Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B - Page 95

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Posted: 11 years ago
that was amazing :)
I am actually glad that Payal went up to Arnav and tried to apologize, causing Arnav to burst out in anger at her, but in the end it made him feel lighter and more confident about himself :)
He's finally discovered that he's not a failure at all, thanks to Payal
Her words and methods were still wrong and hurtful, but at least something good came out of it!
can't wait for the next part! missed this story!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally Arnav has found his MOJO and guess what ?Payal had everything to do with that!!
Really awesome update and I'm glad that he has realised that he is not worthless soul but just a great person as he is . That's why khushi loves him.
Hope Payal also learns some lesson out this outburst but I am glad that she wanted to make amends too. She should learn to be less judgemental I guess and Akash does have a good effect on her!
Loved the update - can't wait for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it. Arnav has finally come out of the vicious effects of Payal's words on him. I'm glad that he said what he said for two reasons. First because what he said was right and what he felt. Second because this outburst was much needed for him to finally get over her hurtful words.
I don't know what Payal wanted to say after this but I want to know her thoughts on this.
I'm loving the new kind of exchange between Anjali & Khushi. Although they always spoke nicely but after Anjali's reservations have vanished there seems to be a new found sisterly and friendly dimension to their relationship which I'm particularly liking.


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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm glad Arnav was able to finish his first day and got the husband to settle out of court.

This small get together was exactly what Arnav needed.


Payal apologised? That must have been tough.
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Posted: 11 years ago
okay, that was surprising! I hadn't imagined arnav being so outspoken about his feelings, especially to payal. but good thing he was, he needed to get that out of his system.
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's good to know Anjali is slowly remembering her happy life before Shyam. And Aakash and Arnav not being party to her glossing over Shyam will hopefully also force her to face facts.
I really liked the way you wrote about Arnav accepting the family and friends who are genuinely there for him.
Payal could see that he didn't want to talk at that moment. But just because she wanted to apologise, the conversation had to take place there and then. As ever it's what she thinks that has to be right!
Good that Arnav really told her what he thought!
And your Khushi is the sweetest angel ever. Lumpy cake wishing Arnaw being all part of her adorable ness !
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww anjali is such an amazing sister! Arnav really needed To get that off his chest. What a great outburst! He is so in love with khuhsi! I'm glad that Payal ddnt say anything back and welldone to her for apologising.

Do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow!!! Bravo Arnav! God twiggy after reading the chapter i only wanted to do one thing! Stand up n bow to arnav!! And give him a standing ovation. Yes payal has been already castigated by aakash and mildly rebuked by khushi but it was Arnav's simple calm n logical rebuttal and arguments which i feel were most effective and which finally put her in place. Arnav didnt say anything in the heat of the moment but spoke what he genuinely believed in! N i loved how succintly he told her what he felt, how bad she made him feel and where exactly had she gone wrong. What i am happier about is that in a way he got a clearer perspective! I loved how he fought his own battle and didnt say " its okay" to payal when it clearly wasnt! Neither did he try to hide his displeasure!!! Loved it!!!
Also it was so sweet of anjali to arrange a get together to celebrate Arnav's success! Even if it wasnt a mjor one! In life we are so after major things, bigger reasons for happiness, always looking for that bigger moment that we overlook these small precious moments, reasons for happiness, reasons to celebrate! I loved how you highlighted that you neednt have to wait for some major occassions to celebrate with family! Just a simple reason is enough, or without reason too u can celebrate happiness.
N i guess its first time i saw anjali khushi direct interaction! I dont know y anjali ever had doubts regarding khushi in the first place!!
Loved the chapter twiggy!!! Waiting for the part b!!
Sorry for the late comment!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Absolutely stunning update...arnav's thoughts ve totally astute perspective!!! That ws completely different take altogether...glad he vent out his perspective!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just love the last part just awesome thank you for it

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