Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B - Page 94

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Posted: 11 years ago
Seriously ... one shouldn't look for occasions to celebrate and get together ...
They say that "Life is a Celebration " and one just needs an excuse to celebrate ...
am so happy that Anjali celebrated her brothers success by bringing the people who matter to him together and making him feel happy after so long ...
Khushi is the real angel in his life who will guide him through all the highs and lows that he comes across ...
So Khushi baked a cake for Arnav ... awww ...
Who really cares if the cake was perfect or a total flop ...
its the love that went into it when she took out the time to bake it for him ... 😳
I really appreciated the fact that Payal had the good sense to go and apologise to Arnav about her insensitive behaviour ... the apology was long overdue ...
Arnav was amazing the way he gave it back to Payal ... just shows how her words had impacted him ... hit him below the belt ... and that too when he was going through a low ... words can be really hurtful and damaging ... the worst is once they leave the mouth they cannot be taken back ... and can really bring the moral of a person down ... though it made him retrospect and realise that he is good as he is and doesn't need to change to make himself happy or successful ...
That boost of self-confidence was what our Arnav needed ... and he gave it to himself ... 👏
Thanks Twiggy dear ...
Edited by Kishmish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such gestures give so much pleasure, loved what Anjali did for Arnav, it was a small and sweet gathering with his loved ones, a lovely way to celebrate a special day!
Loving your Arnav every time, he's very mature and very level- headed. He impresses me time and again!

Waiting for the party to continue..enjoying it too!
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Posted: 11 years ago

That Payal has a caustic, out of control tongue backed by what I've perceived as an inflated ego has been firmly established by you by showcasing her interactions with people who're close to her. She believes, like most people like her do, that she acts on the best of intentions. Self doubt has no place in her psyche. She feels she has a God given right to tell people (usually whom she deeply cares for..ironic much? ) how to live their lives. She doesn't think twice before bluntly pointing out their faults..believing she has better abilities than most to assess and judge a situation, a person, a conflict and just about everything else. All for the greater good, of course, such people always believe. You have to be cruel to be kind is an adage that perhaps ranks high in their list of favorites.

Payal is one such person. Insensitive, blunt but with the best of intentions in her heart.
She is annoying no doubt and makes me want to smack her sometimes but is she a 'bad' person? I don't think so, because that's just one aspect, one dimension of her personality. There are a lot of people in real life (even mothers) who're totally insensitive with their words but act as your backbone when you're down and hurting..in terms of actions. On the other hand, there are people who might please you with the sweetest tongue but care two hoots about you.

So IMHO, it's impossible to judge a person's whole character or personality on the basis of one dimension alone.

In most cases, it's impossible to judge at all. So I believe in leaving all the judging to the omniscient highest power watching over us all. The only one who had 24/7 access to our thoughts, intentions, emotions, feelings..apart from words and actions. ( I really don't mean to sound preachy here!)


Arnav was justifiably miffed with Payal and taking a leaf from her own book, vented it all out. Good for him. Payal had definitely overstepped the bounds that day by using incredibly insensitive words like 'failure'. She might have thought she was doing him good by shaking him out his 'low phase' but no one should be expected to put up with it. I would have been even happier if he had given her a befitting reply that day itself.

Payal thinks she has not only been blessed with the magical parameters to measure success, but also has the right to hand people their 'report cards'. Unbelievable!

Well, she just got hers from Arnav, let's see what she makes of it.

Loved the update as you can very well imagine :)


PS: Loved the party, the cake, the flirting. Really liked Anjali in this one.


Edited by IPK007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vgedin


Thanks for your comment, Mirabell. I always appreciate honest feedback, you dont have to feel guilty :)

In my response to your comment,

1)Eccentrica made a similar point to which I have replied on Pg.133 on the thread. You may want to take a look.

2)Payal wasn't the first one to support him after Lavanya's death: Everyone supported him. Yes, he found more comfort in her words because he isn't as close to her as other's and hence, to him, her feedback was more neutral and less condescending.

3)He didn't berate her for intending to smash his self-confidence, in fact he never doubted her intentions at all. He questions only the insensitivity of her words, and the way she defines success and failure.

Hope this answers some of your doubts. And what I said above is only to point at a few more facts; they aren't intended to try change your take on this update 😊

Please don't feel the need to refrain from saying anything on this thread. I always welcome feedback of all kinds, and its a pleasure to have readers as invested in this story as you :)


Thank you Twiggy for your response and reassurance that you arent upset with my disagreement. I did read your response to Eccentrica. I do love that part about these stories - that you engage with your readers.. In fact I loved all the posts in response to your story update this time. :) This is the best part of this forum I find.

I guess, it now boils down to the personality likes and dislikes.. I have always liked your Payalia.. :) and your Akash - the strong silent ones. I like your Arnav as well, he is your typical middle child, one who tends to blend rather than stand out.

I see your point of view that Arnav was responding to the consequences of Payal's words/tone and not intent. I will wait for you to tell me more of the story to see where you will take this.

Edited by Mirabell - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Twiggy !!! Superb update !!!
It was that moment when Arnav realised what he needs to seek, cherish and hold on to... Its that realisation which reinforces your stand in life.. That you were running behind the unimportant shackles which will only weigh you down whereas your most important links of life are right in front of your eyes unattended... And then you know what you should be taking care of !!!
Sort of awakening it is...
It was good to know that Arnav had his long awaited burst out moment with Payal and she did not retort back for once atleast...
WIll wait for the party !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
YES a update...
Arnav you've always been a hero..
a hero who has had setbacks, but has come out stronger than ever...

Payal, you surprise me, a sincere apology...a few brownie points..

Khushi, Khushi, Khushi...ou're such a sweet pie...
A perfect partner, well wisher, support,,

It was such a lovely gathering..
waiting for more...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant update, just loved Arnav standing up for
himself, it's good he made her realised success
shouldn't make you arrogant. X
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohhh gosh..wat a chp m in love with it..i so wanted arnav too gv back the answer of the accusitions which payal had put on him..m so happyyy she jus deserved dis!!

That party was much neended fr arnavs mood to change..fr wats so ecer incidents wer happening in his lyf!

Ab party aur baaki haii..th lets swe..kya hota hai aur!!

😆 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb Update :)
Glad Arnav found himself. At least he will be at peace now. It's good he vented it out but I think it was somewhat ill- timed, may be because it's not his nature to do so. And I was surprised Payal held her tongue. Could be because of the tense times she is going through. Curious to see how the party goes...
And I want the cake :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant update !!! happy for arnav and loved to see how his sister and nani didn't missed out a chance to give arnav a treat even though arnav is shying away but he is also happy to see all those people who means a lot to him there around him at this time of his happiness.. convo between arnav-payal were the game changer.. loved to hear arnav.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊

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