An ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread One* (COMPLETED)

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Disha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

nice update well its interesting like all ur other works

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Breath-Mark

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

I'm intrigued. Great start which bring loads of questions in my mind.

Can't wait to read more. 😃

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

Bliss!

Beautiful, and full of mysteries.. Hahaha.. I always wonder how you manage your reader's curiosity without sharing anything. I always found it very hard to keep my zips sealed in that matter.

Loved reading this and once again, I am surprised with your knowledge about Lucknow and the craftswork. You always enlighten such long lost art-crafts with your stories. And yeah, I know you will give the credit to google for that, but still you are the best with your descriptions! Admit it😉

So, Orange eh! One of my favorite fruit lol. And seriously, I was imagining Khushi in that Orange Salwar kameez which she wore on Payal's wedding day. She looked stunning in that outfit, no wonder ASR was been left spellbound!

Both were feeling some kind of weird connections between them and I always love the way you write their first meet or glimpse you say, with so much perfection! 👏

2 weeks passed, and they are meeting now?

That was something huh! AAhhh, loved Arnav's thought process about Khushi and Moonlight! 😳 The man is very romantic at heart, I can see a romantic-fied Arnav in the future? May be?

So, loved the first chapter and waiting for more. I am not guessing that caller. Well, Is that Anjali? Or Nani? Or Dadi? Or his wife? Girlfriend? Okay I am not making sense😆

Waiting for the next chapter.. Keep 'em coming!!

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Sonia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

he followed her around, with his eyes, and she felt it so strongly, that's the magic you create every single time you write about arnav and khushi. I felt as if it was all happening in front of me, like i was seeing it happen. so beautiful

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Dhanya C Babu

@dhanyac

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Posted: 11 years ago

#345

awesome...

loved it...😊

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Navimalik

@Navimalik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Awesomee

loved itt

continue soon

thankx for pm

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@debby_11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

you have no idea how much you make me happy with your writing..the feeling is always great..i have no proper words to describe this feeling... you are just a fantastic writer... i loved tge concept.. the start is mind blowing :)

advance mein sorry will be irregular for a month my comment may reach u late semesters starts after 2weeks...but still i will try

n i m extremely happy dear...love you

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#348

*curses her AD for making her super late!

I think you answered my earlier question J, it is not Khushi who is trying to seduce Arnav and it ain't Arnav who is trying to seduce Khushi either. It is actually YOU who is trying to seduce us, and well you don't have to even try because we are all well and truly seduced!😆

Is it even possible to build so much intrigue and mystery within the span of one chapter? I read the chapter but my mind is asking so many questions. Khushi's persona man everything about her is mysterious! Her entry in the mansion, Arnav's curiousity and in-explainable anxiousness at a mere glimpse of her, her interaction with the lovely Kashyups, her getting hired and then finally getting that nick name of chamkeli was showcased so remarkably well, I was left awestruck. This whole setting has a aura of magic and mystery. Heck even Arnav and his whole shutting off the world attitude and being wary of meeting people is raising 100 questions in my mind. J this SS is definitely unlike your other work.

Arnav and Khushi's equation seems almost unreal, they are perfect strangers yet they spoke to eachother as if they know eachother, as if they are linked. Is this a past connection or is it Pechle janam's connection. Khushi comes across as the person with the answers regarding their connection then again it is only my guess at this stage. My mind is working up a 100 theories and I am baffled. I have never had to think so much about a story that has only just began! This is what you do J like I said before this is how you roll and I am loving it. I can't wait to unravel more of this journey with you, the only thing is that waiting will be a little harder than usual. If only I had a remote control and could forward the day to bring by Saturday sooner, I would be a happy camper! Ah well since I have no such remote I will wait for SAT with bated breath!