Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

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Great. Waiting 4 d next part

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jeenia123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: latha_555
first of all thank you for updating soon, we get excited when we see updates to nice stories!!!
i liked the chapter, shlock and aasthas relationship is perfect but now i can understand that he def has no such love interest for her and because he has made that clear she trys to take out that sort of thoughts as soon as it enters, although it is clear her ideal partner would be someone like shlock. Shlock seems a true friend who will do anything to help his friends but it seems he is choosy in picking friends in the first place...i can see how and why his parents feel scared that his friends might take advantage of him. i wonder how he will feel if aastha started dating someone else. i like how in this chapter it shows just how close they are as friends...loved the way varun hinted and winked to shlock about being driver...

too much to ask but hope next chapter comes just as quick...sorry sorry just wishful thinking!

Thanks a lot dear..ya he is true friend to all... but what next will be a shocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: lachii
interesting and cute😊

Thanks dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: LECHU123
lechu early!
hayee
superb yaar
astha is in infactuation phase😆loved it
continue soon
omg shocker update😲
jeenia should i make all those comments upto 15 th page within 5 minutes
so that i will get the update soon!lol😆
eagerly waiting

Thanks dear but update yk Monday hi milega

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Posted: 12 years ago

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😉😉Gr8 going...loving the pace of your story n your use of simple eng...and as Mr mohnish behl said "ek parka aur ek Ladki kabhi dost nahi hote",,,,;-)😉update soon..