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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

my my my...
nesii.. u wrote it wen u were on 6th or 7th!
oh godd!!
u r amazing gal..
i wonder who cn write soo good at this early age..
ur story alrdy made me stuck to it...
i'm soo luving d starting..
plz plz plz do cont soon..
abhi be ready for get pokes for ds story too..😉
sachi mein i cnt blve.. soo good yaar..
i'm highly impressed..😃👏

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Supab concept
intresting n way to different
love it

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Rashii maate...ek aurr...
Vry guddd...
I likd the proluge;;;
mast n bikul soothings lines h...
1st chappy ek dum suzerb h...
Drunk kriya n mature rey = awsm combo ;)
mice story h ji..
Countinue soonnn
p.s thang godd..atlest iske updates jalsi milenge :D

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Princess_Devil

@Princess_Devil

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

intresting concept...'

lyk to read more...

thnx fr d pm...

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

waisey i've a biggg question..
umm.. yeh normal luv stry hain ya paranormal??😉
oyyee daant na mat.. 😆😆

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: --Orchids--
waisey i've a biggg question..
umm.. yeh normal luv stry hain ya paranormal??😉
oyyee daant na mat.. 😆😆

saali tere dimag me yahi ghumta ha na??
I wrote ye jab meko malum b nai tha ki paranormal kya hota ha :P

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Painted_Sky
saali tere dimag me yahi ghumta ha na??
I wrote ye jab meko malum b nai tha ki paranormal kya hota ha :P

oyee kya karoon yaar.. tuney itna royally thrilling n confusing intro diya hain ki socha pooch hi leti hoon.. 1st cmmnt mein hi socha tha poochungi but thn socha tu firsey pagal ho jayegi meri cmmnt dekh ke.. but thn realized pagal ko aur kya pagal banayungi.. so asked..😆😆
nd not my fault.. if a gal cn write so good at this age.. she might hve known wat paranormal is.. nhi??😉😉

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: --Orchids--

oyee kya karoon yaar.. tuney itna royally thrilling n confusing intro diya hain ki socha pooch hi leti hoon.. 1st cmmnt mein hi socha tha poochungi but thn socha tu firsey pagal ho jayegi meri cmmnt dekh ke.. but thn realized pagal ko aur kya pagal banayungi.. so asked..😆😆
nd not my fault.. if a gal cn write so good at this age.. she might hve known wat paranormal is.. nhi??😉😉

Ab tu mujhe ched mat.. mujhe sharam aajayegi.. 😳

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Painted_Sky

Ab tu mujhe ched mat.. mujhe sharam aajayegi.. 😳

oyee hoyyee.. meri sharmili nessii..😉😃😆

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Tu 6th me stories likhti thi??? Hain??? 😲

Are you sure??... you are indeed a writer material babe... 👏

Its really very well written & amazing ... 😃

Although some confusions are needed to be cleared off... but still its fab...😉

Kriya n rey sath rahenge... toh kitna achha rahega... 😛

achha hua .. kriya ghar se bhaag aayi pehle hi... 😆