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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ambarsariya

<font size="4">Congratulations!!!!! Dear,,,</font>

<font size="4">I toh just loved this romantic starter...yaar...</font>
<font size="4">I can't get enough of this story...</font>
<font size="4">all credit goes to you!!! Mind blowing updates!!!</font>
<font size="4">plzzz</font>
<font size="4">plzzz</font>
<font size="4">plzzz</font>
<font size="4">continue soon!!!!</font>
<font size="4">will be waiting!!!</font>


thank u so much dear..
Yeah i will may be updated today..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
finally v.mom is giving manvi another chance
nice virman and sameer moments
continue soon
preccap is nice


thank u so much dear..
I will updated dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhi48

Ahh finaly u updated
Update ws awesome as usual
Yr manvi itni drti q h viru se,plz make dem a normal couple in wich she starts loving his company rather den getting nervous ol d tym
Plz plz update something too hot n romantic
N plz ab jldi jldi update,itna w8 krne pr bhi aapne ek hi part update kia
Chlo i ll manage dys tym bt olz nxt tym 2-3 in one go


thank u so much dear..
She is not always scared from him..but as just last night he know abt her past nd hell angry on her... So she is just scared to loss him nd didnt want to hurt him more... She wann handle him slowly nd carefully...
I will updated tonigh or tommorow morning...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Awesome Update..!! liked Virat but i guess he needs to soften..but then his CS is like this..Interesting Precap..Waiting for next!


thank u so much dear
i will try to soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
update pls waiting to know about the msg and Virman bonding with sameer
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dairymilk12

