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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Chapter IV:

Fight!

"How was your day?" I asked handing him his mug of coffee.
"Fine, what about you" he said I could see he was not as pleased as he usually is.
"Is something wrong?" I asked
"No, nothing's wrong. Go, roam around in the city. Go, have fun with all those road friends of yours" he finally burst out.
"Rey, It's not a big deal, is it?" I asked seeing a totally new side of him
"Why were you at the cafe today? Don't you know doctor has told you to bed rest till you feel okay?" he shouted
"Why the hell are you getting hyper Rey?" I said trying to calm him up
"Why can't you do what you're asked to? Why do you have to prove that you're a responsible and big girl every time you get a chance?" he yelled
"Rey, first of all don't shout. Secondly remember, you don't own me. I didn't ask for a shelter you brought me here" I said
"did I have an option? What else could I do? Leave you there on the foot path totally drunk? So that something happens to you?" he yelled
"Do you even hear yourself? Do you have any idea what you're saying?" I finally lost my temper
"I am just trying to prevent you from making mistakes all over again" he said
"Let me make my own mistakes for god's sake" I yelled "Haven't you made enough?" he asked and left
"That's it. I know I should've informed you before leaving the place, I know I made a mistake, but what's the greatest deal? I can go out of the house can't I?" I said
"No you can't, not till you get better" he said
"I'm not going to stay here forever Rey it's just a matter of few days. Bear me. Or if you say I can even leave now" I said
"I understand. All I'm trying to say is stay in till you feel better, that's it" he said
I nodded.
He placed his hands on my shoulder trying to console me from what just happened.
"Let's just forget whatever happened" he said
"I can't, I had a different image of you in my mind, one who handles things maturely and so on. You ruined it" I said
"I'm sorry, I couldn't just control myself. You know, I want to see you fine, back to healthy" he said
I nodded and pulled myself out of his bare arms.
"Good Night Rey" I said and went inside my room wondering why was I adjusting with him when I already had an option to leave this house
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Dont ask me for another update..
new update in new year..
bye bye..

and am NOT editing it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Amazing part rashi

i loved this caring side of rey
angry hai but fir bhi...care karta hai

chotu and sweet part
loved it

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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
pehle tu yeh bata ki itna chindi sa update kyun de rahi hain??
tax lagaya hain kya kisine long update dene par??

now coming to the part..
y d hell kri shwed such atti to rey, yaar..
galti uski hi hain..
ek toh becharey ne itni badi hlp ki warna god knows kya hota uska
upar se gratitude ki jagah attitude!!
not done..
i'll totally agree wth rey..
mana chillaya but still he's ri8..
kri should apologize, u knw...

chalo jo bhi hain.. jaldi post kariyo...
nd thoda lamba...

abhi ke liye byee... fir nxt update mein milte hain..😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
awesome update...loved it esp rey...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Chindi size tha but koi nai ektarha se acha he hai , 1st time mein Kon-Fuse nai hui 😛...
Rey getting all caring caring , Me likey 😉...
Point : Y is Rey actually so caring towards her , Akhir woh uski lagti he kya hai 😳
I know it will be answered soon , Phir bhi poochne mein mera kya jaata hai😛...

Ek pal Rey gusse mein hota hai N Kria calm hoti hai And doosre he pal iska opposite , Pagal hain dono 😆...

Acha part tha 👍🏼
U know i love this wali story ❤️ 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
I loved this part Rashi... got to see another side of Rey..

who is caring..who wants to see Kriya all fit n fine...and who cares for her more than nything else...

though i wonder why...lol..kyuki..itti jaldi pyaar... it wil be really strange..

but i loved this lil agressive track... all the yelling..shouting...

in the end Kriya all confused...

mast update tha ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Itni chutku sa update... baby ka hath thak gya likhte likhte??? 😆

Awww... that concern... rey cares alot for her.. how sweet...😃

But kriya is taking him for granted... but maybe she don't see things from his point of view...

She loves her freedom...but she still feels like being caged... right? 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Amazing Story...
u wrote it when u r in 6th??
gosh freaking awesome...
i m so loving it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Pehle to... 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Very SORRY
And aapne yeh 6th main likhi thi??? WOwww... nycc..
n parents caught uh...
But... its an very wonderful waala concept...
sorry short main niptaying... <3 Exams... hain mere head.. pe..
bt sachi main Uh rock... <3 <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
awesomeee parts👏
loveddd rey's care for kria😳
do continue soon😊
waiting for d nxt part😊

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