An ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread One* (COMPLETED)

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#871

both parts are awsumm loved it

thanks for pm

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#872

Juhi...first things first my heartfelt apologies in getting here so late. I have been having crazy hectic last few days and i didn't want to do a rush rush job of reading your story and commenting on them.

As you so rightly said in the prologue this story is so different from all the other magical rides that you have taken us on...This looks like a mysterious tunnel with lots of passages and i have no sense of what is up in store for me next.

In fact somewhere during the 1st and 2nd part i almost asked myself if khushi was a Ghost??😆 And now you have made her disappear without a trace ab bolo hum kya soche?😕

This khushi is one mysterious woman who holds more secrets than Arnav also probably? I can understand her knowledge of Lucknow but her knowledge of sheesh mahal too astounds me. So if initially i thought there was no entwined past between Arnav and khushi i want to question that idea now. Kuch connection toh zaroor tha aur hai between the two of them.

I loved the kathak scene that you wrote it was brilliantly written and the manat ki chabi was much better than the original. Arnav was such sweetheart here rather than a obnoxious arrogant ass.

And what do i tell you about that first kiss...😳 Passion written with sheer brilliance.

Also i like this Arnav he seems to have a very troubled past and is still haunted by its bitter memories but he is still willing to accept that maybe just maybe Khushi could be the perfect answer to heal all his wounds

I can see reading the updates how much time you would have invested in this story given the intricate details that you have given to us about a city and its environment from where you are miles & miles away.

Cliffhangers are a given in any Juhi update 😆 but the this one has a cloak of mystery too.

A great story you have going on here Juhi and i can't wait to see which cliff you will leave us on in the next update???😉

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#873

Beautiful update...

Can't wait for the next one !

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#874

Juhi, You never fail to surprise me...Just read the last two updates and Man! am amazed and you really got me hooked to Lucknow. That was truly a lot of information. If I ever go to Lucknow, and experience any of these dishes or go to any of the places you have mentioned in your story, I will certainly remember you...

About the story -- its truly magical feeling one, it has a kind of magical mysterious aura to it, a thriller sort of feel too. I think from the last two updates the story is based on Arnav's perspective and feelings. They both have a past, Arnav's is bit released but Khushi's is totally a mystery...I am waiting patiently and I am sure you are going to keep suprising me again and again...love you for that!

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#875

I just read the parts in a go. .

a glimpse !!!! title impressed me a lot. .

the single question he posed nd her answer which is also a ques!!

so both are aware of each other o well

and very soon they will get attuned to each other !

i was surprised that khushi started the convo first. .

and i was waiting with bated breath that who was on the phone. .

bt relaxed a lot seeing chotey. . 😉

thanx fo d pm

i hav to still read 2nd chap. . will do that in a while

also got pm for 3rd itself. . 😛 running off to read

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-MIMOSA-

@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#876

Is she really real??...Khushi that is???

I don't know ever since I have started reading this I have this feeling...

Ok...U can laugh all u want but thats what I feel strongly...may be she is a time traveller...

Her dancing... the painting...being alone in the Mahal when all were out...

then the "KISS" and ...then she disappears...

...I am more than mystified...I think more than Arnav...😲...

Tumhe apne readers ki Sanity ki kasam...Update soon...

PS: Are u from Lucknow...if not, then kudos for writing so beautifully about the mouth watering Awadhi cuisine...so much so that now the foody in me wants to go there...Lucknow tourism owes you...😊

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#877

omg so much happened in the update.. i saw the title and had this dhak dhak going on throughout reading the stunning update.. i loved it how arnav didn';t hold back his feelings and khushi brought a big grin on my facewa when she went to arnav with a proposal to visit the foods .. and the foods.. yum yum.. u made my mouth water.. lol.

and the kiss kya bolun.. and khushi asking arnav not to apologise just made it better.. khushi truely is a mystery here,and i knw u'll reveal the past when its time.. #varosa_hai.

awesome blossom update ..

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sudhareddy

@sudhareddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#878

Juhi absolutely stunning update

Kushi past was intrigued. She is not able to resist her feelings as well as supress it too. Kushi refused to go for Lunch with Arnav but she only suggested alternative to the same.

Loved the Lucknowi food description and Arnav and Kushi exploration of various food at various places around Lucknow.

Aman and Anjali suprised see change in Arnav. Anjali is very happy as her Arnav is coming out of shell and she scared of speed at which those changes occurred.

Both Arnav and Kushi had an mysterious past but they are well aware of spark between them.

The Kiss is very magical and mind- blowing.

Kushi told Arnav not spoil by apologising what happened between them.

What happened to her in past and what is preventing her to move forward that she has to run away from there after she herself said the Kiss was inevitable and beautiful ?

Wating for next update