update pls waiting to know about the msg and Virman bonding with sameer


yeah i m trying to write...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MAanvi just starring at him with respect nd guilt..guilt for underestimating his love nd care..such mad love what he did her..he just want her love nd trust nothing else..he trying his best to change himself for her..she felt that its not eassy to erase his pain or change him completely..specially in small time period..he need time to change his thinking nd madness..of course that worse twists of his life make him like this..nd also her past nd she also reason behind his this nature..but she know she filled his all pain nd worse memory with her love..she never leave his side..she smile to see virat nd sameer convo..
V-btw..let me see aap aaj ki party ke liye kya leke aye ho..?
S-arey haa..vahi to dikhane aya tha..ruko..
Nd he saw him his clothes..
V-think little-wow..big boy aap ki pasand to bahot achchhi hai..white blezarwoh bhi purple ke saath..yaar big boy apki aur meri pasand bahot milti hai aur shayad mere paas bhi asa kuch tha..he said with checking his clothes..
S-look at maanvi nd then virat..giggled-hehehe...arey...rockstar ye tumhari hi choise hai...
V-look at him nd then maanvi with little confuse-matlab?
M-smile at him..
V-meri choise kaise?
S-arey..rockstar..yaad nahi..apne apne pahele music consert me bilkul ase hi kapde pahene the..he said excitly..
V-lost in thoughts little nd look at sameers clothes..smile-yeah..right..lekin..aap ko ye kaise yaad pata?
S-hehehe..maine apke sabhi concert dekhe hai aur di ne sabhi DVDs lake rakhi thi..aur woh first concert to humne saath me baith ke live bhi dekhi thi..kyu di?
Sameer ask her..hearing this virat imigeatly look at her..she saw his all performances?..she first look away as he look at her but in next moment she look back at him nd smile..he cannt belive that she did that for him..he smile widly..he felt only her love towards him this time..she is mine..from starting..
Their eyeslock broked as sameer speake loudly..
S-arey bolona di..
M-look at sameer nd nodded with smile..
S-see..
V-smile at him..
S-cutly-waise..ek baat samaz me ni aai..
V-aur woh kya?
S-aap ke ghar me itne sare room hai to di aap ke room me kyu hai?
V nd M-imigeatly look at eachother..maanvi didnt know now how to explain him all this..he he know abt marriage nd all bcz as wedding planner he already played KBC with her she explain him everything but here they got married without his present..virat understand that all..
V-woh kya haai naa sameer aapki aur mujhe aap ko kuch batana tha..
S-look at maanvi nd then him-kya?..plz agar di mujhe wapis delhi le jana chahti hai to nooo..mujhe aap ke saath rahena hai..plzzz..pouted
V-smile-arey nahi..koi tumhe mujhse alag nahi kar raha..
S-to?
V-actually..woh..aap ko pata hai shaadi kya hoti hai?..marriage?
S-haa..kya rockstar..tum bhul gaye kya?..main big boy hu..mujhe sab pata hai..di bataya tha..jab ek ladka ladki se pyar karta hai to usse shaadi karke apne saath apne ghar le jata hai aur phir woh life time saath rahete hai..right?
V-smile-right..big sach main sab janta ai..
S-woh to hai..said proudly..
V-hmm..so..maine aur aapki di ne shaadi karli hai..
S-kya?..kab?..kaha?..main kaha tha?..band kaha tha?..mandap kaha tha?..sweets kaha the?..lights?..barat?..nd woh shaadi ka khana?..he said in one breath..
V nd m-with shocking look just waiting him to stop..
V-relax big boy..
S-aappp...logo ne..sh..sh.shhh.shhaadi ki?
V-haa..woh..woh..haa..woh aap ki di mere saath nahi rahena chahti thi aur aapne to promis liya tha ki main aap ke saath hi rahu to..to..to isliye maine unse shaadi karli taki aap mere saath raho..
S-smile widly-aap ne mere liye di se shaadi ki?
M-shook her head negativly..smile
v-of course..
S-yeiyye..nd hug him..
V-hug him nd smile..
S-suddenly broke hug nd innocently-lekin maine asab miss kar liya?
V-isiliye to ye party rakhi hai..aap khub enjoy karna..
S-smile widly nd kiss on his cheek-thank u..
V-smile nd brush his hair caringly..
S-lekin..
V-ab kya lekin?
S-shaadi to woh karte hai jo ek dusre se pyar karte hai..to aap dono ne kaise ki?
V nd M look at each other again..uff..ye bachchey..
V-fuu..actually..woh tum ho na..
S-matlab?
V-matlab..koi baat nahi..tumhare liye shaadi ki hai to pyar bhi tumhi karvadena..waise bhi ab tum big boy ho..right?
S-proudly-haa so to hu..done..main hu naa..smile widly..
V nd maanvi smile at lest all done..
S-chalo abhi se karte hai..
V-kya?
S-pyar..
M-kya?..shocked
s-haa..
M-sameer?
S-di..shaadi ki hai to pyar to karna padega naa..apne hi kaha tha na ki payar ho tabhi shadi complete hoti hai..
M-look at virat with helping face..
V-sameer payar karne se nahi hoat..
S-to kaise hota hai?
V-aa...woh mujhe kya pata..
S-arey haa apko kaise pata hoga..
V-hmm..ek kam karo abhi jake thoda rest karlo main apke liye kuch khane ko bhejta hu phir party ke liye ready bhi to hona hai..phir baad me aram se sochna okay big boy?
S-haa ye achcha plan hai..u r best rockstar..
S-kiss on maanvi's cheek nd virat's cheek nd left room happily..
As he left virat lock the door nd come near maanvi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I m not in mood but still i try to wrote..
Hope u like it...
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V-pull her more close to by waist nd lerned closer to her..husky...passionate voice-..bolo naa..kyu?
M-as he bent towards her she try to puss herself back she cannnt as wall cannot move..;)..looking down...blushing...feeling nervouse-woh..woh..main...woh..
V-hmm...tum..tum...age?
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next in AM-2...
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute update.
love virman and sameer conversation.
sameer is really cute.
precap look intersting virman romance can't wait for it now.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Niaksharma


thank u so much dear..
She is not always scared from him..but as just last night he know abt her past nd hell angry on her... So she is just scared to loss him nd didnt want to hurt him more... She wann handle him slowly nd carefully...
I will updated tonigh or tommorow morning...


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