Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 83

Originally posted by: pt311288

i am asking u to introduce some more problm bcoz vnc they are united nthng much can be done n i rilli dont wan ur ff to end soon ...
n even if they are united do promise me to write more ff on ashlok u are just awsm i guess i told u vnc u r blessed vn ...

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev

no pressure on you dear!!! even i dont want the whole story to be in shlok pov i just need it at times... you when it can be totally justified!!!

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

plan pura ulta hogaya

his anger escalated her pain

now what

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev

why does shlok want astha to confess.. he can do it too na??? i think shlok and astha should not meet soon ,because i want shlok to be so guilty that the moment he see astha, he will just shout "i love you" to her😊 and i think gauri will say every thing to shlok now! she is really upset on shlok and swati... and poor swati, if gauri see her now she have to take a lot of yelling😭
you know when astha said she will leave shlok for ever i was worried, i thought she will try to commit suicide... but thank god she just left for some time, to her parents i guess😃

She left i just hope shlok finds her soon
gusse ne sab bigad diya
do update soon

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Good night dear. Sweet dreams...

😊

Hi jeenia...this is first time in my life i joined a forum,n d reason is you... i m just in love with your writing ... was not able to resist complimenting you ,you are too good in expressing the feelings of the characters.. the way u explain their gestures their eyes it says a lott more than their words...👏

Originally posted by: jeenia123

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">OMG>>itni jaldi? FF khatam ho jayega...
I have nothing to write after they unite... but a lot before that...</font>

Kk .. Take ur time.. Bt I can't bear astha cryn..
Thts t. 😭 .. Anywy after
Confession their wnt b much 2 write na.. Ts k
Bt pls dnt make astha cry anymore.. Nd dnt finish de ff
Soon... I love ths ff.. Ts my daily routine 2 ur ff @ 12.00

jeenia where are u??
waiting for your update

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

She left i just hope shlok finds her soon
gusse ne sab bigad diya
do update soon

Ye gussa hi to shlok ka dushman hai..
Just wait for some time dear