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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
interesting..

loved the prologue and the chapter

looking forward to it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
oyyee nesii..
yeh wali story jaldi cont. karna..
alrdy likhi hui hain,na??
dare u made us wait to long..
achcha nhi hoga bata rahi hoon..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2 : How Life Changes!



He was 26, a rich, successful person and an incredibly handsome man. I was 19, grew up in a middle class family, house run-out and a type of girl who guys usually avoid. It wasn't that I hated him. He was good, a bit mature compared to me. I still wonder what threw us together: Fate. I still need to enquire a couple of things about him. Like his life, His experiences, His Troubles, I usually felt afraid, strained that I might say or do something wrong like I did on the night I left home. It was a long story he acted as if he knew everything about me while I still doubt whether he knows my name even. He provided me food, gave me shelter, and helped me that night but what did I do for him? And the question that still bothered me was why was he doing all this for me? It wasn't that I knew him. He was a complete stranger a guy who helped people for the sake of humanity. But, what he was doing for me wasn't Humanity nor was it the help. It was different, something different from what it seemed to people my phone beeped suddenly, I totally equipped in my thoughts picked it up without even seeing the name of the caller,

"Hey Kriya?" I heard and the next passing moment I understood who was on the other side.
"Mickey?" I said just to check whether it was her or not

"Yeah, it's me I've been searching for you, where are you?" she said Michaela Watson my dearest road side friend she belonged to a rich background but because lack of attention and affection from parents she had escaped her home and had been living on streets, Also she was a addict usually I helped her out of hangovers and get her out of drugs but now I guess no one would be there to help her out.
"It's a long story, Where are you?" I asked
"My parents rescued me from a disco last night. Maybe I'd be going to re-habitation centre in a couple of weeks make that months" she said
"Oh well, I'm looking forward to see you" I said
"Me too, after that night's party you have like, Disappeared. Don't tell me they rescued you too" she finished
"No, well, as I said it's a Long, long story" I said "So you're enjoying in that great palace of yours?" I continued
"No, well, yes. I had 4-5 servants over at my room since the morning. My parents were extremely disgusted when they saw me drunk last night, and well, they were horrified when they eventually saw that I was suffering from malnutrition" she finished
"Gosh! Perfect Drama" I said wanting to tease her

"Shut Up! When my dad's friend saw me at Street 2 and when he saw me at the disc last night he directly reported dad, that's how it happened." She said a wanted a bit more of information
"So, what're your plans exactly?" I asked
"I really don't know. Well, Now that I have your number lets plan and meet someday, only if these morons allow me out of this house" she said

"Definitely. You are very fortunate to have such a family Mickey" I said "My parents don't even care whether I'm alive or not" I continued
"You think so, eh?" she said "Well, need to hang up right now. Will definitely give you call after asking Mom-dad about it, okay?" she said
I nodded my head stupidly as if she could see me finally I hung up saying a bye.

"Who was it?" he asked with a serene expression
"Oh, Nothing. Just a friend of mine" I said
he nodded wanting to say something, but before he could speak
"I want to go out, Sick of being here all day long" I said "Fine, Lets go for a walk. Change your attire" he said more like he ordered I left without another word.

The walk was short. We were just roaming around on the empty streets of New York. I saw him looking at a supermarket

"Want to go in?" I asked
"Yeah. Lets" he said
I followed him my coat was wrapped tightly around me. The early winter was sprawling I felt weird. I felt a little out of place. But still if he wanted to roam around, what could I do?

Roaming around in the supermarket I kept looking at different things and remembering that time when I used to plead mom to get me everything I liked. It was then when a finger tapped my shoulder. Startled I looked back to see who it was
"Kriya?" Molly-My 16 year old younger sister said

"Moll?" I asked confusion filled in my voice
"Where have you been?" she asked
"Where do you think I would be?" I smirked, Molly gasped
"Don't tell me you were on the road side all this while?" she said
"Wow! Guess what? That's the right answer. Mom shifted house, didn't she?" I said I saw molly's face falling down "Say how's the guess gal?" I continued
"Yeah. She did, but it wasn't because of you Kri, it was.." she started to explain
"I do not need an explanation part moll, it's all right" I gulped down a tear
"Come back Kri, for god's sake come back" molly pleaded I shook my head
"State one good reason for me to come back?" I said

