Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: priyavin
Are you serious? Astha's gone, Is this Shlok's dream? Hope it is...

So many misunderstandings! I dont want the ff to end but want them to unite... passionately

Are you listening, jennie😊

I don;t write very much dream sequences dear, i am not good in that because dreams can be hot passionate or anything you can imagine beyond real life...
they will unite soon, do';t worry but let the story continue yet...
I listen to my each and every reader and i value them a lot...because due to them only, i get courage to write so much...

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#812

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA
Heart-touching update.

thanks a lot dear...

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latha_555

@latha_555

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#813

love your little mini spoliers when responding to comments. No update for 3 days??? Bummer!!! Your story has become part of my everyday routine...5:00 pm Jeenias update!

hope too much time does not pass for them to meet up again...wonder if gauri and varad will say something to shlock now.. 'im glad you have twists in mind cause i dont want the story to end.

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#814

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Yaar... both are same egoistic and stubborn...
And no separation.i hate separation...
Yaar she has left just one our ago... kahin gayab nhi ho gyi..
No leap... it was in last FF, not applicable now...i don;t repeat same methods in one forum...
Just wait till tomorrow...

Thanks for your lovely words... both suit for Aastha only today...

Kehte the wo hamari saanson ko bhi jante hain,
To hamari Mohaabat ko kyon na pehchaan paye wo?
Rehte hain wo kisi aur ke AAgosh mein khush,
Par hum kisi aur ki bahoon mein ho kya seh paynge wo?😉

Nice shayari jeenia...she left one hour ago...soo kya tum airport seen create karne wali ho just like jane tu ya jane na or Qubool hai...I loved airport romance...🤗

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maivelli

@maivelli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#815

Originally posted by: jeenia123

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Thanks a lot dear. so i got 11 out of 11?????😉
But let them meet yaar, they themselves are big problem for each other... what will problem do in front of them...
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i am asking u to introduce some more problm bcoz vnc they are united nthng much can be done n i rilli dont wan ur ff to end soon ...
n even if they are united do promise me to write more ff on ashlok u are just awsm i guess i told u vnc u r blessed vn ...

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meera.rajeev

@meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#816

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Well a shock..from no one's point of view...
yaar its quite difficult to write from one person's poit of view..i had tried once i my rishbala FF, i know it should not be discussed but i started from RK's point of view and really missed the charm in between, as it was missing Madhu's emotions...then i had to make it general .
yes, if some condition like this repeats agian...i will give udates like this only...,

no pressure on you dear!!! even i dont want the whole story to be in shlok pov i just need it at times... you when it can be totally justified!!!

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#817

plan pura ulta hogaya

his anger escalated her pain

now what

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meera.rajeev

@meera.rajeev

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#818

why does shlok want astha to confess.. he can do it too na??? i think shlok and astha should not meet soon ,because i want shlok to be so guilty that the moment he see astha, he will just shout "i love you" to her😊 and i think gauri will say every thing to shlok now! she is really upset on shlok and swati... and poor swati, if gauri see her now she have to take a lot of yelling😭
you know when astha said she will leave shlok for ever i was worried, i thought she will try to commit suicide... but thank god she just left for some time, to her parents i guess😃

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#819

Originally posted by: latha_555
love your little mini spoliers when responding to comments. No update for 3 days??? Bummer!!! Your story has become part of my everyday routine...5:00 pm Jeenias update!

hope too much time does not pass for them to meet up again...wonder if gauri and varad will say something to shlock now.. 'im glad you have twists in mind cause i dont want the story to end.

Thanks a lot dear..this is a wonderful complement. ..I loved to listen...infact who hates to listen self praise. ...😉

Don't worry dear... you will get teaser tomorrow evening...ok..may be two...

I will be back on Tuesday. ...and don't worry...Tuesday's update is already ready...

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#820

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Nice shayari jeenia...she left one hour ago...soo kya tum airport seen create karne wali ho just like jane tu ya jane na or Qubool hai...I loved airport romance...🤗

Yaar air port romance is a bit old now... something allag? Just wait since morning...