Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#711

Originally posted by: niki795
my first place gone today😭

But second is not bad even dear.moreover you made a hat trick already...no problem..better luck tomorrow...

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Ladygirl

@Ladygirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#712

Hey,

Nice update, have read all your 3 updates at one go today. I still think Shlok is too much, he is the one to always tell her he loves swati when aastha want to move on he want to make her jealous. Very bad.😉 make him a jealous too.

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mmjjppss

@mmjjppss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#713

Wow...nic update yaar... all my confusions r clear...swathi is so sweet... i wish to c shlok jealous instead of astha... it would b nic if the plan backfires him... shlok to win always as in the show...please make both jealous nd confess at the same time yaar... when is the next update...👏

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#714

Originally posted by: jeenia123

But second is not bad even dear.moreover you made a hat trick already...no problem..better luck tomorrow...

lol ... Will try tomorrow😉😆

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sireesha76

@sireesha76

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Posted: 11 years ago

#715

Wow, really wonderful update yaar

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latha_555

@latha_555

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Posted: 11 years ago

#716

im so glad you wrote this chapter from his perspective...very nicely written...and i like how swati convinced him too...love the last part "Shlok smiled reaching back at his home and coming out of his memories...So the game begins Astha Kirloskar, to make you mine...

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#717

AWESOME UPDATE ONCE AGAIN.👏👏👏......

LOVELY LINES
Astha ye, Astha wo, Astha prepare my notes, cook my dish, choose my clothes, you can't go alone, you can't stand here, you can't eat this...and she? Same like you Shlok likes this, Shlok hates this, he will love this color, he will like this dress...he doesn't allow me to wear this...he doesn't allow me this...

I TOTALLY LOVED IT
WAITING EAGERLY FOR NEXT UPDATE😛😛😛

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lechu

@-LECHU-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#718

superb👏 👏...that was a much needed chapter

now everything is clear

but dont make shlok's plan easy for him😆

he is just too much😉

awsome as always jeenia

🤗 🤗 🤗

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#719

Originally posted by: niki795
awesome update
loved it
swathi is such a nice person
loved the way she made shlok understand his love for asthA
so he is planning to make jealous astha
waiting for next updates... It will be fun to read
continue soon
thanks for the pm😊

thanks a lot dear...
shlok needed someone who may make him understand..
Varun too tried, but at that time he dismissed..
but this time he had to accept, he feels for Astha...
Just wait for the next...Its going to be fun as well a shot...