"It's-It's just that, we miss you"
My face turned towards her she went on "I Miss you Kri, did you and mom ever realize how would I live without you? You didn't talk to me about leaving home, you just told me. Have you ever wondered how I'd be?" she said
I bit my lower lip just to make sure none of my tears escape my eyes
"You should get going molly, It's enough late already" I said
"That's it? Is that all you have to say? To shoo me off so that you don't have to give an explanation for what you did?" she said tears visible in her eyes
I pulled her into a hug, it was the only thing I could think of. Molly and I have been best friends more than sisters. It was then when I realized how much my decision has affected molly.
Telling her to never tell mom that she met me and promising to stay in touch I bided a good-bye to my sister, a friend in reality. We were walking on the streets of New York when I suddenly realized the silence between us was too much I dare not to speak a word
"Who was she?" he asked
"Who was who?" I asked although I totally understood what he meant
"The one you met at the super market. Was she a friend too?" he asked
"No!" I snapped "No, she's my sister" I said
"Sister? You have a sister too Kriya?" he asked
"yeah, wait. How do you know my name? I never told" I said confusion raging inside me every passing minute "I heard that girl taking your name" he said
"Were-were you listening our conversation?" I asked "yeah, kind of" he said
"what kind of? Yes?" I asked
"yes" he said and continued walking while I stood there in complete shock!

"Reyaansh Singhania" he said
"That's an unusual name?" I said
"I'm an unusual man" he said shrugging a shoulder "who gave you that name your Parents?" I asked sitting on the couch comfortably
"I never saw my dad, and I was 7 when my mom left me all alone at my relatives place and told me she would be back" he finished
"she never tried to find you?" I asked a kind of shame in my voice
"I can't say No, she sent me a post card on 10th birthday it said happy tenth birthday love mom' the card said that she was in San Francisco that time, nothing else. I remember I was so happy to receive it. It was the last time I got to know where my mom actually was. After that I had no idea where she was" he finished.
"D-Do you miss her?" I stammered, I stammer all the time, whenever I go nervous, my words spread up. I hate my stammering it makes me feel like a kid again
"Sort of. Well, I guess I'll sleep now" he said
"Good Night Kiddo!" he smirked and disappeared inside his room. Why Kiddo? What's wrong with him?

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Pretty long update?

Haha.. im just changing the names.

nothing else.

now another four days before i update.

Do tell me how it was

though i sucked at writing as a kid ! ;)


P.S- I'm impressed with the cmmnts u guys left. thank ya! and now Don't forget to hit the tab!


I still remember writing it and then hiding it..

my parents were freaked out wen they found it.. they were like "Kahan se aaya ye dimaag me?" hahahaha..

i was so nervous..

damn! i can never forget that time..!!

Edited by Painted_Sky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
ha ha ha
i can imagine ur face n ur parent's face
when they caught u
lol ubharte writer ki toh watt laga deti hai duniya
well the chappy was awesome
really somewhat emotional
i can imagine ur parent face when they wud had read about
living on streats n taking drugs
ha ha
well awesomely written
and well plotted
it was awesome
update soon

Edited by crazysky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
SUpab update
but i feel something different
rey ase bhi q kar raha tha jese kria koi thief ho
n last me kiddo
kya wo kria ko pahle se janta he?????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
amazing one
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
wow awesome update
loved it
it some what really emotional
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
oho
itna jaldi update...
i am impressed !!!

omg !! your parents caught you 😆😆
must have been an awkward moment

the update was amazing..
so well written rashi
good one..
and iss baar sabse pehla tera unres kiya hain..
so be happy 😉

PS. short comment
i have to go urgently 😕 sorry
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
wow...jaldi update dene k liye many many thank you

well the update was really very nyc.. rather awsome
loved it..

last mein kiddo.. wow superb

thnks for the pm..

update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Awesome part ...
Loved it ...
Waiting for more ...
Continue soon ...

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