushi's statement.

love
Sonia
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.
Love it.
Arnav's history is out. It's so sad. The best part was that Khushi understood what Arnav had gone through in the past with all the deaths of his love his one. She want him to spent his life out of guilt which is Arnav trying to do by fulfilling his brother last wish.
In this story Arnav is a doctor as well. That's interesting.
An incomplete letter, Khushi past was just going to be revealed. I hope it's not too shocking.
Waiting eagerly and excitingly for the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
NOOO
YOU.CAN'T.DO.THIS.TO ME
Such a cliffhanger?
Oof. Jaan loge kya? 😉
Anyway awesome update!
LOVED IT!!👏
Update ASAP okay?
Okay.
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was an Amazing update👏
After two days of restlessness Arnav knew that he needs Khushi with him.
Where were Khushi for two days
And when she come back she avoided him why😕
But if Khushi had decided to avoid him why did she come to terrace.
Arnav's story was indeed very sad😭
Arnav being an oncologist and yet he couldn't save his brother from cancer.
What is Khushi's past that she can't tell him face to face and written in a letter

Cliffhanger again its not fair yaar
How will we survive till next update
I love how u give importance to each and every details you are really an Amazing writer
Eagerly waiting for next update
Plz continue it as soon as possible
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohh such a heart wrenching past for Arnav. I like the way his determination came back in between... Even the need I fix things between the 2 of them. It's painful to lose so much of your life...so many people precious to you in the course of little time. Like life is determined to be unkind to him...
And another is oing to him again now..I assume. Sorry for speculating...but why do I get the feeling that Khushi is Akash girlfriend. The one who he shared dreams of restoring sheesh mahal... The one who was tied to Akash... And now the reason why sHe can't tie herself to Arnav.

I hope I am not right... Waiting for the next update ...anxiously.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey...that was mean...u can't possibly hang the chapter there"...
Ur love for these cliffhangers r making me say...U r CRUEL...I'm sure there r many readers agreeing with me right now...
MY only REQUEST... PLS UPDATE NEXT CHAPTER ON TIME...
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Posted: 11 years ago
What...?? It Ended..??
No di, you can't be that Cruel..!! Oof that was mean thing to do! Its an imcomplete letter that you've given us!



Gosh! So much pain!d had tears in my eyes.. It was difficult reading it and you did justice to each and every emotion!
For a minute i had thought it would be Aakash's room that he'll find difficult to be in! BUt its his own room that his demons come in full force in!


Life that been cruel on him Lossing Father, mother in short gaps and then Aakash's death had been much of a blow.. It took away his self from inside him, he's just given up on him, trying to do all for Aakash!


Doctor Raizada.. His given up his identity! Dude.. It just hurts so much! :(


So whats Khushi hiding? Whats in her pitara..? Who's she..?

From all her reactions it was clear that she knows what suffering is!


- don't make us peanuts with the wait.. Update soon!

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