An ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread One* (COMPLETED)

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varshapan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#901

oh this is getting to be really interesting.

there's more mystery around khushi than arnav at the moment. she seems so much more open to life and yet there seems to be too many layers to her.

waiting eagerly to hear her side of the story.

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mishti_17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#902

That was a wonderful update Juhi.. 😃 There is something abt Arnav's past.. He has been fighting with it since long... 😒 But the way he and Khushi are bonding.. Wow.. Just makes it dreamy.. He asking her out and she politely saying No but then also coming up with a better idea.. Wow, the way you explained the street food of Lucknow.. Ive started to get hungry here now.. So many delicacies.. 😎And then their kiss... Haiii.. So romantic.. Anjali wants to see him happy.. I wonder what was that happened in their lives that changed them so much..

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A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#903

Lovely chapter, as always😊

I absolutely loved the way you described Khushi's thoughts about wanting to enjoy having a man's attention. But why does she think that it's impossible to be with him, and why is she not FREE to pursue a relationship? And also, what regret was she reliving at night. Khushi is a very enigmatic character and it seems Arnav has also noticed that side of her.

Arnav is matching is my thoughts, why is Khushi not celebrating Diwali outside with everyone else?

I don't remember how much Khushi knows about Arnav, but if he's so mysterious, how does she know he's from London. She said Lucknow is like "aapka London."

I'm glad that Arnav is accepting his feelings for Khushi or whatever it is that he feels for her. Instead of retreating into his shell further, he's putting himself out there, which is a good sign if he wants to move on from his past.

What a passionate first kiss😳 Khushi said it was inevitable...I guess even she has accepted this thing between her and Arnav, but where has she gone off to now. Of course, you end the chapter with a cliffhanger, so I will anxiously wait until the next chapter!

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#904

Hello!

I can't thank you enough for your support so far!

I hope to see you soon on Thread Two.

Thread Two

-Juhi.

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eversweetdreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#905

You are an amazing story teller.

In the middle of my studies but u have me intrigued.

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littlemissstar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#906

it was a beautiful update..
loved it..
the kiss was beautiful..
it is really beautiful the way they both feel each other..
waiting fr the story to unfold..
waiting fr the next one 😊

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#907

You know what was my condition as I started off with the update? My hands were a bit clammy, my heart-beat pacing up as I read further. You got me seduced by your writing😲

The societal norms are something which held khushi back from openly accepting his offer but then she knew she just cannot refuse him for anything! So she came up with something which seemed professional but was far away from it, in my views😛

And arnav is himself surprised by the way she is affecting him & his decisions. But glad to see that he wants to experience it rather than dismissing it😉

They kissed! Well I hadn't thought it would be this early😳😳😳 But then you always surprise us..I think there is something more to her than what we are seeing! I wanna read next sooon😃 Sorry if you felt this comment was uh...well a rambling. I really wasn't able to gather my thoughts about the update😳

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#908

Loved it amazing updates...i hopekushi comes back soon...can't wait to read more

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#909

ah finally he is opening up to her

but what of her past?

what of his past?

wow spectacular kiss but where did she run too?

it seems she was not ever staying at the Mahal

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Revathy Sugathan Nair

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Posted: 11 years ago

#910

Amazing darling 👏

Khushi dancing and Arnav watching made me go ☺️ But I knew he wouldn't ask the pertinent qn - why was she not outside with everyone else?

K is smart 😉 The way she finds a way to go out together without causing suspicion and then Arnav realising that he is kinda 'falling' for Khushi 👍🏼

Anjali's reaction was at first surprising but I can understand her feelings as she doesn't know Khushi 😳 Aman is somewhat right too as only they know how Arnav has been during and after the tragedy and are reluctant to believe that he could have moved on so fast 🤔

Arnav's past is clearer now but K is getting mysterious by day (by update I mean) 😕 What is so bad in her past that she cannot be with Arnav? I believe she refused going out with him coz of her past and not because the people are traditional. Otherwise she wouldn't have kissed him back like that 🤔 and WHAT A KISS!!! Ehm, Senior Raizada had interesting tastes - no wonder he forbid the kids from going to the garden 😆 But it provided an interesting catalyst here 😉

What's with K's past? Please reveal it soon and get us out of our misery 😭

AND I was RIGHT - the MAHAL is the SEDUCER here 😎

Edited by revathysugathan - 11 years ago