Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#801

Originally posted by: Serviana
I am close to cry now 😭
Love your writing.

Please don';t cry, will make you laugh in next. promise...
Thanks a lot dear..

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#802

Originally posted by: LECHU123

oh...no😭 😭 next week is going to be tough for us😕

but dont worry we will wait😊
and give us extra long updates when u come back!

Ya.may be tomorrow's update will be extra long. if i could complete it upto the point i want...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#803

Originally posted by: Ladygirl
Thanks for the update more than the update, I love to read your comments to your readers. You give more hints in your replies. Keep it up. Shlok is dense, no girl will confess when you have a girlfriend with you and you are acting to kiss her is too much.

Shlok is infact stupid. he doesn't know his plan is weird..more weird is upto the point, he is taking it...
don';t worry asthaa will give her proper reply soon.
tit for tat...Thanks a lot dear..

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#804

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik
Muje barbaad karne k or bhi kai raste the,
naa jane usne mohobbat ko hi kyu chuna...

Dammit aastha...you left shlok...you are really very stubborn...and Shlok you cross all the limits...you give her only pain...she can't handle it more...and now you are in guilt...agar wo nahi keh rahi hai to tum keh do...What's big deal. ...per ab kya fayda jab chidiya chug gayi khet...awesome update yaar...I like theatre part...Aastha can't see them together...and shouting on them...
Tumhara plan 2-3 year ka leap lene ka to nahi hai na...Aastha kahi set ho jayegi or shlok usse find karta rahega...Please don't do this coz I hate separation...hayee shlok now what are you doing dear...

Mana ki teri nazar me kuch bhi nahi hu main,
Meri Qadar unse puch
Jinn ko palat kar nahi dekha sirf Tere Liye...

Yaar... both are same egoistic and stubborn...
And no separation.i hate separation...
Yaar she has left just one our ago... kahin gayab nhi ho gyi..
No leap... it was in last FF, not applicable now...i don;t repeat same methods in one forum...
Just wait till tomorrow...

Thanks for your lovely words... both suit for Aastha only today...

Kehte the wo hamari saanson ko bhi jante hain,
To hamari Mohaabat ko kyon na pehchaan paye wo?
Rehte hain wo kisi aur ke AAgosh mein khush,
Par hum kisi aur ki bahoon mein ho kya seh paynge wo?😉

Edited by jeenia123 - 11 years ago

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#805

Originally posted by: roshanii
just gr8

thanks a lot dear, i feel you are angry with me for my PM... I m sorry for that... but i told what i felt as i love to appreciate as well as criticize to if i feel so...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#806

Originally posted by: Amna1234567890
Omg.. Pls make thm 2gthr fast.. Can't wait

OMG>>itni jaldi? FF khatam ho jayega...
I have nothing to write after they unite... but a lot before that...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#807

Originally posted by: .Siham.
Awesomeee yaaar <3 what a updateee

Thanks a lot dear

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maivelli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#808

superrr se bhi uperrr update
liked it very much infact loved it
plz dont let ashlok meet so soon let them face few more problems ...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#809

Originally posted by: pt311288
superrr se bhi uperrr update
liked it very much infact loved it
plz dont let ashlok meet so soon let them face few more problems ...

Thanks a lot dear. so i got 11 out of 11?????😉
But let them meet yaar, they themselves are big problem for each other... what will problem do in front of them...