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Nurshad.kajen

@Nurshad.kajen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: --Orchids--
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">my dear lil brothr...😃

do u really need to know my opinion regarding ds ff?? 😆
i guess i've alrdy said dat i'm too much in for ds story..😃
the title is too catchy to resist..😳
awsm selection of title bhai..
smply loved it..👏
nd d concept is thrilling as well..
dying to read further...
update super duper soon..😃
i juz luv dark heroes too much..😆😆
t.c bhai..
luv uu...

nd before finishing my banter.. let me cheer for my achievement..
yeayyy.. i'm 1st... 🥳🥳</font>

apko toh 1st hona hi tha..:p...lol..thanks di oh and btw its 16+ actually

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Nurshad.kajen

@Nurshad.kajen

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

INTRO 2 : Let's Meet Miss Riddhima Modi

Everyone in America knows Ridhima Modi. She is the only child of the 1st Indian oriented US senator Sidhant Modi and former Miss America Tammanna Modi. They are Perfect Examples of Rich, Famous and Powerful Family in America.

Ridhima excelled in everything she did . She was a brilliant Student at the Thomas Jefferson high School for science and technology and later she acheived a degree in economics at Havard University.
Very Impressive!! Isn't it?

What else? She gave pride to her parents by reigning the miss universe tittle at the age of 23. Her beautiful smiling face was plastered on billboards, buildings,TV Screens and all over America. She is an idol for every American girl. She has beauty, brain, elegance and class. All girls love her and men adore her.

She was 14 when her elder brother died due to a car accident. Her family started to fall apart because of that tragedy. her father was in denial. He devoted himself to his political career and just occassionally stayed at home. Her mother took almost a year to overcome her depression. Despite all these Ridhima remained strong. she helped her parents to overcome the loss of her brother. After a year the family slowly started to normalize and learned to accept their loss.

she surely knew how to make her parents happy also. She made sure to obey her parents wishes. her father wanted her to take up economics degree in preparation for her future political interest and she did and also excelled in it with flying colours in havard university. her mother aspired her to be a beauty queen like her. So ridhima attended a training school for beauty pageants and participated in the contest. she did it with such an excellence that she nailed the miss universe crown eventually. She wanted to please her parents so much in order to have a happy family again.

But every daughter has her own flaws. she made an unforgivable accusation to someone 5 years ago. she ruined a person's life and has been living in regret since then.. every night her conscience doesn't let her sleep.. she wants to turn the clock back and wishes she would have never ever laid her eyes on ARMAAN MALIK.

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so, here ends the introduction..
hope u all will like this extended intro too..
thank you every one who've liked & commented on previous post..
by the way it's a 16+ story..
so, whoever below this age group, plz read at your own risk..
i just wanted to mention it from the beginning so that it won't create any fuss later..
and whoever wants pm for updates plz do mention as i'm really quite irregular... so, till next part bye guys..
take care & happy reading..
😊

Edited by Nurshad.kajen - 11 years ago

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

res..😆😆

UNRES..😃😃

bhaii.. too good intro..
u juz chose one of the strongest plots!
i juz luv dark stories..
nd it's gonna be a dark luv of armaan..
superbb...

nd riddhima did a mistake.. oh no! i juz hope it was an unintentional mistake..
i cnt see ridzy bad, u knw..😛
joh bhi ho.. i knw its gonna be an awsm luv story..
update soonish bhai..
plz ..
zyada wait karwya na toh i'll go for strike..
lol..😆😆

t.c bhai.. lots of luv,
di..😊😊

p.s - bhai.. nw happyy?? i unres-ed my comment..😆😆
waisey ek tum kam the joh didu bhi meli tang khichayee karing!!
huh.. see see.. i edited on d very same day u posted.. main itni bhi slow nhi..😆😆

Edited by --Orchids-- - 11 years ago

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Priyanka

@Prizi

Achiever

+ 30

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Res

unre*

wah wah wah ridhima's intro is superrrbbb.. Jst superb...

Hehe i'm 19 toh i can read 😛

Edited by Prizi - 11 years ago

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Priyanka

@Prizi

Achiever

+ 30

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-
RES...😃

di humesa kaise????

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Nurshad.kajen

@Nurshad.kajen

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Mere pyare sis aplog unres karoge nah..mujhe doubt ho raha hai?

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Aliena

@BlessedSoul

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Hey Nurshad I know I am bit late. But his was just amazing FF. The way you described was superb and the way you described Riddhima Modi for change from Gupta was flawless too. Loved the basic concept of your ff.

The characterisation was intense and dark both for Armaan and Riddhma. Just loved it from core. Quite anxious to read more.

Love

Your

Aliena Di