Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 73

Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan

awsum dear

Originally posted by: Ladygirl

Hey,

Nice update, have read all your 3 updates at one go today. I still think Shlok is too much, he is the one to always tell her he loves swati when aastha want to move on he want to make her jealous. Very bad.😉 make him a jealous too.

Originally posted by: mmjjppss

Wow...nic update yaar... all my confusions r clear...swathi is so sweet... i wish to c shlok jealous instead of astha... it would b nic if the plan backfires him... shlok to win always as in the show...please make both jealous nd confess at the same time yaar... when is the next update...👏

Originally posted by: sireesha76

Wow, really wonderful update yaar

Originally posted by: latha_555

im so glad you wrote this chapter from his perspective...very nicely written...and i like how swati convinced him too...love the last part "Shlok smiled reaching back at his home and coming out of his memories...So the game begins Astha Kirloskar, to make you mine...

Originally posted by: meerab147

AWESOME UPDATE ONCE AGAIN.👏👏👏......


LOVELY LINES
Astha ye, Astha wo, Astha prepare my notes, cook my dish, choose my clothes, you can't go alone, you can't stand here, you can't eat this...and she? Same like you Shlok likes this, Shlok hates this, he will love this color, he will like this dress...he doesn't allow me to wear this...he doesn't allow me this...


I TOTALLY LOVED IT
WAITING EAGERLY FOR NEXT UPDATE😛😛😛

Originally posted by: jeenia123

thanks a lot dear...
shlok needed someone who may make him understand..
Varun too tried, but at that time he dismissed..
but this time he had to accept, he feels for Astha...
Just wait for the next...Its going to be fun as well a shot...

Originally posted by: LECHU123

superb👏 👏...that was a much needed chapter

now everything is clear

but dont make shlok's plan easy for him😆

he is just too much😉

awsome as always jeenia

🤗 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: niki795

can't wait for next... 😃

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thanks a lot dear... i am really overwhelmed... finally its Wednesday and i think you read all updates today...
next update tomorrow...