An ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread One* (COMPLETED)

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Samyxx

@Samyxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#881

What's with Khushi..?

Mind blowing update dear..

Loved the intense kiss!

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#882

Phewww. . . The update was just amazing. . .i too held my breath at certain instances like arshi. . and the brother he lost 😔 is tat aakash ??? nd wat abt her family ??? painful flashback awaits i think . . nd khushi's family may b they abandoned her or something like that ?? why am i even thinking 🤣

nd the Kiss *blush*

khushi is different here and m liking it again. .

where did she go ?????????????

thanks for the pm waiting for the next update

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@aapkibandhu_Vas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#883

awww kisss
dat was perfectt
their convo was amazingg
loved each and every parttt
its very simple to imagineee
awsomee work
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sindhu

@misscrazyfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#884

awesome aweosme awesome updates...

in the 2nd update ..mannat ki chaabi episode combing with teez wala episode glimpses of arnav taking care of khushi...

i just loved it...

in the 3rd update omg omg omg ARSHI FIRST KISS WAS THE BEST PASSIONATE ONE,,,

arshi feelings...their thinking r fab

but did khushi leave him really??????😭nooo

while reading ur story i feeel like i am along with arshi in sheesh mahal..

loved it loved totally

waiitng for next

diwali dhamaka is sooper

happy diwali ..hope u had great diwali

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#885

hmm...where is khushi running to... and whats she hiding...
and what happened in arnavs life..i have the same questions yet again... its turning more mysterious... cont soon...

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jdd1959

@jdd1959

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Posted: 11 years ago

#886

Beautifully written update...

loved it..

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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#887

Awesome update...
Just by seeing the title my heart started beating at lightning speed... THE KISS...
Both are on the same ground... They know their feelings about each other... and I m happy that they are not denying it...
For khushi, there is something that is holding her... That must be related to her past...but what?...
Anjali is worried about arnav... Her concern is valid... Such sudden change in arnav is very uncharacteristic of him... This is what worrying her...
And then the kiss... That was sizzling... loved it..
But where has khushi gone?
Eagerly waiting for the next update...

Edited by sincereme - 11 years ago

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amimus

@amimus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#888

Wow Juhi I am in love with this story already. It's so wonderfully written.

I am curious to know about Khushi's past and also where has she disappeared.

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#889

Arnav is having a hard time staying away from Khushi. But why does Khushi feel she needs to stay away? And I hope she didn't run away permanently!

I loved how they went about visiting all the local eateries of Lucknow. The way you write the details about Lucknow makes me feel that I am visiting the place as well. 😊 Great job! The kiss was so well written.

Also sounded like Aman has a soft spot for Anjali...

Waiting eagerly for the next update...

Thanks for your time and effort in bringing such an awesome story to us.

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#890

First off, previous comment unres-ed here.

"Curioser and curioser", as Alice would say.

I just cannot put my finger on the abiding mystery of Khushi Kumari Gupta. It's started bothering me more than the secrets of Arnav Singh Raizada. Why indeed did she not go to the fireworks display? Why is she putting up this bright facade? She does not regret her feelings-- she only regrets the futility of them. Why is that? What is it that makes her believe that her situation is completely hopeless?

And then there is Arnav, who had finally begun to heal. Who had finally found an escape from whatever it is that haunts him.

Anjali said the reason he'd taken up the renovation of the Mahal is the same as the reason he's been going out and getting involved with a woman. I wonder, does she mean distraction? Is it just a way for Arnav to forget and move on? Drown his sorrows?

Oh and before I forget, I like the vibes between Anjali and Aman. NAICE. 😆

Oh what a tattle-tale this Aman is!

But coming back to our lead couple, I agree with TG, kinky Sr. Raizada. 😆

And Khushi's reaction! It is at such odds with her open and frank self!

And the kiss! Awwwie! It was everything a first kiss should be. And that was EASILY one of the BEST after-kiss scenes I have EVER read in fan fiction.

I LOVE LOVE LOVED Khushi's reaction, and what she said. That was SPOT ON.

But she's GONE! She gives me this Cinderella vibe ya. Like she's a maid in the day time and a princess when she's with him. OH WHAT IF SHE'S A COURTESAN? Like a tawaif? That would explain SOO many things. Like her interest and skill in Lucknawi arts and crafts, her Kathak prowess (that she felt proud about after a long while), her colourful vs pale clothes, her knowledge of street food in Lucknow, her belief that a relationship with Arnav is impossible, maybe even the missing family!

So currently, we have two serious questions.

a) Who is Khushi Kumari Gupta?

b) Why does Arnav Singh Raizada feel so desperately guilty about his brother's death?

TFS

P.S. And I hope you know how hard it will be to wait for the next chapter.