|| Equipped || KriYaansh SS [Chp 2 on Pg 4]

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Equipped


I Ran away from my house..

Never turned back...

I was suffering.. dyeing.. each and every day...

Then He Came..

He fed me..

Took care of me..

Loved me...

But demanded love!

How could i love him? he was just a stranger after all..

Index-

Prologue- Scroll Down.

Chapter one- Scroll down.

Chapter two- Page 4

Chapter Three - Page 9

Chapter Four - Page 10

Chapter Five - Page 13
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note

Before you continue reading this i want to share with you something,
Well guys, this story was written by me when i was really young maybe in sixth or something, you may not find the words and expression that good because well am not editing it, i'm here with just the way it was.
I was just shuffling with some documents and reports when i found this, a really really old work somehow I thought of sharing it right here

And Equipped will be updated once in every four days and i think it would end in 10 parts max to max.
Basically because i have this whole story with me, i can update it regularly.. 😳

Edited by Painted_Sky - 11 years ago
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Prologue

Days like these I want to run into his arms, I want to swirl on him like flowing water, I want to hold him tight and never let him go, these are the days I miss him a lot! I wiped off the tear escaping my eye, Moments spent with him are still in my mind like anything, I hate myself for leaving him that day, I cook myself some snacks with him dancing around in my mind, and when I serve food to my mom, help Molly with her assignments, talk with my neighbours and watch my all time favourite serial and at night when I lay down in my bed to get myself some sleep he is still there, I can never regret anything more than regretting my departure that day, although I assure myself that this kind of behaviour is normal after such an emotional departure I find my heart still heavy, and when you miss anyone for two whole months It has to be love...

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Chapter I
Unexpected Place

I opened my fuzzy eyes; I was still in a daze. In hangover I guess. I drank too much last night and maybe partied too. I tried to remember what happened last night in disco, but I don't seem to remember a thing. There was a strange taste in my mouth. I touched where I was actually sitting. Oh, a mattress. Wait a second BED? How did I turn up on a mattress from roadside? My eyes finally pop open, and I can now see a little. I'm in a room, a big room. And the most peculiar part is the square mirror is placed right in front of the bed. I saw my reflection, my hairs are all over my face, I had a fair complexion, but my face looks black. My cheeks are no chubbier, there're all inside and I looked a little... umm... malnutritioned. My head suddenly starts to ache, and I wonder
where I am? And who bought me here?
The room looks simple, White paint on the wall matching with light coloured furniture, and a huge round bed. Suddenly, the door starts to open a creaking voice enters the arena. And a homily accent of food fills my nose, my head still ache. I guess some one is getting me food and the food smells just like my home, I wonder who's the one who took me here? Who's the stranger? Someone gets inside with a tray in a pair of black tees and sneakers, He smiled and the way his lips curved made me feel weird, as if he'd known me since childhood.
"Good Morning!" he said grinning
I look at him with confusion filled in my eyes.
"Must be feeling strange? Coffee?" he said and handed me a cup of caffeine.
"Thank you" I said in a low voice my eyes fixed on him, he's okay, not my types but okay.
"You don't look like a house run-out" he said taking a sip of his coffee
"No, I am a house run-out" I said
"But, Why?" he asked
"I was stupid, idiot, I thought managing a life would be too easy, I thought I would be free to do anything I wish, and I thought it was cool to run out of your house" I said "But, I was wrong" I finally finished looking elsewhere, as my eyes start to moisten.
"So, why don't you go back?" he asked
"I-I can't they will think I'm weak, coward. That I can't handle even myself" I said
"Maybe that's why I rescued you" he replied
"huh?" I asked confused by what he was trying to say "You were lying on the street last night, attracting males, totally drunk, you didn't look like you would sleep on footpaths, so, I brought you here" he finished, shifting his gaze from my hand to my face, I saw his eyes demanding attention, care. I looked away.
"Thanks, something would've happened if you weren't there" I said he nods
"I know" he said "I think you should wake up now, Lazy bones!" he went on.
"I usually don't wake up this early" I said
"Its 3:30 of the afternoon" he grinned
"WHAT!?" I yelled Gosh! 3:30 that's insane!

Exactly after an hour, I was out sitting in the living room with him. Totally unaware of what I should say or do, I wanted to say something, but I felt afraid, scared that I might say something wrong. I do not see life as an adult only as an immature and I really am a child misunderstood.
"Could you please speak up something? I'm getting hell bored" I finally said. He looked up from his laptop at me and smiled. He's very mature; he thinks twice before speaking anything and tries to keep quiet most of the time, he's the kind of man I haven't seen before. He took the remote and switched on the TV, and turns back to his laptop. Ugh! Ignorance is killing me. I switched off the TV to go inside; I noticed his face turned towards me as I got up to go. I wanted another tour of the house, this place's so beautiful! Some walls light green, some light blue, everything matching with the light coloured furniture except for one room it had a wallpaper, A kind of wild wallpaper. I would have liked it only if I was a bit younger; I wonder what made him stick wallpaper like this? So childish! One like crazy and wild teenagers have in their room, I noticed that nothing in this house was dark. Everything was so light, so pure, as if I'll touch it once and it'll go dirty. I stare at the wall for a long time until I heard a voice.
"That was my brothers" I was startled to hear his voice so suddenly, I turned and found out that he was much too close than he should be. I maintained my distance "Your brother?" I asked
"Yeah, he passed away a year ago" he said his eyes still on the dark wall. He looked hurt, demanded attention, affection, care and, Love.
"Oh" I said "I'm so sorry, for you" I replied I didn't know what else to say in a situation like this.
"You shouldn't be" he said and left the room without another word it was then when I realised how alone and lonely he really was.


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Do tell me how it was... 😳

Edited by Painted_Sky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omggg monku
u got another one
wowww
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The prologue was amazing...i mean so sweet and wonderful
i loved the last lines of it
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The first chapter was awesommmeee
lovd the way it came out

waiting for the next part
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my god tu 6th me aisi stories likhti thi...maahan ho aap maate :p
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kitne likhegi meri maa !!!
pagal ho jayegi tu ek din.. itne saare likh likh ke
vaise the prologue was amazing o was the first chapter...
loved it
continue soon
and do PM me

thanks for the PM

PS. baki works padhne main time lagega..
maine RES kar diya hain.. will try to unres soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome concept
update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey this is really very nyc..
super..

i just loved it..

continue soon

thnks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the concept is awesome
really looking forward for this story
update soon
n yeahh!! chapy 1 was awesome
i enjoyed it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hmmm looks nice...

beautiful concept...

Rey lonely..but he looks quite sincere types...

and Kria.. spoiled...but innocent...

m looking forward to read this.. :)

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