Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19

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Anusha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#731

Seriously yaar... U made swati the saviour today... Cant help but feel so proud about her...damn it ... U making one ff where there are no negative shades or characters...but still with drama...uff!! Ur one helluva writer...😉

Now that I read ur ff... Gonna start reading for my next exam with positive energy...thank you thank you thank you...for giving my daily dose of happiness and excitement...😃

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Riddhima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#732

Jaane tu meri kya hai, jaane mein tera kya tha,
Saath tere har pal, saath har lamha tha..

Jaane kaisi kasak hai, jaane kaisi tadap hai,
Kyu yeh aankehin num hai, jaane kaisa gum hai..

Hai dosti humko yakeen tha, dosti aur kuch bhi nahi tha,
Par kaise tujh ko bole, kyu chubhte hai pairon mein kaante,
Janaa dil jaana, kaise maine naa jaana,
Ki pyaar yahi hai, yeh jaane tu ya jaane naa...

everything is clear now...swati i love you...you are very nice girl i told you...you are supported your ex boyfriend to get back his girlfriend...bohot bada dil chahiye...and aastha is sooo lucky she have such good frdss...shlok your plan is already working...good job...but i think it's not too easy for you...tumhe bohot sare effort dalne honge...nice update jeenia...😊

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#733

Originally posted by: meerab147
yeah...all chapters were awesome as usual

thanks a lot dear...

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#734

okay now i like Swathi! She's a good friend! A catalyst to Ashlok! I can't wait for the Shlok's games to being! WHOHOOO!

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: Anusha16
Seriously yaar... U made swati the saviour today... Cant help but feel so proud about her...damn it ... U making one ff where there are no negative shades or characters...but still with drama...uff!! Ur one helluva writer...😉
Now that I read ur ff... Gonna start reading for my next exam with positive energy...thank you thank you thank you...for giving my daily dose of happiness and excitement...😃

Oh.ya. i hate negative energy around me... a happy going is better yaaar.moreover our shlok's arrogance and astha's big ego is enough na????

Thanks a lot once again and best f Luck for your exam...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik
Jaane tu meri kya hai, jaane mein tera kya tha,
Saath tere har pal, saath har lamha tha..

Jaane kaisi kasak hai, jaane kaisi tadap hai,
Kyu yeh aankehin num hai, jaane kaisa gum hai..
Hai dosti humko yakeen tha, dosti aur kuch bhi nahi tha,
Par kaise tujh ko bole, kyu chubhte hai pairon mein kaante,
Janaa dil jaana, kaise maine naa jaana,
Ki pyaar yahi hai, yeh jaane tu ya jaane naa...

everything is clear now...swati i love you...you are very nice girl i told you...you are supported your ex boyfriend to get back his girlfriend...bohot bada dil chahiye...and aastha is sooo lucky she have such good frdss...shlok your plan is already working...good job...but i think it's not too easy for you...tumhe bohot sare effort dalne honge...nice update jeenia...😊

Tu Bole Glass Aadha Khali,
Mein Bolu Aadha Bhara,
Mein Bolu Kitna Saara,
Tu Bole, Zara Zara..
Mein Bolu Din Hai To,
Tu Bole Raat Nahi..

Baat To Wahi Hai Naa,
Bass Wahi Baat Nahi..

Baat To Hai Bass Yahi Ki,
Meri Baat Bass..

Jaane Tu..Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Naa,
Maane Tu..Maane Tu Ya Maane Naa

Ultimate song... really suits these two stupids...
Ya, he will have to put a lot efforts...
Thanks a lot dear...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: .Siham.
awesomeee updateee :)

thanks a lot dear

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#738

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
okay now i like Swathi! She's a good friend! A catalyst to Ashlok! I can't wait for the Shlok's games to being! WHOHOOO!

Thanks a lot dear...ya she is a good one as i hate negative characters...