Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19

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meera.rajeev

@meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#741

I wanted to see that dance ni8 scene from shlok's pov. Thanks 4 that. Lovely update dear!

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#742

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev
I wanted to see that dance ni8 scene from shlok's pov. Thanks 4 that. Lovely update dear!

Thanks a lot dear...

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meera.rajeev

@meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#743

what are you going to give us on the next update????😊 and please do try to narrate the story with shlok pov a little😊

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#744

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev
what are you going to give us on the next update????😊 and please do try to narrate the story with shlok pov a little😊

Well a shock..from no one's point of view...
yaar its quite difficult to write from one person's poit of view..i had tried once i my rishbala FF, i know it should not be discussed but i started from RK's point of view and really missed the charm in between, as it was missing Madhu's emotions...then i had to make it general .
yes, if some condition like this repeats agian...i will give udates like this only...,

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#745

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA
Awesome update.

thanks a lot dear...

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Dee James

@DJames

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Posted: 11 years ago

#746

Hi,

I simply love your story and I am a sucker for best friends turning into lovers stories. You are such a fabulous writer. I just have one suggestion. Can you get your work edited grammatically before posting it? That would make it super awesome :) and this is definitely not bashing :) Great going. Keep it up!

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ANAM

@khuwahish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#747

AWESOME UPDATE... KEEP IT UP!!! 👍🏼

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#748

hmmm m jeez so much planning to make her confess

ulta padgaya tho?

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#749

Originally posted by: ipkkndfollower
Hi,

I simply love your story and I am a sucker for best friends turning into lovers stories. You are such a fabulous writer. I just have one suggestion. Can you get your work edited grammatically before posting it? That would make it super awesome :) and this is definitely not bashing :) Great going. Keep it up!

Hi...first of all..thanks a lot dear and welcome to my story. .secondly I try ti do minimum mistakes but I have a problem. .I can't reread my writing again and again... but iread again after posting and try to remove mistakes... but will take care from next time...